About me:
This is my first FanFiction i have ever written, i have read tons of it though and i have used that as inspiration for my very own story.
As this is my first all the feedback i can get is appreciated. I Do this mainly because i just love the Grahamfield ship and i want to share my vision of it with the world. Further more this gives me a good chance to improve my English writing skills as well (i'm Dutch), so any grammar-like/ English writing feedback is welcome as well!
Intro:
The story begins at the end of Episode 2, Max has just talked Kate down from the roof. The story begins in Warren's POV but it will be in Max's POV mostly with some small parts in Warren's POV, or so i plan it to be, but i will let the feedback decide on that!
Thursday
Warren POV
When Warren saw Max coming out of the dorms with Kate on her arm he couldn't help but smile. Even though Kate just tried to kill herself,which made him sad for not paying much attention to her. In the end, Max, the girl he had a huge crush on talked Kate down and saved her life. So yes of course, he couldn't help but smile, this was just more proof how great of a person Max was. All the people ran toward the 2 so he didn't have time to talk to Max in their walk from the dorm towards the ambulance, but Max saw Warren and acknowledged his presence with a nod, then she got into the ambulance and went off to the hospital.
He wanted to text Max right away, but he figured he would spare her his text for now, as her phone would probably be blowing up by now due to everyone that had seen Max saving Kate. He'd check in with her later.
Max POV
The ride to the hospital was short an quiet, Max was holding Kate's hand, still adjusting to the fact that she just saved her friend from committing suicide. The ambulance worker was asking Kate some questions, but Kate, still in shock wasn't really responsive, when he went to ask Max some questions he noticed that she wasn't either, due to her being deep in thought.
Later in the hospital Kate got a room assigned, and Max was asked to leave the room while the doctor talked with Kate. Max went to sit at a chair and took her phone. She had about 100 messages, mostly from other students of blackwell expressing their support and telling Max they where proud of her. it's a bit late for that guys... She thought, and got slightly pissed, especially when she saw the text from Victoria asking to tell Kate that she loved her and she would soon visit Kate. You are one of the biggest reasons why she jumped Victoria, just STFU, probably best not to tell her that though, and just ignore the message.
Then she saw some messages from Chloe, expressing her guilt about harassing Max for taking Kate's phone call in the diner. Max responded that it was ok and that Kate was talking to the doctor now, and would be ok.
Then she saw a text from Warren.
Warren 7:58PM: Hey Max you are amazing, Kate is lucky to have you as a friend.
Warren 7:58PM: Seriously I'm pretty sure everyone has told you by now, but I'm so proud of you.
Warren 7:59PM: I don't know Kate that well, and now I feel shitty for it, I even feel more shittier for watching that video, even though I didn't enjoy it one bit.
Warren 7:59PM: You're like Michael J. Fox, but even cooler... and without a Delorean... but still Max you ARE GREAT!
Warren 8:00PM: Im guessing you are pretty busy right now, but maybe text me when you have a free minute and need someone to talk to? Im here for you.
Max couldn't help but laugh at his back to the future reference, That's pretty damn close Warren.. if only you knew.... She could use a bit of Warren right now, as hospitals freaked her out so she texted him back.
Max 8:40PM: Hey Warren thanks.. I'm waiting outside Kate's room at the moment. The doctor is talking with her.
Max 8:40PM: And well, as I don't have my license yet either I wouldn't have any use for a DeLorean unless you would be my monkey driver?
Warren 8:41PM: Haha hey Max! Hows Badass Max holding up?
Max 8:41PM: Im doing good I guess, considering... im just happy I was able to talk Kate down..
Warren 8:41PM: I cant imagine that would have been easy, still Kate's very lucky to have you.
Max 8:41PM: No it wasn't as easy as the movies make it look... im just happy that I'm pretty nosy I guess. If I would have payed less attention to Kate I probably wouldn't have been able to talk her down..
Warren 8:41PM: What do you mean?
Max 8:41PM: I'll tell you later about it K? not really in the mood for that now.
Warren 8:42PM: Yeah fair enough.. sorry for asking...
Max 8:42PM: Its okay Warren, I appreciate it.
Warren 8:42PM: Okay, do you maybe need a lift back to school when you are done there?
Max 8:43PM: Oh damn! Hadn't really thought of that yet, why?
Warren 8:43PM: Well.. I could come and pick you up if you like? When you are ready that is..
Max 8:43PM: That would be so great thanks!
Warren 8:43PM: Ok! Tell me when you need me to come and I'll be there to escort the princess back to her castle!
Max 8:43PM: Haha thanks Mario! But the doctor is coming out of Kate's room, TTYL ok? Ill let you know when I need that ride!
Warren 8:44PM: Ok! Good Luck!
The doctor informed Max that Kate was resting now and that a shrink would come for her tomorrow morning. He also informed her that Kate had to stay for at least 4 days as protocol stated, but that the talk with the shrink would determine whether 4 days where enough.
After that he asked Max some questions about Kate's state on the days before, Max told him that she had been secluded for a few weeks and that she'd seen Kate crying a few times. The doctor thanked Max for her help and told her that Kate was very lucky to have such a good friend. Then he told Max she could go and say goodbye to Kate and then let Kate rest.
So Max went in and took Kate's hand and told her goodbye, Kate thanked Max for talking her down and showing her that there were people who cared for her. Max told Kate to get some rest and that she would visit here in a few days, after that she left the room.
Max 8:56PM: Hey Warren I just said goodbye to Kate, she's resting now could you maybe pick me up?
Warren 8:44PM: Yeah sure I'll be there in a few minutes!
Max went outside to the parking lot and sat on the bench, she texted Chloe with the news.
A few minutes later Warren's blue car drove into the parking lot and Max got up and walked to Warrens car, she tried opening the passengers side door but it wouldn't budge. "Warren, your car wont let me in!" she said. "Ah damn, the door must be busted, I forgot the check the passenger side when I bought the car a few days ago, damn im so stupid!"
"Haha its ok" said Max, ill just climb in at the driver side" she said, and she did.
When driving back Max stared out of the window deep in thought when Warren interrupted her thoughts. "Have you told your parents yet what you did today?" he asked. "No not yet, I will do that tomorrow I think, right now I need a break from all the drama... I had enough drama for today" she replied.
"Yeah I pretty sure last weeks science test doesn't even come close the drama you've had today"
Max laughed at his silly joke.
A minute later they drove onto the dorms parking lot and got out of the car. "So uhm..." Warren asked while rubbing his neck. "Would you like to hang out for a bit maybe? Clear your head by watching the sunset near the fountain or something?" he asked.
"Yeah that sounds very nice!" she replied and they walked to the front of the school and went to sit on the stone stairs.
Max told Warren that she had been really worried about Kate, and that she felt she should have helped Kate way earlier, she told Warren she thought it was her fault. Warren responded in telling her that it wasn't her fault, and that Max was a great friend, she was the only one who went up to the roof, and probably the only student from Blackwell who hadn't seen Kate's movie yet. Hearing that cheered her up a bit.
Then she saw the beginning of an eclipse, when Warren saw it he freaked about a bit, because there weren't any eclipses supposed to happen today, and he would know...
Max told him she believed him and started to shiver from the cold. Warren saw this and put his arm around Max and hugged her warmth... Max was to exhausted to even think about it... They sat like that for a while watching the eclipse in silence. After a while they got up and went back to their dorms, saying each other goodbye and that they would talk more tomorrow.
Max went to bed feeling better then when she left the hospital, she really appreciates Warren for that, and fell asleep within minutes to the exhaustion of the day that she had.
If you made it here, great! i hope you like it and had a good read!
Any feedback is welcome!
