I THOUGHT OF THIS STORY WHEN I WAS IN THE CAR AND A SONG THAT REMINDS ME OF ZAGR STORY. BUT THIS WONT BE A ZAGR STORY, FOR ZIM IS NOT REALLY IN THIS STORY….
ANYWAY, PLEASE REVIEW!
CHAPTER 1
THE EXILED BLIND ONE
Feet thumped on the ground. Four Irkens races toward the finish line, among them, a tall male with perfectly strait antennae, unseeing green eyes, a green shirt with baggy black pants, and a green and sliver PAK. But although he was blind, he knew where everything was, knew who they were, and what gender. He had no friends, and was often bullied. But if he won this race, the final assessment in the academy, maybe they would like him.
He just hoped his knees wouldn't give out. Sense the day he was hatched, his knees would give out, and he would fall. It was painful. But he was in the lead. Just a few more yards…..Crap! His knees locked up, and fell just as he got to the top of a hill, and rolled head over heel down it, crashing into sharp, hard rocks, and finally coming to a abrupt stop by a large rock. He couldn't move. It hurt too much.
The others didn't care. They trampled over him, jumped over him and the rock, and just ran around him. only when the other smeets pasted him, did healers reach him. but healers were called defectives because they had feelings.
He couldn't see them, but he knew they were there. He could smell them. it was two females, an elderly male, and an old SIR unit.
"Timm? You okay?" it was the elderly male, Bon. Timm could only moan in pain.
"Get him out of here. Bring him to room 3003 in sector 5." Bin commanded the girls. (A/N: Lol….it's fun to make it sound so…whats da word…..uh…smart? would that work….the whole 'room 30003 in sector 5'. Uhhh….scientific? hmmm….HEY! this is the first authors note in the story! Cool!)
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his blind green eyes blinked open slowly as pain sliced back through his leg. It was always his right leg, never his left. He found himself in a room in an oddly familiar place. One of the females was by the bed he was laying on.
"W…where am i?" he asked, looking around in vain.
"Hey! You're awake! Bon! He's awake! Whats his name again? Tom? Timm? Yeah, that was it! it was Timm! Hi Timm! You're in the hospital! For some reason, your knee locked up and you fell down a hill! Man, you were out for HOURS! we thought you were gonna die! And the Tallests say once you're aloud out of the hospital, you're gonna be banished to Earth because you failed so horribly and-"
"Sno! Don't pester him with your constant babbling! You're gonna make him get more stressed then he's already in, and that will only slow down the healing process!" Bon came in and snapped at the hyper little female.
Timm groaned. He had a headache, and was VERY sore.
Why was it him? why did he have be blind? Why did his knee give in the way it did? Why was the laughing stock of the whole empire. It used to be Zim, but a few years ago, the short Irken stopped calling by unknown circumstances. It confused everyone for a while, but after a while, people just decided they didn't care. But Timm was curious. He heard stories of Zim, and how he made some creature that ate Miyuki and Spork, rampaged over Irk, and caused a black out for a whole half of a planet.
Everyone called Zim a defective, but could THEY survive everything, and come out on top AND be that short? Could THEY be so confident and loyal to give their own life to do anything for the Tallests? Timm was a different Irken. Being blind, he saw the world with a different view. What they others thought of as stupid or a defective, Timm thought of it as a wonder or someone who was different and special in their own way.
That's how he thought of himself too. He knew he was different, and he knew others would give him dirty looks, even if he couldn't see them. but he didn't take offense by others' words.
"Head hurts…." He groaned.
"I want you to sit up –slowly, don't over do yourself-, and swallow a pill. It'll ease your pain, and help you sleep." Bon said. Slowly, as he was told, Timm sat up. His back hurt now. He felt for Bon, who handed him the small pill, and with shaky hands, popped it his mouth.
The second he swallowed it, he was out cold. Sno and Bon looked at each other.
"It's what the Tallests ordered. We have to send him away. To Earth." Bon sighed, his old age making him easily worn out.
"But can we send him away with some food and water? You know he's my brother, even if he doesn't recognize me." Sno begged.
"I know you care about him. he's your younger brother, and you know he knows who you are. He has a way of knowing. I think he would have made a great worker on the Massive, or as a healer. But we cant send with much food. Or water. Tallests say so." Bon replied gently.
"But…but he'll die without food or water!" Sno exclaimed.
"I know. that's why we're going to disobey the Tallests just once. We're sending him with his cloths, food, water, and a voice message telling him where he's going and why." Bon's eyes glowed with a spark that was like his days as a younger healer, and he remembered all the trouble he had gotten into.
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Timm slowly opened his eyes. He was moving. But how?
"Welcome to voice message!" a robotic voice made him jump.
"You have been left a message by Bon! The message reads, 'Timm, you have been banished by the Tallests, much to my disappointment. We had to give you something that would make you sleep, and send you away. You're going to Earth. We left some food, water, and cloths for you. I don't think we'll hear from each other for a while, so be safe, young one." the robotic voice continued.
"End of Voice Messages."
Timm blinked. He was banished? To Earth? Why? What had he ever done wrong? He blinked back tears. He wanted to go home. He wanted to go back to Irk. For once in his life, Timm was scared. He had never been alone before. He had been around others his whole life, even if they hated him. now, he would be alone. Earth had humans, but the only Irken there was Zim, and there a very low chance a blind Irken would be able to find him. and NO WAY a blind Irken could live alone.
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