God Father : House Of Ainz Ooal Gown
CO-Written by: Kudo Shiho- The Inspirer
Warnings: Vampire Ainz, Overpowered Ainz (Even In-Game), Overpowered Nazarick, Elements From Noblesee, Gore, Mature Content, Canon Divergent, Intentional OOC-ness.
Help! :
Hey guys and gals of the Overlord fanfiction community! Average Diablo here.
So, me and my good friend Kudo-Shiho are trying to come up with an Overlord story and we're honestly having some trouble with it, we're struggling with the game elements of the story, since neither of us has ever played an RPG or an MMORPG before. So, we don't have any idea how to include RPG elements into the story. Hell, I thought HP meant Hit Points until two days ago and I still can't figure out the difference between DPS and plain Damage.
You see, if you're a fan of Naruto, you would have stumbled upon one of Kudo-Shiho's stories and you might have noticed that the dude likes to mix series together and play around with the Canon of these series. Now we're having a problem with how exactly are we going to explain the Noblesee elements in a game format.
But, I think that I should talk about what Kudo-Shiho intends to change in the Canon before asking for advise.
Canon Changes:
*Ainz's character is changed, which means that he will be OOC in layman's terms. We figure that to make the changes make sense we have to change his real life and in-game back story. And those changes include:
-Momonga's avatar was a True Vampire who looked like Shalltear Bloodfallen's true form, his build wasn't for role-playing purposes like in the Canon, but for PVP instead, his character's Karma is – 100 (neutral~evil) . However, he defeated a World Disaster some time after the formation of Ainz Ooal Gown, which made him the only World Disaster title holder in the guild besides Ulbert Alain Odle. After obtaining the World Disaster job class, he also unlocked a new hidden class for the Vampire race known as "Vampire Lord", which increased his overall stats drastically and strengthened his character, and it also changed his avatar's appearance to have human skin and resemble human beings with the only difference being his scarlet-red eyes. With the powerful spells and self-buffs the new class provided him alongside the levels he took in the World Disaster class, he not only became the strongest member in the guild, but the strongest player in the entire game of YGGDRASIL. With the guild having him alongside Touch Me and the other World Disaster Ulbert, AINZ OOAL GOWN became the top guild in YGGDRASIL and their base came to be known as the unconquerable tomb of Nazarick.
-After Momonga successfully established himself as a Pro-player, he managed to beat the game's single-player campaign and defeat the final boss known as the "World Eater". After defeating him, he received a World Item known as The Blood Stone (From Noblesee). He used said item to turn himself into a "World Enemy", a title held by the strongest boss monsters in the game, promoting the game to unlock the final class of his Vampire character, "Transcendent Vampire " or "God of Vampires". After the devs noticed the extreme increase in his power after using the Blood Stone and the fact that he became much more powerful than the other World Enemies, they forced the role of the Final Boss of the game on him, marking him as a target for any other player in the game. After many negotiations with the game developers, they agreed to not force Momonga to part with his guild, and instead changed the guild's status from a normal player guild to the dungeon or the lair of the final boss, "The Overlord Of Blood", the devs also forced the guild members to have the roles of being Momonga's minions under the excuse that he already was the guild's master (of course the guild members didn't think of themselves as minions and they still make decisions by voting, nor did Momonga think of them as such, but anything to shut the dev's up). And thus, Ainz Ooal Gown was no longer a guild, but the base of the final boss of the game, the World Enemy, Momonga.
-When Momonga used the Blood Stone to boost his powers to unparalleled heights, a portal opened between the real world and the new world. The portal caused by the power surging in Momonga was the cause of a sudden and unpredicted eclipse that encompassed the entirety of the new world. Said eclipse released some type of rays that managed to effect the true dragons in the new world, giving them the ability to use what came to be known as Wild Magic for centuries later.
So, those are the In-Game changes for the moment. Momonga was a true vampire like shalltear and then a vampire lord (which basically means that he had the power level of the lord of nobles in Noblesee). His avatar looks like Cadis Etarama Di Raizel, who's the main character of Noblesee, which is a Korean Manhwa that's very awesome, I recommend you give it a try if you haven't read it yet. Kudo-Shiho chose Raizel because he's the total opposite of the Canon Ainz, Raizel is the most OP character in his story and no character managed to beat him till the very end, but he made it his own personal mission to protect the world, especially humans, which is obviously the opposite of what Ainz is currently doing in his series. So Kudo-Shiho thought that it be quite the curious contradiction for Momonga to have Raizel's appearance and powers and use them for the exact opposite purpose of what Raizel used them for.
