This is the preface of my story. Does it sound good. It has been nagging me forever to just do this story so know I will please tell me what you think!
Bella's POV
AGE 6
They were dead, both dead. But I didn't care, I still had him. Though he was the one that killed them. Did they deserve it? Probably not. Should I be afraid of him? Most likely. Do I still love him? With all my heart.
"Get up girl, you have school today. I know you're awake." He said sitting down on the side of my bed.
"Why? School is so boring anyway." I whined throwing the cover from over my head.
"Okay, well, since today is Friday you can, how you say, slide. But I'm hungry." He said. He wanted blood.
"Okay, I can help." I yelled going into the last door in my room. My hunting clothes. "You want a girl or a boy?" I asked poking out my head.
"Let's get a boy, they have more blood." He smiled. He was beautiful. Unnaturaly so, but, who was I to say something?
He was mine, and mine only. Yes he was.
He was my Kol.
That's the preface. Tell me if I should continue. If it is continued next chapter she will be older! 17 I believe. Till next time