Vile Here.
I had this story in my computer for over a year now. I was thinking whether or not should I put this story up because this is like taking Musashi Kishimoto's script and crumbling it up and spitting on it. Seriously, I would do that if I had a chance to get a hold of the script.
Why I wrote this?
(Spoilers Read at your Own Risk!)
Well, I got tired of reading how evil Madara is and decided what it would be like if Madara was a bit like tobi. I mean the Moon Eye Plan, seriously what was he on when he came up with that. With this story Madara doesn't have vile chakra like the manga if you got that far.
Since I got my laptop back online I was reading over what I had at the time and came across this story. After reading it and updating it, this is what I came up with.
It isn't my best work and I am not the kind of touching feelings kind of gal, so enjoy.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, that right goes to Musashi Kishimoto.
Chapter 1
Madara's Legacy
The Uchiha Clan, they are a group of powerful and dangerous shinobi. They are skilled in all areas of the ninja art and the holder of the all powerful Sharingan or the Copy Wheel Eye. The Sharingan like its name sake is able to copy any jutsu, fighting style and genjutsu… even hand writing. The Uchiha's personality is detested among other shinobi because they act like they are far superior to other shinobi. There pride and arrogance is legendary.
But then there is Madara Uchiha, one of the founders of the Village Hidden in the Leaves or is now known as Konoha.
He is everything that the Uchiha are. He is powerful, strong enough to fight evenly with the Shodaime Hokage or Hashirama Senju. But that is for later, he is everything that the Uchiha are… that is what history books in Konoha says, well they had to tone it down. His true personality was hidden behind a façade of an asshole, he was actually a carefree kind of guy… who strangely enough happens to get along with the Nidaime Hokage Tobirama Senju who has a great sense of humour, because of the clan's hatred of each other, it was a secret friendship, even if Tobirama happens to make fun of the Uchiha calling them evil right in front of Madara's face. Hell the best time he had with his friend was messing with Hashirama. The worst they did to him was stating the village namesake. Hashirama wanted something more intimidating.
He obtained the next level of the Sharingan that was even further than the Mangekyo which is called Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan. Before he obtained this eye, the current Mangekyo's power has blinded him and his brother Izuna has given his Mangekyo to end his blindness. He wanted his clan to be in peace and because of Madara being a better shinobi he hoped that Madara will save the Uchiha. In history, it was stated that Madara took his brother's eyes away from him.
In history it was stated that Madara stated that the Senju were planning to weaken the Uchiha clan, which was practically true. He pleaded with his clan to leave the village but the rest of the clan has stated that they will use this opportunity to weaken the Senju clan. Madara was fed up with his clan members' arrogance and went against his clan by stating what the Uchiha clan was planning to do to his friend and his brother. The Senju brothers took it fairly quite well. Tobirama came up with a plan to give the Uchiha a position of Konoha Military Police Force which will keep the Uchiha out of the council. This got questionable looks from Madara and Hashirama stating 'that is the smartest thing that ever came out of your mouth' but that was just half of the plan which was now Hashirama's plan after that. The other half is getting rid of Madara.
Then Madara started openly went against the Senju clan to make him look bad and openly left the village after the Uchiha clan abandoned him.
Then there was the battle at the Valley of the End, where Madara and Hashirama had fought against each other one more time. In History, it was stated that Madara was killed by Hashirama which was again partially true. He did kill Madara… to the village's point of view. It was actually a friendly all out dual between two rivals. Who really won, no one knows beside the two.
What happen then was not known to Konoha.
He traveled around the Elemental Nations for quite a while and avoided the First Shinobi War after Hashirama gave the tailed beast away, but he knew that they were actually huge amount of chakra in a shape of animals, but because they cause destruction they are known as demons. They are just chakra and chakra needs to be contained, they were actually looking for hosts before they diminish away which will take a very long time to fade away. But there were some problems with sealing them. Because the chakra is sealed in a container they develop a personality depending of the container. If the container is calm then the chakra will just be chakra. But if the container had a hard life then the personality will change into a demon. Sealed the right way then it will just be chakra for the container.
Again he traveled and fought against many people, even some Kage's. He even kept a close eye on the Tailed Beast; he kept an extra eye on the Kyubi. The Kyubi is such an everlasting amount of chakra, it was difficult to have that huge mass of chakra contained.
During his travels he became the Sandaime Mizukage. Why he became a Kage, well he wanted to know what it felt like to rule a village, but then again he was an Uchiha so he had to be kept hidden. Madara spent some time to the neighbouring country which was Whirlpool Country ruled by the Uzumaki. A strong clan that holds connections to the Senju clan with a high affinity to water and some of them were able to use ice he found out later on. He got very close to one of the woman named Yuki Uzumaki who gave birth to a daughter he named Kushina and she carried her mother's name Uzumaki. He was happy to know he has a family that isn't arrogant or prideful.
But it was not meant to be.
One of the Mizu ninja found out who he was and it didn't help that he was the holder of the Three tails and holds a great hatred against bloodlines. He had no choice but to leave the village. The next Yondaime Mizukage had a huge hatred against bloodline users and used the village to destroy the Whirlpool Country.
