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Watching You Forever
The time stopped, and in that fearful second Uzumaki Naruto felt true fear. Even tough he had done the wrong thing, he even knew this would happen, but he did it anyway. Now he regretted his decision. He regretted doing this, but it was hard not to. He had nothing in Konoha, everyone hated him. That was how he felt. His could feel the blood trickling down his hand and hitting the ground far down. He could feel the cold stone floor of the Akatsuki hideout, and he could feel his muscles freezing up.
The pool of blood were becoming larger by second, and the metallic tail with paralyzing poison could be seen clearly at both his front and back. His eyes were wide from the surprise, and he could feel himself loosing all hope of surviving. He knew this was the end. There was no way he could beat them like this.
The sound of flesh ripping could be heard echoing through the cave when the tail retreated out of the young jinchuurikis back, before said boy fell over landing head first on the stone in a puddle of crimson liquid. Blood.
'Hey, kit, are you really giving up now?' The voice of Kyuubi echoed in his head, making it throb from the sound. 'Yeah, what is it to live for? They got me. No one would miss me.' The words tasted nasty in his own mind, making him want to hit himself because of the weakness he showed. 'You know, I'm sorry. This is my fault, and even I can't get us out of this mess... I must admit, I've become attached to you.'
Naruto could feel the Kyuubis regretful aura filling his mind, before closing his eyes and entering his mind to talk to the great Demon one-on-one personally.
He found himself in another part of his mind that he never saw before, wondering why he was here. 'Kyuu?' His voice sounded broken and dull. 'Yeah, kit?' Then he saw it; he was inside Kyuubis cage now, in the huge space filled with trees and grass in the back and sewer-like water near the gate. The great beast was currently in a very small form lying down with a thoughtful face.
'You know, I never knew why I protected you, helped you and cared for you... I guess you become precious to me. Not only because I would die if you did, but you're more like a son for me... I am really sorry for running you to your death so soon in your life, Naruto. I regret it...' Kyuubis words were filled with a true regretful chime, making the great demon lord seem kind for a second... 'Kyuu... It's not your fault; it's my fault for going out like this alone... It was stupid, and now they're going to get you. I'm sorry, but I don't know why it ended like this...' The feelings in those words seemed to fire up a fighting-spirit in the Kyuubi, but he knew nothing could change the chaos that was reality. 'Well, kit, you got to wake up and give the bastard a nice finger from me, and give them a piece of your vocabulary for good measure. Go down fighting, even if it is verbally'
Naruto looked into Kyuubis eyes and saw the fire burning, the sneaky and playful glint wanting him to tell them his opinion on being killed and Kyuubis meaning for being used by mere humans to rule the world.
'Will do, Kyuu, will do' with a light chuckle he drifted into the reality, nearly loosing hope again. But Kyuubis words rang through his head,
Go
Down
Fighting!
And he said he would do, Uzumaki Naruto did what he said he would! "Stupid Akatsuki jerks..." His weak voice was edged with pride and fighting spirit, watching them prepare the extraction, his death.
"What was that, brat?!" The angry voice of Kisame rang through the cave, giving the Jinchuurikis eyes a pleased and slightly evil glint. "Kisame, knock it of." The cold and calm voice of the leader ordered the shark like man, making him walking away muttering curses. Naruto smirked, victory in a fight is better than no victory.
Naruto spent some minutes throwing insults, curses and opinions to the Akatsuki, making them fairly annoyed.
Naruto also gave pretty much everyone the finger, telling the person to fuck of, adding a 'love' from Kyuubi at the end. But the end came to soon.
"Leader-sama, we're done." Those words made Narutos stomach flutter and somersault before he felt it, the horrible tug before the wave of pain. He did the only thing he could; he screamed his heart out in pain. The Kyuubi felt horrible for putting him trough such a pain but felt the tug himself, before pain clouded him. The Kyuubi was drained of energy so the pain knocked the demon out, leaving Naruto on his own.
His screams were loud and painful, expressing all the pain and sorrow he had felt trough his whole life in a bunch of horrible yells and even tears. This was his fate, to be slowly killed while feeling that he was being ripped in thousands of tiny pieces and stomped on. His heart hurt the most tough, no one came to look for him. No one came looking when he was lost for a month. No one cared.
He was unwanted, unneeded and mistreated.
The pain was becoming duller and soon he felt... nothing. He was in a pure white place, his clothes replaced by a white ancient looking robe, looking like it came right out of a book he read once about ancient Rome. He saw clouds and a gigantic gate, it was pure gold and on top was the kanji for end.
'So you came...' The voice was distant and unfamiliar making Naruto turn to see an old-looking man with gray long hair and just as long gray beard. The man wore the same robes as Naruto, but he had an aura of authority and power around him as well as a welcoming glint in his eye.
'So, Uzumaki Naruto, let me tell you where you are, shall I?' The man spoke friendly, and unsure Naruto nodded at the man.
'You are here in Nirvana, also known as heaven. The utterly peaceful estate of the dead...'
TBC...
Okay, that was chapter one of Watching You Forever. R&R
I'd love reviews but hopefully no flames, sorry it was short...
-Love,
Seven (D-D)
