Ok this is my first story. Please review, I need constructive criticism and feedback! So Naruto, a little help here?
Naruto: Let's go! TheContheDistance doesn't own me! Or anyone else for that matter! Dattebayo!
Me: Sigh… you are such an ADD kid.
The young nin stumbled past the gates of Konoha, her vision swayed slightly. Not good. I am going to bleed to death at this point. There has to be a hospital nearby. The girl limped through the main street, the blood trickled from her forehead and arm. Villagers going about their daily business stopped and pointed in shock. Shit. The girl fell to her knees as the blackness surrounded her.
Sakura hummed cheerily to herself. She had been becoming more and more successful with her medical training, and she finally felt valuable to her team. She just had to report to Tsunade-sama on her shift at the hospital and she could hang out with Naruto and Kakashi-sensei. She turned the corner to find a group of people huddled in the middle of the street. Curiosity overtook her, and she pushed past the people in the circle. Sakura gasped.
"NANI? Someone get help!" Sakura shouted at the people surrounding her. Some villagers looked at her in fright, and a boy ran off to the hospital. Sakura took a deep breath to calm herself down. She focused her chakra and tried to heal the deep wounds scouring the girl's body. Sakura sighed, it was no use, the wounds were too deep, and she had used up too much chakra anyway. Glaring at the people around her, Sakura bent down to pick the unconscious girl up. Sakura picked up the girl, realizing at the same time that the girl was taller than her but not heavy at all. I wonder if she has been eating. The girl's orange hair was matted with blood; it looked like she had taken on a group of shinobi. Sakura carried the girl to the hospital. Sakura watched as the girl was pulled into a hospital room. She is the same age as I am.
Emiko felt suffocated for a second. She shifted her arm and nearly cried out in pain. Emiko breathed in and out to calm down. She hadn't opened her eyes yet. She could feel the heavy bandages on her body. Her back suddenly stiffened. There was someone there in the room with her. Emiko's heart began to race, and she heard a strange beeping noise. She began to panic, where the hell was she? What was going on? Emiko opened her eyes to a white room. A hospital. I got to get out of here. Her eyes shifted to the person asleep in the chair, just a regular nurse. She breathed out, and calmly took out the IV and got out of bed.