This was adopted from maximumridefan111 the first 5 chapters are by her and then it's all me I hope you like it

disclaimer: Well last time I checked I was James Patterson so no I do believe I don't own Maximum Ride

Max's POV

You could smell the fine mist of water that lapped below under my feet. I was on a bridge right now staring intently down at it. The squawking of the sea gulls indicated that it was sometime in the morning. Grabbing the railing I flipped myself on the other side, so that nothing was separating me from the water. Tears brimmed my eyes. I have always hated my life. I've been the one to always pick on. I have never been the most popular, haven't even had my first kiss yet. Yet, here I was about to kill myself because of the constant bulling. Taking a deep breath. My last breath, I jumped. Just like a bird about to take flight, problem was that I didn't have wings. I squeezed my eyes shut. Memories flashed before my eyes. I was always fat and ugly, why would anybody care about me? My parents didn't even care about me. Just left me to live life alone without any help. My dad beating me, till I was limp. Mom screeched at me for no reason. How everybody hated me. I let out a soft cry just as I hit the freezing cold water. I opened my eyes to see the last bit of my life just as my head cracked against a rock.

-one word, two syllables, Bacon.-

"Is she awake?" Squeezing my eyes shut I was expecting a large headache, nothing came through.

"Where am I? Am I in heaven?" There was a giggle from what sounded like a girl. Opening my eyes I began to sit upright.

"Yes, yes you are!" I looked around just as my eyes adjusted to the light. My eyes locked with another girl eyes. She had big deep brown eyes, with brown hair that a girl would kill for. Mocha colored skin and I smile on her face that I thought would make Hitler run for his money.

"Um. Hi?" She broke out into a little squeal.

"Hi! I'm Nudge but my real name is Monique but you see people use to have to nudge me to get me to stop talking when I use to be alive you know? Anyway you're being given some wings and halo and a little makeover! Gosh I love makeovers they are so much fun! You look like you could a model by the way your gorgeous! And-" I brought my hand up and slammed it shut on her mouth. She looked at me and then I felt something wet on my hand. Whipping it away I exclaimed.

"Did you just like me?" shaking me hand she began to laugh like crazy.

"Yes I did, now what is your name?" Still in disgust I answered.

"Maximum Martinez." She smiled brightly.

"That's a really pretty name!" I laughed and turned to see a reflection of myself in the mirror. Wow, I looked well different is a nice word. I had mid length back dirty blond hair, I was about 5'8 so model height, and instead of my usual brown dull eyes they shone of excitement sparks. I was skinny, for what felt like the first time in my life, and I looked like a model. I was touching my face when Nudge screamed loud and clear in my ear.

"Are you listening to me?"

"Sorry what were you saying?" She rolled her eyes.

"I was saying that we are going down to Earth so are you ready?" I nodded walking in pace with her. She popped out her cream colored wings.

"Ok, so um, what do we do?"

"Well first thing is first, know your wings be the wings," I nodded still listening, " then we walk over to that little cloud over there, and we jump. Simple as that. Also when we hit the ground it won't affect us, we will look like normal people, not that we already don't but you get it. We also can't use our wings in front of people its against all the laws." Nodding again I began to calculate how far it will be until I hit the rock bottom when I saw her staring down at the cloud. Well, this should be fun.