Hey guys! So I'm a new writer and I decided for my first fanfic to write a supernatural one. I really need reviews for this but don't hold back. If this story is really bad, I need you to tell me! but I also would like some nice reviews. Constructive criticism please. Anyway, I'm going to post my intro first with the first few chapters soon behind hopefully but they will differ in size greatly. One might be really long and then the next only one paragraph long.
Hope you enjoy the fanfic. Please review!'
Introduction:
In a crowded exam hall on a windy day there is talk running around the hall about the exam, "Oi, Bridget! What did you get for question 26?" One girl asks her friend, "I couldn't remember how to work it out?" Bridget turns around and sighs, "I got 3564 Maya, it is really easy if you remember your bidmas. Remember?" The girl turns away annoyed and looks out the window at the willow outside. The sun moves out from behind the clouds and she sees a shadow of a man hanging from the tree. She gets up and walks to the window pressing her hands to the glass. The sun goes behind the clouds and the man disappears. She walks back to her desk as the examiner calls the next exam starting. She watched the window as the instructions were read out and she saw the man from the tree again with a noose around his neck, standing at the window looking at her. She fell to the floor screaming "He's at the window, he's at the window" over and over as her eyes, ears and nose start to bleed, the man at the window just watched smiling.