If you don't know who Raizel is or what he's capable of, here's his Wiki Page, just scroll down to the Powers and Abilities section:
wiki/Cadis_Etrama_Di_Raizel
Terms from Noblesee (their concepts are going to be used in the story, especially the Contract one):
wiki/Noblesse_Terminology#True_Noblesse
The Blood Stone:
wiki/Blood_Stone
World Enemy Wiki page:
wiki/World_Enemy
Now here is where we have a problem, we both have no idea how to translate his abilities into an RPG format. His attacks could be translated into spells, I guess? One of his abilities allow him to "Govern Blood ", that could be a job class, right? Or is it more suited to be just a class? What is a class anyway? What is a job class and what does it do? We have no idea, and this where we want your help to come up with classes and jobs aside from World Disaster, Vampire Lord and Transcendent Vampire. Basically, we want your help to make a character sheet for Momonga, keep in mind that his stats are that of the final boss, which means that they are all way beyond 100, since he is a World Enemy and the strongest one at that, he's way beyond level 100, we just need help with the classes and job classes which should be in accordance with what Raizel has. He would have Ainz's spells like the super-tier ones and the like, but he would only be able to summon Vampires and Vampiric creatures instead of the Undead. Raizel also had an ability that awakened the potential of people, and we decided to make that Momonga's Special, in which he can buff his allies to be far stronger than their level cap, basically breaking their individual level cap, which we rationalized that it made sense since he's the final boss of the game and the difficulty level of his "minions" should be the hardest in the game.
Yes, Momonga is the progenitor of the wild magic that the Dragon Lords use in the new world, but of course he doesn't know that. The wild magic the dragon Lords use is not the pure form that Momonga uses (the pure form is basically the Aura from Noblesee, but it is called the pure wild magic in the story) and it is much weaker than Momonga's magic or that of the people he "awakens". The fact that the Eight Greed Kings who are players existed 600 years ago in the new world makes us believe that time flows differently there than in the real world, YGGDRASIL couldn't have been around for six centuries, so maybe the time moves faster in the new world. Also, according to the wiki:
According to Maruyama, magic items created from Wild Magic like Gazef's ring which is now in the hands of Climb could be allowed a warrior's level to rise. However, if someone such as Cocytus had it, he would go over level 100.
Based on that, we made a slight change to that, which is that wild magic items allow any class to break the level cap, not just warriors. Which we used to validate Momonga's special ability to "awaken" others, which is possible because he is the source of wild magic in the story. By giving items made by his "pure" wild magic to people like Neia (which are basically the Soul Weapons of the clan leaders in Noblesee, they have a very similar concept to the Zanpakuto in Bleach) those people can level up to unimaginable power, having the power of one of the clan leaders of Noblesee is like being a level boss in gaming language, badass Neia incoming! You might think that that would mean that Neia will be stronger than the guardians, but he can do that to them as well, which means that no matter how strong Neia gets, she will still be weaker than the guardians. That's overkill and way too OP, but you can't fault me if that's exactly what Overlord is about until now, not to mention Kudo-Shiho loves overpowered characters, besides you can't tell me that it's not fun to think about, but I'm not the type to just think it, I'm doing it baby! To hell with the unfairness of it all!
Anyways, there is a lot more but we have to move on.
*Changes in Momonga's real life (basically the same back story except for these few changes) :
-He served his national service or duty in the army, so he has an idea of strategy and war tactics. So, he's not as shy and quiet as his Canon self and he's a bit more self-confident, but not by much.
-He was family-oriented and had an older sister who was married and had two children, a 5 year old son and a 6 year old daughter. He would always go visit them and play with her kids as he loved children and wanted kids of his own. However, his sister's family died in a tragic car incident during the time when Ainz Ooal Gown was just created as a guild, which landed him in a deep state of depression. His guild mates knew about what happened since he always talked about them and how much fun and happiness he felt when he visited them, and how much he desired to be a parent himself. To console him and thank him for HELPING WITH THE CREATION OF THEIR NPCs, they changed the settings of all the NPCs of Nazarick to add the line "Momonga is her/his father ". Peroronchino even created an NPC as a consolation present for Momonga, that NPC is Shalltear, whom he programmed to not only view Momonga as her father, but as her God and the Lord of all Vampires. Momonga always wanted the game to one day have an update that allowed the NPCs to interact with the players.
-The majority of the NPCs will refer to Ainz as father/father-sama, both in a familial sense and in a religious sense (like the father in the Christian faith), since they know that he helped their creators greatly in making them. NPCs like Demiurge, Sebas and Cocytus will insist on calling him Ainz-sama since we don't see them calling him anything other than that due to their personalities, maybe even the battle maids and the Homunculus maids will have trouble with calling him father rather than Ainz-sama. Albedo WILL NOT be in love with Ainz, there's no Romance in the story. However, he will still remove the bitch line from her settings, she will still be obsessed with him, but more like obsessed with being his "favorite daughter" rather than fucking him, so the competition between her and Shalltear is still there but for a different reason.
-Aura and Mare alongside Omega and Rubedo are the only NPCs who were programed by their creators to see and interact with Momonga as their Father first and as the Supreme Being second (yes, Rubedo is a little girl in this story). Meaning that they will treat him like normal kids treat their parents – well, Omega is not a kid but you get what I mean- being spoiled and demanding he spends time with them and such things. Their relationship with him will be informal and cordial, similar to Pandora's Actor, Aura was even programmed to call him Dad. As a joke, Bukubukuchagama programmed Aura and Mare to seek Momonga's attention and affection in any chance they got, she programmed Aura to always want to sit on his lap and Mare to always want to be carried around by him. They still respect and worship him as the Supreme Being, but they were designed to see him as their beloved dad above anything else, so they're more bold than the other NPCs.