Madara did all he could to save the Whirlpools people. After he saved what he can he searched for his daughter Kushina and found out she went to Konoha and didn't mind that she went to Konoha. He visited her a few times to help her train or get to know her. Both agreed that Kushina wouldn't use her sharingan and was told the 'true' history of Konoha which she enjoyed his stories of him messing with the Shodaime.
During his time he helped rebuild the Whirlpool country in secret and found three individuals in Ame named Nagato a holder of the legendary Rinnagan, Yahiko a kid with a dream to rule a village, and a blue haired girl named Konan that is able to manipulate paper. He found out they were trained by the legendary Sannin Jiraiya and decided to take them to Whirlpool and trained them properly. They are happy with their new home. He took dangerous missions to fund the Whirlpool country.
But then the civil war in mist started. The Yondaime Mizukage who is the container of the three tailed beast has openly started a war with bloodline users. Madara and his band of shinobi saved as many bloodline users they can. He even recruited two of the seven swordsmen. One is named Zabuza Momochi and he is going to be a father, the mother happens to be a bloodline user from the Hitsugaya clan, (AN: Sorry I had to put that there.) so he agreed to join the Whirlpool village. The other member is the shark man Kisame hoshigaki. He was glad to know that the Sandaime Mizukage is alive is very honoured to serve him again.
The rest of the Seven Swordsman either left the village or stayed, which it turns out that three hated bloodlines. Madara ended up killing two of them when he saved the Kaguya clan, the ones that aren't blood thirsty or war mongers and Hitsugaya clan.
Once everyone is settled in Whirlpool, everything is going peacefully, but then again another problem came and it came in the form of the container of the Kyubi.
He went to investigate what is wrong with the seal and found out the chakra is leaking out and tearing apart the seal. He had little time to find a seal master to seal the chakra away. He searched the elemental nation to find only one seal master and he is the Yondaime Hokage. A nice guy with the will of fire the Senju brothers were talking about.
In Konoha, we find Madara watching his daughter caressing her stomach and he knew that she is with a child. He walked over to her and took off his orange mask with a spiral pattern, when he sensed no one else is around.
"I see you are carrying a child I see." Madara said behind Kushina and scaring the life out of her.
"..ACK.. Don't do that Tou-san. You know how much I hate that." Kushina fumed at her father who should be dead by now.
"I know, that's why I do it." He chuckled a bit at her fuming daughter, then his face became serious. "I came here with some good news and bad news." He said to her and told her he finished rebuilding the Whirlpool country and found a good Shodaime named Yahiko who is a strong good intention person who will become strong enough to be the Shodaime of Whirlpool soon. He also told her that Yahiko married Konan after they got settled in and decided to carry the name of Uzumaki to honour the rulers that once ruled the land, which Kushina agreed with.
But then he came with the bad news of the Kyubi is about to burst out of its container and the Yondaime is the only one who is able to seal it away.
"Are you sure there is no one else?" Kushina asked her father who shook her head and she looked down at her stomach cradling her child. "Is this the only way?"
"If we just let the Kyubi roam around, it will try to find a container, but it will just destroy everything it sees." Madara said as he to look at her stomach. "Boy or Girl?" Kushina smiled when her father asked.
"A girl. Minato and I agreed naming her Naruto." Madara look confused.
"Fishcake…?" Kushina nodded while holding back her laughter. "Fishcake… Please tell me this is a joke?" Now Kushina was laughing at her father's unbelievable face.
"Sorry, her name is a double meaning, fishcake and Maelstrom." Kushina said reassuring her father.
"Maelstrom sounds better than fishcake." Madara had a thoughtful look. "How long till you give birth?" Kushina understood what her father was asking of her.
"I'll give birth to little Naruto-chan in two weeks." Madara nodded and said his goodbyes to her.
"I'll try to hold back Kyubi as much as possible." He said before teleporting away to Whirlpool.
Kushina didn't know whether this was for the better. She knew what the tailed beasts are and hoped that her father knew what he was doing.
In Whirlpool
"Well yeah, than my power can flood the whole village!" Madara heard from the other said of the door which is the Kage's office. They haven't decided what to call the Kage seat or the elites but he is close. Madara entered the office to see Yahiko and Nagato were arguing again.
"Yeah, well my power can engulf the whole country!" Nagato countered in their argument and Madara wanted to see how this would end. This usually happens when they have to decide with something and both were in opposite sides. This usually ends when they out talk the other.
"Well yeah, my power can ascend to the sky!" Yahiko countered. Madara saw Konan watching as well with an amused look.
"My Power far passes the clouds!" Nagato countered raising his voice.
"Well my power will soar to the sky, break the bounds of gravity and PUNCH the face of GOD!" Yahiko said while pumping his fist in the air dramatically. Konan sweatdrop at his statement and Nagato is a bit speechless at that remark unable to counter it.
"He got you there Nagato." Madara said gaining their attention.
"Ah, Madara-senpai, how long were you there?" Yahiko asked as he went back to sitting the Kage chair which was made with the best material so he won't have a sore ass at the end of the day of doing paperwork which he now regrets but he still wants to protect his new home.
"Enough to hear you say something about punching the face of kami." Madara said as Yahiko had to sheepishly scratch his back.
