The time stopping tunnel
"It was a normal, boring day for all the softpaws and Sharpclaws. But for one softpaw named Rain Storm, it was the day she would either die or become a sharpclaw. As Rain traveled through the tunnel to meet Rock, she imagined what he would look like. She started to think of him as a handsome gray tom with great, big amber eyes. Later, Rain found herself in a large cave with a river. "Hello, Rain Storm" said a raspy voice. Rain whip around only to lay eyes on an ugly cat. For all she knew, it could be a hairless rat or mole. "This is not the first time I heard that." The thing said to a shocked Rain. "h-h-how d-did you d-do th-th-that" Rain said, shivering." Are y-you Rock?" the thing nodded. "You did not expect a cat to turn out so ugly, did you" Rain nodded. "Now it was time to get going""okay." "You know that you cannot return to this cave, right?" "Uh-huh" suddenly rock disappeared from where he was sitting. Best be on my way. Rain thought, then went into a tunnel and was cloaked in darkness. The next thing she knew, she was back in the moor. Rain turned and ran to camp. And to her surprise, everyone came rushing at her, covering her in licks and telling her that they thought she would never come back. The end. Now, let me sleep. You kits pestered me all day. Especially you, Fox tail" I looked at my brother with a smirk. "Oh, shut up, Melting Ice!" "What? I didn't say a word." I replied, trying to look really sweet and innocent. It looked like I had gas. "did mommy's little sparrow eat a bad rabbit again" Fox Tail mocked. Now it was my time to tell someone to shut up. But before I had opened my mouth, the elder telling us the story, Sun Light, stepped in. I instantly turn to Sun Light and asked her: "how did Rain Storm get out so quickly?" "Yeah, how" her brother added. "Some say that she already traveled through it before she was allowed to go. Others say she was led by" the elder stopped and shook her head. "You kits are too young to learn about that." I tilted my head curiously. "Tell us what?" "Others say she was led by…" the elder stopped and took a deep breath "By spirits". Hey, she thought, why are people afraid of spirits? "Sit down, I have another story to tell, and this story is not from the past, its from the future." I sat down next to her as Sun light began the story.
A/N: Is this better than the first version? Anyway, this story has more than one story in it. So if you hate reading stories that have more stories within them… THEN WHY ARE YOU READING THIS?! Sorry! That happens sometimes. Any who, until next chappie,
Gray