-Since Ainz is a Vampire and has a roughly neutral karma, he can still feel emotions freely without having them suppressed by an inhibitor. And since he's a bit more confident in himself, he wouldn't hide behind the Overlord persona while he's with the Nazarick denizens. He can be himself while he is with them, the family-oriented guy who just loves to spend time with his "kids", and since he loves kids so much, expect him to spoil Aura and Mare a lot. Also he will do things the original Ainz might never do due to his fear of breaking his Supreme Being persona, things like visiting the battle maids and having a chat with them to get to know them more, comforting shalltear after she got brainwashed, visiting and spending time with Nigredo, Rubedo Pandora's actor and Omega, allowing Mare and Aura to sleep with him in his room, eating in the canteen with the Homunculus maids, encouraging CZ to visit Neia since he knows that she would never ask that of him out of her own accord, allowing Pandora's actor to actually spend time outside of the treasury and using his abilities instead of just locking him there. Basically, his relationship with the NPCs will be deeper and more meaningful than just a guy and his servants.
-He also had several conversations and learned a lot from Punitto Moe, who was the strategist of the guild. So, he can at least get what Demiurge and Albedo are saying to some extent, making him a participant in the conversation at least, rather than agreeing with whatever it is they were saying just because he doesn't understand a word of what came out of their mouths.
-Due to him having emotions and having a roughly neutral Karma value, he wouldn't exactly disregard the humans like in the Canon. Sure he might not feel any connection to them, but he can still show equal amounts of cruelty and kindness, as a neutral being. He can very kind to those he genuinely liked or those who prove their loyalty to him. We plan on having some characters change sides, the first one being Clementine because we feel that killing Clementine was a mistake. Well, killing her wasn't a mistake, but not reviving and questioning her was, she knows about Zesshi, she knew about downfall of castle and country, she knew about the kingdoms and the dragons, she knew about everything! Also, we think that it's not a bad idea for Ainz to recruit her after reviving her, I mean we hated her because she opposed the MC whom we were rooting for (as you do), but Ainz and Nazarick are not really all that different from her, they're even more evil than she is, we think she will fit right in Nazarick. Who knows? maybe she will not be a slave of Ainz and she might view Nazarick as her home, since her background indicates that she was ignored by her family in favor of her brother, so there is some potential for a little clementine side-story there. We plan on having Zesshi convert to Nazarick as well, since the Theocracy are not allowing her to go and kill her rapist of a father, maybe Ainz can use that to get her on his side, give her the power boost to be able to beat her father and avenge her mother (yeah, the elf King is a player in the story, level 95 seems good for him), maybe she might actually view Ainz as the father figure she didn't have (we're having her age be of a young teenage half-elf). We're also planning on converting that chick from the Empire, the one who thinks she's cursed, what was her name again? Leindas or something? Inside spy baby! And of course, the number one human worshiper of Ainz, Neia! Like we said, Ainz will be a lot more kinder and sympathetic towards those who are loyal and those he genuinely likes. He will treat the humans with a "carrot and stick" method.
-There are some characters we're not sure what to do with them, maybe you can help us decide what their eventual fates will be? Those characters include Ninya, Brain , Climb, Jircniv, Renner, Foresight (Ainz isn't as petty as in Canon so he might actually like them for their camaraderie and teamwork and let them go, maybe even give them some money to sway them to his side. If anything, the more people like Neia and Enri the better. There's still a chance for them to survive with this Ainz, he's not going to be evil for the sake of being evil) and Blue rose, especially Evileye. Originally, we planned for Nazarick – Demiurge in particular- to troll Blue Rose, like hard trolling. Since they don't pose any real threat, we planned for Demiurge to send out Aura to lure out Tia since she's a Shotacon in the Web novel and she might think Aura is a boy, then kidnap her and kill her, have Entoma take her voice and have her appear in front of Blue rose and speak to them with Tia's voice, then revive Tia and manipulate her memories and drop her off in front of her paranoid and grieving team with an ominous message attached to her body, troll level over 9000! But, that sword that Lakyus is carrying might interest Ainz to give it to someone of Nazarick, and Evileye is also a Vampire, so we're not sure which side she should be on. Tell us what you think should be done with these characters! We will pick up a suggestion if we liked one and if we didn't find one to our liking, we will figure out something by the time those characters appear.
So, these are the changes in the Canon for the Moment, I wouldn't brag about something I didn't do, Kudo-Shiho came up with most of these ideas. So, if he made other changes, I will be sure to tell about it.
Anyways, thanks for giving your time to read this! And thank you in advance for your help! The first chapter of the story is scheduled to come out in about a week for those who got interested in the story, so please help with these damn classes and job classes! Also, we will really appreciate it if you gave us a simplified explanation of concepts Buffs and De-buffs, DPS, Racial Resistances and things like that, we really have no idea what any of that means.
Please wait for the next update and I hope that it will be soon. Thank you for taking the time to read this!
Thank you for your reviews in advance, both the positive ones and the negative!
Kudo Shiho Out!
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