"We were deciding what to do with the academy students on how to train them properly." Konan said who gave the scroll on how to train the-would-to-be genin. Madara gave the position of the Kage's advisors to Konan and Nagato while Yahiko ruled the village as Kage which everyone agreed with. Madara read the scroll to find that this would be just right for the village.
In the first year it starts out as basic chakra control with holding a leaf to their heads, basic taijutsu and ninjutsu. Then there is a bit of history on every village and kunai and shuriken practice.
The Second year is the same thing with the exception on chakra exercises and then help improve with the basics and a bit less on history.
The Third year has extras with teaching about setting traps, infiltration and stealth, and then with handling weapons.
Then came the fourth year, it starts with stamina exercises and increasing chakra reserves, chunnin level taijutsu with C level ninjutsu and understanding genjutsu, then he found out that they stop teaching about history but review the monthly bingo book.
The Fifth year is the same as the fourth year with the exception of stealth and tracking exercises.
The Last year got his attention. The Academy will start teaching the students on element manipulation exercises with more on stamina and chakra exercises.
All in all, it was perfect. He compared this Academy with Konoha's Academy and knew that Whirlpools genin will be low chunnin level ninja when they leave the Academy. If he wasn't in front of his three students he would happily cry a river, but he must be professional.
"So why the argument?" Madara asked the two and wondered why one would question this type of Academy.
"Nagato here wants to put in a medical academy as well. We were deciding where to put it." Yahiko said and Madara understood the need or medical ninja. Hell with his sharingan he can be the best medic-nin in the world, but he has already learned enough in the world… ah what the hell; he might as well learn something new.
"Well who has enough knowledge on medical jutsu?" Madara asked and remembered all the medical scrolls he 'borrowed' from other villages and most of them came from Konoha he has in the new hidden vault.
"Well I have some knowledge in medical jutsu." Konan spoke up. "Not to mention Sasori has knowledge as a medical nin, but he stopped learning them after he turned himself into a puppet." Everyone shivered at that thought. Madara remembered when he recruited Sasori of the Red Sand. The man left his village after he killed the Kazekage. Madara didn't argue with that, he knew that man loved war and would start another shinobi war. Both had a small conversation and Sasori agreed with being a shinobi of Whirlpool Country in the condition of teaching puppetry.
"He would be the right person to start recruiting in the fourth year. Whoever has great control with their chakra can choose whether or not if they want to learn medical jutsu." Madara stated and the three had to agree with that logic.
They were about to continue on with the Academy plan until someone entered the room through the floor to reveal a huge venus flytrap that opened up to reveal a odd sight. Inside is a man whose skin is half white and half black. His hair is short green.
"Madara-senpai, Kino-kun is acting weird and looks very sick." The White half said who looked worried.
"Kyubi is about to break free." The other half said in a deep voice.
"I see Zetsu; we will have to get back on this later. I will need your help with the Kyubi." Madara said and the three nodded with Konan writing something in a piece of paper than it turned into an origami and flew off.
"What was that for Konan?" Yahiko asked Konan before she glared at him and he coward at that glare.
"You haven't forgotten that we have a newborn daughter at home now have you!" Konan said giving Yahiko an evil glare. Madara remembered the time that Konan broke all of Yahiko's fingers when giving birth to little Mai. Poor Yahiko had a hard time doing paperwork the next day.
"No, no, I was just a bit exhausted from paperwork." Yahiko said hoping that will ease up his wife. Sure he is powerful, but an angry wife is unbeatable no matter how long or hard you look at it. Thankfully she bought it.
"Well I just sent a message to the baby sitter to let her know that we will be gone for a while." Konan said as she went towards Madara who is getting ready to teleport them.
Two Days Later
"Kino-kun was the nicest kid I ever met." The white half of Zetsu said and tried to hold back his tears.
"Don't you dare cry on me." The black half of Zetsu said trying to keep his kind side from crying.
"But we had great times with each other. We played hide and seek, he made the most delicious steak ever… an---and he made us this cloooaaakk!" Now he is openly crying.
"Well he did made good meals and the cloak is actually nice." The serious side of Zetsu said and was admiring the cloak. It is a black cloak with red clouds. The interior is red and has a chin high collar with an opening to allow Zetsu to wear it and was made with the best comfortable material that Zetsu ever wear. Truly a perfect cloak with both sides agreeing it is a nice gift.
Madara ordered Zetsu to look after the Kyubi container named Kino. A nice kid to Zetsu who looked after him from a child to a preteen and that was as far. He enjoyed his company, but the seal was breaking.
Zetsu went to bring Madara to Kino to help ease the pain a bit but the Kyubi broke out. Madara had Nagato to use Chibaku Tensei to contain the Kyubi while Madara used his Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan to calm the Kyubi in a genjutsu as much as possible, while Konan and Yahiko use a genjutsu to hide the huge ball of earth and Zetsu is to keep ninja away.
The Plan was simple, contain the Kyubi and pull the ball of earth towards Konoha. The Kyubi will search for a huge mass of people and the Yondaime will seal it into his Grandchild.
That's the plan.
The day the Kyubi attacked Konoha
Madara was controlling the Kyubi to attack the village.
He watched the Kyubi slaughter many shinobi then he saw the Yondaime sealing the Kyubi away and he knew his job is done and left to attend Whirlpool.
