This is my first shot at a poetry/drabble...please review, let me know what you think.
Eien Ni
Emptiness
In a life full of joyous wonder,
A darkened pit exists in my soul.
Loneliness
In a world full of loving people,
A part of my heart has been taken away.
Darkness
In a place full of magical light,
My world was torn asunder.
All hope is gone.
In it's place rests fear and uncertainty.
Ripped from my side,
Taken from me forever.
I will walk this path alone,
And, for the first time, I will pray.
Pray that we shall be one again,
Eternally.
(FYI: Eien ni means eternally in Japanese!)
So there you have it! please review...you know you want to!!! Good, bad, whatever...I'm a big girl, I can take it! lol...
Thank you, chandell...I told you your writing inspired me to write! I wrote this after reading your "Final Battle" chapter! (well, once I stopped crying that is!)
And for Sazu-kun, LMI onee-chan, and madma...you know where I'll read your reviews, so don't be shy!!!