This is my first fanfiction so please go easy on me, this the point of view from a raptor who escapes from her captors on a stormy night. Im going to cross Jurassic park with Primal carnage please review =D

Shadows Pov:

The storm raged while I stood waiting, for my chance I threw sticks at the lightning fence testing for weakness. After 10 minuets of doing this finally the fence did not zap the stick to ashes. I chirped with glee, I bunched up my muscles and leaped the 6m up and broke through the fence. I then stood up tall and looked at my surroundings the jungle sprang up at me, swaying in the wind I sniffed the air for larger predators, all was clear I dashed into the jungle and did not stop until I reached a cave exhausted I curled up and fell asleep.

Later:

I crept back into consciousness and opened my eyes it was quiet, just the chirping and squawking of the exotic birds. "That reminds me I thought I need to eat" my stomach growled in response. I had not eaten since day before yesterday when the no scales lowered a fat four legged animal into my pen. I crept out of the cave and smelt the air for the musky scent of prey, I caught a whiff of a small two legged animal to my right. I ran through the trees occasionally stopping to keep on the trail. More scents wafted about more of the preys species seemed to join in. I reached the tree line in front of me a wide grass land was spread out under the sun and to my delight a herd of the two legged prey I crept around in the tree line searching for the weak or young. "Finally! A proper hunt instead of the fat animals I could not hunt" I thought I selected and elderly animal on the edge of the herd. I bunched up ready "Here we go!" I charged out sprinting and caterwauling the herd broke into a sprint I came up behind my target and was about to pounce. Suddenly the sent of a larger predator hit me, then a huge maw full of teeth clamped down on my prey spurting blood on my chest it was a razor tooth! (T-rex) I jumped right over the razors snout and sprinted as fast as I could away. I took shelter behind some trees and watched with envy as the razor tooth ripped my prey to shreds then to the left I spotted a lone two legged prey it was honking looking for its herd. I lowered myself down hoping my black scales fitted in with my surroundings, I crept closer then to my surprise the prey came closer obviously not aware of it's appending doom. Just at the right moment i pounced and clamped my teeth down on its neck and sunk my killing claw on my feet into its side I twisted my head and the preys neck snapped it was dead before it hit the ground I raised my head up in triumph and shrieked to the sky.

There we go the first chapter hope you enjoyed it!