If he stayed a bit longer or made sure his plan worked, he would have taken his granddaughter with him.
Five Years Later
It has been some time since Madara had visited his daughter. He was busy with Whirlpool and saving some more bloodline users from Mist.
Madara teleported in the back yard of his daughter's home wearing his new uniform that is a black cloak with red clouds with red interior and a high collar. It is a tribute to the previous container after Zetsu showed them the cloak and it was later to be called the uniform of the elites of the village.
Akatsuki.
He was about to meet her, but he felt something wrong. There was no one living inside the home. He checked inside to make sure nothing has happened. When he entered the home he noticed that the place has never been used for quite some time.
He began to worry and went to check the village archives. It was easy to get into the files and the Hokage's hidden compartment. When he left, Tobirama gave him the key to the compartment and thank kami that no one changed the lock. He found the Yondaime's scroll to Naruto so he took it. He read at what happened at that night. He found out that Kushina died giving birth to Naruto who is now an orphaned. He read the report on what the council wanted of the child. Some wanted to kill the girl while some wanted to turn the child as a weapon. He seethed when he read that part but was thankful for the Sandaime for saving her from such a fate.
He read about what happened during her childhood and came to a conclusion. That Konoha is not the village that Hashirama has envisioned. The Senju clan is nearly wiped out with its last two members on self exile and the other is in Anbu. He read a report that the Uchiha is planning a coup from a spy being the Uchiha prodigy who is very loyal to his daughter and granddaughter. He read that Itachi was the only one who saves her from her beatings. He is thankful that there is some trustworthy Uchihas.
He went back to his daughter's home and cleaned the place out. He found many scrolls in the home and his daughters belongings. After cleaning it out he went to find his granddaughter.
It was raining and it was difficult to look for her. How hard is it to find a red head in the village?
Then he heard a scream and went to investigate. It was a mixture of pain, sadness, regret and hatred.
Madara found the sight of his grandchild holding her bleeding eyes over another child who he guessed is a female Uchiha. He sensed someone on the roof and saw a weasel mask anbu which he guessed by the mask it is Itachi. He looked over to his grandchild to see her eyes were red with a black pattern that looks like a whirlpool and knew that it was the Mangekyo Sharingan, but then it changed again to show a jagged whirlpool and knew what that was. He looked towards the Uchiha girl to see her eyes missing. Naruto was openly crying and he knew that she didn't take the girl's sharingan for power. It was given to her, just like him.
But why did it change to an Eternal Sharingan when the dead Uchiha girl didn't have a Mangekyo. He knew that her grandchild had her as a friend and she must have been injured to a point that she couldn't survive and Naruto was left with a choice to end her suffering or let her to continue to suffer. Then before she killed her friend she was requested to take her eyes as gifts. Once she killed her she unlocked the Mangekyo which was the whirlpool pattern and once she took her friends it must have changed again into the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan, the jagged whirlpool pattern. But to obtain the Eternal Sharingan the other user must have the Mangekyo. Maybe the huge mass of chakra compensated for the change was all Madara came up with.
Still he couldn't but feel the irony of her Mangekyo looking like a whirlpool. He knew that each Mangekyo has a different ability and one of his is his teleport ability which he now thanks kami each day for the ability.
He had enough with watching and went to go pick up his grandchild who passed out from the ordeal. He didn't get any resistance from the anbu and he must know who he is.
"You're Madara aren't you?" Yupp, he knows.
"Yes, you are Itachi right?" The Anbu nodded. "Do you have a place that is dry?" Itachi nodded and jumped down to pick up the dead child.
"This way."
Some Time Later
Madara was attending to his grandchild's wounds and noticed they were healing quite fast, even faster than the last container. He studied the seal and noticed that the seal is strong enough to hold the chakra which he is thankful for. He carefully looked over his grandchild more carefully to see she has her mother's hair and small skinny body from no nourishment. He will have to attend to that later. (AN: For this story there will be no whisker marks. Like I said the seal was a perfect one and the tailed beast are just chakra in a shape of animals.)
"What happened to them?" Madara asked Itachi after he took off his weasel mask to show his face which Madara took off his orange whirlpool mask that whirls to his right eye, the mask was a gift from Kushina made for him and shows a pair of sharingans. (AN: I said nothing about losing his left eye.)
"I was out on a mission. After I finished my report, I quickly went to find Naruto. Every Anbu member holds a grudge against her and I am the only one who looks after her other than the Sandaime." Madara nodded his head in acknowledgement and knows he doesn't have to kill him. "After I found her track or I found the mob, I killed each one of them and went to find Naruto. When I found her she was talking with her friend and telling her she was going to be all right, but from the wounds I saw, she wasn't going to make it."
"Who's the girl?" Madara motioned to the body that his hidden underneath a sheet.
"She's been Naruto's friend for a year now. Her name is Kagura Uchiha. They were secretly friends but me, my mother, the girl's mother new that they were friends. Kagome isn't going to like to hear that her third daughter is dead, but she has kind intentions with Naruto." Itachi said in sorry tone of voice.
"Third daughter?" Madara saw a small blush that quickly disappeared and knew something is up with him and the two daughters.
