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I was lurking in the lightness of the afterlife. I was waiting in line for my chance to speak to the lord of the afterlife. I was going to ask him for my time wish. A time wish allows you to go back in time and live life again.
Only heroes get time wishes. I conquered Voldemort, protected those I had to, and taught at Hogwarts. I have been properly buried and honored, but I still feel doubt. I have never, truly, been loved. My love for Lily Evans is different. I will love her always, but she didn't exactly feel the same.
It is a long story. I'll spare you the heart throb. I want to ask for a second chance at love. I don't want Lily`s again. I want someone different. She was my past and I don't want to make the same decision as I did before. I need to start fresh.
"Severus Snape", a voice say`s. I get out of line and walk to the door.
I was entering the office of the lord and he said to sit.
"What do you want, Snape?", He asks carelessly.
" I would like my time wish," I said nervously.
" What for?", he asks curiously.
" I want a second chance at love. I died miserable and I can`t be pitied anymore," I said confidently.
The lord smiles and says,
" Sure, on these conditions. You must find a different girl than Evans. You must allow James to hurt you still. You still have to start out loving Lily and you will learn to love another. You must effect the past besides with the girl. If you can't at 20 years old, then you come back here for eternity. Deal?," the lord said.
"Why do I have to still love Lily?", I asked confused.
" Because then, James doesn't hate you," he said duly.
" What's bad about that?", I ask confused.
" Just do as I say!", he flustered.
" Okay, my lord. I agree," I said.
Soon I was whisked away to a timeless dimension and I landed at my childhood home.