chapter one revised not happy with how the first chapter was written

work of fiction only

I took a deep breath and thought to myself ten minutes until i reach my sisters house and one week until i start my first year of did the time go i thought to myself as i drove down the quiet tree lined street.I parked on the curb in front of the was an older but nice house on a quiet residential was a large three story least ill have my own space I thought to myself.I wasn't sure about the arrangement when my sister had suggested it to me.I would be living with my sister and her two one was that scence her sister had gone away to schooland started filming the show she was Paranormal State they had barley seen number two was was that her two roomates were guys.I thought back to my last four years of high school and suddenly wished that I had made more of an attempt to fit I had a few close friends but for the most part i had stayed to now that I was leaving it all behind was i wishing I could change it 't get me wrong i was grateful foe my sister havingasked me to come stay with her.I was very much grateful.I wouldn't have to be in a dorm and i would have more time to myself.I was also going to get to do some much needed catching up with my sister.

I looked in the mirror before i got out of the blue eyes looked brighter than uasual aginst my dark auburn hair.I had been blonde for so long going this dark was a drastic but good change i thought to i said to myself lets get the hard part over with. I hate introductions I thought especally when its guys.I got out of the car and walked around to the trunk to get my bags it was then that I heard my sister Katrina's voice

"Katie"i heard her yell "Its so good to see you its been to long"she said as she picked me up and spun me around.

"Iknow Ive missed you so much"we hugged outside and made small talk for a mintue.

"Lets get all this stuff."What did you bring Kaitlin your whole damn room?"she laughed.

"Just kidding she said laughing "But you do have alot of stuff I hope your not planning on taking over my closet as well."I think i brought twice as much my first year dont worry she said.

We walked in the door and I looked around.I was happy with what i the immiediate left was the living room whitch was a mix of different furniture and suprisingly it all went very well my right there were steps that led upstairs and strait ahead was the headed up upstairs to what was to be my room.I had my bed and furinitur delivered a week ahead of time so that everything would be here when i arrived.A week on the couch at home had been bad enough i wanted to start out here my way down the hall i met well rather bumped into a tall good looking guy that I knew to be Ryan Buell.

"Hi you must be Katie good tomeet you." he said .

"Yes thats me"I said a little embarassed as i shook his hand.I wasnt known for my skill with the oposite sex especally good looking ones like were never one of my strong hoped that as time went on we would all become travel alot i thought to myself so mabe it won't be to awackward with me being here.

When we reached what was my room I was pleasantly my furniture was set up how I wanted it and Kat had taken the liberty of making my bed.I figured i could decorate it how i wanted once i got more other thing that i was quite relieved about was that my room was right next to the bathroomso i would't have to go to far after taking a shower.

Isat mystuff down on my bed and began to unpack.I had done some shopping in the last few weeks so i had twice as many clothes but it was a well needed shopping spree.I was going to make a real attempt to to fit in here and make friends and try to break out of this shelli was in.I figured clothes were a good start.

"Do you need help putting everything away?"Kat asked

"No but you can stay here and keepme company.""So tell me whats been up?Hows the show been?"you job?

"The show is amazing i really enjoy what im doing at first i wasnt so sure but now i wouldnt want to be doing anything else Im really happy"Kat said "How about you she asked.

"Im ok mom and dad are the same still at eachothers throats every minute of the day but you know how that is im just happy to be out of there."

Yeah I think thats why i didnt come home alot once I went away to school I should have though i feel like i left you there all by yourself to deal with everything and for that I am sorry that wasn't fair of me."

"Its ok kat you did what you had to do i might have done the same thing .I have spent the last four years of my life busting my ass so i could get out of there me there is no resentment I just hope now that im here we can be close and catch up."

"I would really like that .Its a little off the subject but we are having a few people over tonight and i just wanted to make sure it was ok with you being its your first night here and wern't sure of the exact day you would be here.I hope you will come down and have a good time you deserve it."

i sighed and thought to myself oh what the hell i might as well it might even be fun i had never been to an actual party.I looked at her and said yes.

Katrina's P.O.V.

I hadnt seen my little sister in going on two was my fault mostly and I felt really bad but to put it that our home life was disfunctional was putting it not going to lie i got out of there and didnt go back very often and when i did i spent the whole time wishing i hadn't come.I felt and still do feel alot of guilt about leaving Katie there to with it all by herself .When I saw her get out of the car I couldnt believe how much she had short blonde hair was gone it was now a dark auburn and was down the middle of her looked beautiful I had to admit she had grown up to be a beautiful woman.I was still taller than her but that wasntsaying much but all in all she looked good and I was happy for her.I realized at that minute that i was being given a second chanced to have the realationship with her that i had lost when I left

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