"Kiriko and Kirika Uchiha are there names and both are kind to Naruto." Itachi said hiding his intentions but Madara already figured out that Itachi has a thing between the two girls.
"So Kagura asked Naruto to kill her to end the pain…" Itachi nodded and remembered how Naruto told her she was going to be alright. "…and asked her to take her eyes."
"Yes, Naruto already had a matured sharingan with the countless attempts with her life and Kagura knew about this and she also had a matured sharingan that she kept it secret from the clan." Itachi said and Madara knew that having a 5 year old matured sharingan user is very rare, a prodigy in fact. If it was matured than the Mangekyo would soon be unlocked. He just wished that he came sooner to retrieve Naruto.
"I hear there is a coup coming soon, is this true?" Madara asked Itachi who nodded.
"Yes, my father and majority of the clan are planning a coup to take control of Konoha. They also planned to release the Kyubi." Itachi stopped when he felt huge amount of killing intent coming from Madara. But once he saw Naruto squirming in the bed feeling very uneasy with the killing intent he stopped.
"Sorry about that." Madara said and went to comfort Naruto who calmed down. She is still crying in her sleep.
"The council has ordered me to kill the clan." Itachi was expecting Madara to unleash another wave of killing intent but nothing happened, instead he said something that got him unprepared.
"Need help?" Was all he said. But then he remembered that Madara hated his clan… well the arrogant ones.
"Yes, I need help even with my Mangekyo I still need some help." Itachi said and showed Madara his Mangekyo Sharingan that looks like a 3 point shuriken.
"Are there anyone in the Uchiha clan that aren't in the plan and arrogant?" Madara asked not wanting to kill any innocent blood.
"There are a few; I was planning on gathering them and taking them outside the village."Itachi said getting Madara's attention.
"Where were you planning to take them?" Madara saw Itachi look away and figured that he didn't plan ahead. "I guess I could take them to Whirlpool Village."
"Whirlpool? I thought it was destroyed." Itachi questioned.
"Yes it was destroyed and I happened to rebuild it and recruited many people." Madara said proudly and Itachi nodded and said he was going to start gathering them.
After some time all the Uchiha who were secretly against the coup were outside and one Kagome and her daughters entered the house to find her third child dead. She cried for quite a while with her daughters. Madara understood what it felt like to lose a child and once he heard he lost his only child he was devastated, but knowing that her daughter is alive brought him out of the dark. Once Kagome calmed down she went towards Naruto which got Madara worried a bit, but she just comfort her who is still crying in her sleep.
Itachi told her what happened to her daughter. She didn't hate the girl, but she hated the village instead. They took her daughter away and she will make sure that they won't take anyone else away from her.
"She has her eyes doesn't she?" Kagome said in a gentle tone that a loving mother would talk in. Madara nodded after he sensed that the woman cared for his grandchild. "I tried to adopt her but the council was against it so I made sure she was able to get as much food and shelter as much I can give her. Even Kagura took a liking to her." She now cradled Naruto and she soon stopped crying. "Will it be okay if I look after her?"
Madara agreed with the woman who now lied down on the bed with the girl in her arms and fell asleep. He knew that he will have to leave soon, so he left the hut to check on the progress on getting all the Uchiha who weren't part of the clan to get out of the village. When he exited there were only four dozen of them and majority of them were woman and children. Some of them had chunnin and jonin armour.
"Is this everyone?" Madara asked Itachi as he appeared before him with his mother in tow who was also wearing Anbu armour.
"This is all that were against the plan." Madara nodded and got everyone in one place. Kagome exited the hut carrying a sleeping Naruto with her daughters behind her. Itachi was carrying Kagura's body and Madara summarize that they don't want to bury her in this village.
"Ok everyone, you may feel uneasy after this." Madara warned everyone and then he teleported everyone to Whirlpool Village.
2 Week Later
The newly formed elites of Whirlpool village, Akatsuki were having their first meeting. The Akatsuki isn't just the strongest, but they are the village's advisors. Madara didn't want to have a council like what Konoha has, which is filled with old civilian geezers and leaders of a clan. He wanted Akatsuki to be filled with experienced shinobi who will fight on the front lines, not look after their own clan.
The members consist of Yahiko the Shodaime Arashikage or First Storm Shadow, but he wasn't wearing the cloak, but instead the Arashikage Robe is black and red like the Akatsuki cloak.
The First and second member were the Kage's advisors Nagato and Konan. Konan teaches whatever that is she needs to teach and Nagato is the village seal master in training, sure the man has the Rinnagan, but the Rinnagan is too dangerous for him to use. If he uses the wrong technique wrong, he might become crippled. All he can do right now is using it to master the elements. Anything else is just too dangerous for his health.
The Third member is Zetsu. He teaches earth manipulation, infiltration and info gathering… that is if the students don't run away from him.
The Forth member is Sasori of the Red Sand who is the infiltration and puppet sensei and for once he is not in his Hiruko puppet.
The Fifth and Sixth members are Zabuza Momochi and Kisame Hoshigaki who are the kenjutsu and water manipulation senseis.
The Seventh and eight members are the respected Itachi Uchiha and his mother Mikoto Uchiha. Itachi is the Fire manipulation and genjutsu sensei while his mother is surprisingly the lightning manipulation sensei. Everyone wondered why she is a member when she spent majority of her life as a house wife. She stated that it was just a façade to hide from her husband and Uchiha council. Everyone stopped questioning her after that.
The Ninth member is Rin Inuzuka. Why she is in Whirlpool, well Madara found her helping as many people in Mizu and she instantly accepted to help rebuild Whirlpool the home of her sensei's wife. She is the head medic nin and the sensei in the medical art.
And the Final member is Tobi… The Good Boy… well he is Madara in the village but he is the carefree and goofy Tobi outside the village which everyone agreed to have some comedy relief. Besides he is actually quite good at it.
"So what are we here for?" Kisame asked bored while he should be using his time on some missions that will soon be handed out.
"Well we wanted to hear some opinions on how we should improve the village." Yahiko asked the group and everyone was talking amongst to each other.
"I say we bring in the seven swordsmen back." Kisame said out loud.
"I agree it was such a pain to know that half of the seven swordsmen in mist were such pansies." Zabuza said adding his two cents in this notion.
"The Seven swordsmen belongs to Mizu like the Legendary Sannin belongs to Konoha and we have Akatsuki. I don't want to take other villages titles away." Sasori said and everyone nodded.
"Besides Akatsuki is the last hidden defence of Whirlpool, so it wouldn't hurt to have a group of specialist." Yahiko stated.
"First they must know how to wield a sword!" Kisame and Zabuza said at the same time.
"Ok, ok, they must know how to wield a sword." Konan said while writing it down. "Anything else?"
"They must be experts in stealth. I don't want any huge ego, arrogant, lazy and tardy ninja to be in this group." Sasori said detesting people who are late.
Far away in Konoha, the ninja that Sasori spoke of, sneezed. (AN: You all know who he is.)
Konan was writing this down on a scroll. "Ok and the members must be skilled in an element as well." She asked the group and everyone nodded. "What about the uniforms?"
Everyone was silent when she asked that. The Akatsuki cloak is reserved for the elites or the advisors and the cloak is damn comfortable.
"How about a coat?" Konan asked the members.
"What kind of coat?" Zabuza asked what everyone wants to know.
"The coat could be made of the toughest material and should have some seals to protect the wearer and should have some gravity seals on it as limiters." Konan said while everyone was thinking it through.
"That sounds reasonable." Rin said as she thought it through. "If the coat is thick enough it could protect the vital organs and it should be manoeuvrable enough so it won't get in the way." Nobody questioned the medic's logic.
"So what of the color?" Nagato said while everyone was brainstorming on the coat.
"Black with red interior." Everyone said at the same time. Madara sighed at the dress code of Whirlpool. It seems that black and red are this country's style.
"The type of coat depends on the style the member wants it to be." Konan said as she cheered in her mind for having her style in the next… what was it called. "What should this group be called?" Everyone again began to think of what to call it.
"Well there should be ten members." Itachi finally spoke up in the meeting and Konan wrote that down.
"And there should be ranks." Kisame said and everyone was debating over this.
"If it will be ranked, I don't want to have the strongest to be ranked as one, but I would like to have the ranks as capabilities." Sasori said gaining every ones attention. "Think about it, if the strongest is ranked one, then that person will be target number one." This kind logic is very hard to ignore.
"So your saying is that the person who is ranked one is capable to fight hoards of shinobi and survive?" Yahiko asked Sasori who nodded.
"Yes, this group is not based on strength or power, but in skill." Sasori said as everyone agreed. Too many strong shinobi were ranked as one as being the strongest were killed in history.
"So the ranks are like how hard it is to kill them. This group sure has tough expectations, any suggestions on what we should call them?" Yahiko asked as everyone again is having a hard time thinking of the name.
"Whirlpool's Natural Disasters." Mikoto suggested and everyone went for it, after all nature causes such natural disasters with the weather.
Then the meeting went on to some other subjects like the resources they have and funding which wasn't going to well. After all they are just starting to take on S-rank missions and whirlpool is still kept hidden somewhere in Water Country. It was agreed that they are not ready to get rid of the Mizukage yet so they will have to wait till the time is right. Madara could defeat the Mizukage, but he isn't invincible, yeah he knows he could die, but he is hard to kill. He can't fight all of Whirlpool's battles, but he wouldn't mind fighting with them.
After the meeting Madara, Itachi and Mikoto went to the Uzumaki Clan compound.
The Uchiha didn't mind living in the compound. In fact, they were grateful for the hospitality. Not like the other Uchiha who would think their superior name brought them the home.
In fact Madara made it large enough for hundreds of people or more to live in the compound, hell the place has its own district which holds the Hitsugaya, Kaguya and Uchiha to live in with many more clans that moved to Whirlpool.
Once the three entered the main compound they heard a fight from the backyard. They entered to see Naruto fully dressed to fight fighting both Kiriko and Kirika at once. The Twins which Madara found out were a year younger than Itachi and both were like their mother Kagome in personality only. The difference between them is that Kiriko has short wavy hair and Kirika has short spiky hair and their mother has long hair that reached her hips.
The twins were chunnin level and were holding back with little Naruto who was avoiding each attack flawlessly without the sharingan. The said girl was mentally exhausted for five days and two to comfort her until she asked to be trained which Kagome happily accepted. She also asked to learn some medical jutsus which again made the head doctor happy to hear. After all she is her sensei's wife's daughter.
After the fight was over Naruto went towards Kagome who gave her a small snack and the twins noticed Itachi.
Itachi once noticing the twins noticing him was about to take off, but a firm grasp on his shoulders kept him in place. He looked to his right to see his mother's hand and he looked to his left and strangely enough Madara was holding him in place. He accepted his fate and was tackled to the ground by both girls who happily gave him affection.
Mikoto and Madara were laughing at the boy's situation and Mikoto went to get some rest for the next day while Madara went to Naruto.
"How you feeling Naruto-chan?" Madara asked his grandchild who is trapped in Kagome's arms. Naruto took the news of having a grandfather with tears of finding out she has a family that is alive and she fainted from the news of his grandfather being a hundred years old. It was thanks to his perfect control of his chakra that he lived this long and looked so damn young. It was one of the side effects of having an Eternal Sharingan.
"Embarrassed." Naruto said trying to get out of her surrogate mother's arms and failing. She stopped trying and accepted her fate along with Itachi and she now understood his dilemma.
"Follow me, I got to get you your presents I missed the last five years." Madara said as he went towards his room with Naruto who was released from her confines and followed her grandfather and today she didn't have to fear her own birthday now which was today. She was told that everyone was going to be there for her birthday. Madara entered and exit his room and went to Naruto's room which was supposed to be her mother's room.
"Since I missed five years of your birthdays, I will give you five years worth of presents." Madara took out a scroll from his pocket and released it.
What came out was a photo portrait. It had five pictures. The first one showed a woman with red long hair that reaches her knees with green eyes and a huge stomach with a person that looked like Madara.
"That woman is your grandmother Yuki Uzumaki and she is pregnant with your mother." Madara said motioning to the woman in the first picture. "I first met her when I went on an alliance treaty mission when I was a Mizukage back then. She was such a fiery woman that I took a liking to her then I soon started to meet her more often."
The Next picture showed her grandparents with a baby in her grandmother's arms.
"That one is us with your mother as a baby." Naruto nodded and tried to hold back her tears of knowing her family.
The Third picture just showed Madara and a girl that looks exactly like her in Madara's arms. The girl has red long hair that reaches her lower back, but she has green eyes.
"That is me and your mother Kushina when she was a child when she was living in Konoha. She was such a tomboy and a fiery girl when she was little." Naruto examined her mother more carefully to see that she is just like her mother in every way from looks to personality.
The forth one looked exactly like the first one, but her mother had her hair in a ponytail and is wearing Anbu armour with a fox mask in her hand and Madara had the orange spiral mask.
"That one is when your mother became an Anbu Captain and was known as the Crimson Death in the bingo books. The spiral mask is a gift from her." Naruto has having a hard time from crying, but it wasn't from any of the negative feelings but of final knowing her mother.
The last picture was the one with her mother in civilian clothes with a stranger in his arms. The man had jonin clothing with a white haori with red flames dancing on the bottom and he has short gravity defying blond hair with blue eyes and he had a goofy smile.
"That one is your parents. The man holding your mother is your father, the Yondaime Hokage of Konoha, the Yellow Flash, Minato Namikaze." Naruto started crying and embracing the portrait and Madara held her in his arms to sooth her. Once she calmed down Madara set the portrait down and took Naruto to another room, which was in the basement.
"This is your second present, your father's library of jutsu." Once he said that he saw stars in Naruto's eyes with drool coming out of her mouth. The place is huge with row after row of jutsus. "If I remember correctly this is almost the same size as Konoha's library of jutsu." Madara said and now he saw her getting excited. "Ok, ok, let's go to your third present." Madara had to drag Naruto away from the library to get to the study room. They stood before a table with a sheet on top of it.
"No this is your mother's family history." Madara removed the sheet to show a glass case with scrolls in them with the word Uzumaki on them. "They are the Uzumaki family history and techniques. The Uzumaki are actually from a lineage of samurai and the scrolls are their techniques and history. It took me a long time to find them all." Naruto again had stars in her eyes of knowing her family line. "Alright two more years to go." Madara went to the table to take out two scrolls, but more specifically her parents note.
Madara gave the one from her father to her first since she needs to know about her parents.
Naruto opened up the scroll and out came two more. She took the first one and it was a letter.
Naruto if you are reading this then that means you are strong enough to know who your parents are… or you either broke into the Hidden Hokage compartment.
Naruto stopped reading to look at Madara who just shrugged his shoulders.
Anyways I am your father.
Naruto sweatdrop at that statement.
Sorry, couldn't resist, but anyways, I am the Yondaime Hokage or better yet Minato Namikaze. You must have realized by now that you have the Kyubi sealed within you. Well don't fear the Kyubi, because the Kyubi is just chakra and I made the seal strong enough to hold the chakra and in time it should be all yours in no time. If you're wandering why I chose you for this, it is because I have no one else to trust besides my own flesh and blood.
Before I sealed the Kyubi I have made it my wish for you to become a hero. If the village didn't respect my wish then I am sorry for the burden I have given you and will always support you no matter what you do.
I didn't come from a prestige family and I was an orphan. The only thing I can give you is the techniques I have created. They are in the second scroll and be careful when you learn them. One is an S-class technique and the other is a SS-class, so be careful.
I have to end this now and to let you know I will always love both you and your mother.
Anyways got to go kick some furball ass, so I wish you luck with becoming a powerful kunoichi and have a happy life.
Your one and only Minato Namikaze.
Naruto chuckled at her father's choice of words. "What was he like?" Naruto asked Madara hoping to know more about her father.
"From what Kushina said to be is that he was strong and powerful, but kind and caring when he was around your mother. Always smiling and looking at the brighter side of things." Madara said while telling his grandchild what he knew of Minato Namikaze. He took out his Final year present which came out of a scroll and it was a huge box.
Naruto instantly went in front of it and opened it. Inside was her mother's Anbu gear. There was the grinning fox mask with red swirls on the cheeks, her red chest, shin, arm armour and the clothes. On the bottom were two tantōs that looked like a dark red stick. Naruto took out one and unsheathed it, but it was still sheathed. She continued on with unsheathing it until it was a full length katana. The blade itself looked like it was dipped in blood and shined.
"The sheath has a special seal to make it look like a tantō." Naruto nodded and put the katana back into the sheath.
"Now come on we have to get you ready for your birthday party." Madara said as the others were getting the stuff ready and that stuff wasn't food.
2 Hours Later
The stuff was actually a beautify kimono, hakama and a haori and thanks to Naruto's family line of tomboyish personality, it took the whole 2 hours to get her into the clothes. Kagome had a hard time putting it on her, she had to ask her daughters for help and she still put up a fierce fight. Then Kagome brought in Mikoto who ended the battle of putting the clothes on. The Kimono in question is coloured black with red flames, the hakama is light purple and the haori is red with black flame pattern on the bottom. Naruto somehow bargained her way out of wearing the obi and both were still wondering how she did it.
Madara heard the scruff with his granddaughter and wondered if he should have helped, but he went against it and went to greet the guest.
The first to arrive were Yahiko and Konan with their daughter Mai, who surprisingly presented Madara a deck of cards from her sleeve and started doing tricks with them. It was fairly obvious that she took after her mother with her paper manipulation and she has brown spiky hair and blue eyes.
Nagato entered right after his friends and entered a conversation with the two.
Then came in Zabuza Momochi with his son Haku and wife, Madara swore that Haku is a girl, but he didn't voice it. He just hoped no one else would openly make the same mistake as he did. They were followed by the Hitsugaya clan and their heir Toushiro Hitsugaya. The kid is very quiet and talks when necessary and had short spiky white hair with green eyes.
Next came the Kaguya and the newly formed Ongaku clan, what they do is still a mystery but they specialize in musical instruments. Kimimaro came into the compound with a few kids to go to the party and get to know the people. From the Ongaku clan were the twins from the clan, their names are Kyokin and Koukin… long story short, they are punks and their sister and heiress Tayuya, she had quite a mouth but restrained from using it. Then all of the Uchiha clan entered the party. Then the small clans also joined the party that wants to get to know the people. Then the rest of Akatsuki entered the party and surprisingly no one ran from Zetsu, but the kids scream when they saw Kisame which ended up with him chasing the kids around the back yard laughing maniacally and swinging his sword in the air.
When the party started, Naruto had a hard time adjusting with the huge crowd until the Kaguya kids dragged her away and started playing with her, until they exhausted her to the ground, but she had fun with the kids. The adults were talking amongst themselves, but majority were talking about how they are going to train their kids. They have already picked out the soon to be Natural Disasters.
Naruto Uzumaki being one of them, Haku will be trained as his father will make sure he becomes a member, Toshiro Hitsugaya being a genius in his family's ice jutsu and kenjutsu, Mai Uzumaki the daughter of the Arashikage will also be trained, Kimimaru Kaguya has already become a member, Koukin, Kyokin and Tayuya Ongaku will also be trained, and the last two could go to the Uchiha Sisters if they trained hard enough.
After the kids had their fun and Kagome finished taking pictures, then the main course of the party started with the food. There was enough food to feed a family of Akimichi's, which means that there is enough.
Once everyone settled down after eating, they just talked amongst to each other until Kagome said that there is only one more shot. Everyone gathered at the backyard and stood in one line with the kids in the front and the adults were in the back. Itachi had to make a shadow clone to put in Kagome and sure enough the picture was taken of everyone in it.
To be continued
Well there you have it.
The story of a good Madara and Akatsuki.
If your wondering where is Deidara(looking at the Deidara fans), well he has not been recruited yet. Kakuzu will come in soon and will be handling the finances because noone else will bother with that. As for Hidan... I'm not really sure about that guy.
If you're wondering what Ongaku means, it means music and I just made the clan up. As for Koukin and Kyokin... well I'll let you guys guess who they will act like. As for Tayuya, well the girl has spunck and she uses a flute so I had to put her in there, maybe I'll change the intrument.
The Hitsugaya... I HAD to put my favourite bleach character in this story. If your wondering who is my favourite in Naruto... it's Anko Mitarashi.
As for Water Country, there demise will soon fall after the Natural Disasters are trained.
Well, review if you like or give suggestions.
Ja Ne!
