Chapter 1- - summary
Main characters:
Tallamee, Commander of the Fleet of Devine Revenge
Terran Cyborg (the ability to directly interface with the ship is a bonus) this interface is called gun space
Commander of dreadnaught class ship fiery lights
Captain Hera
Goa'uld (and that is how it is spelled)
Captain of hyper gun ship Aurora
She is a subordinate of general riley for now
Captain Tyler
Wraith male
Captain of the super assault carrier Halcyona
Subordinate of commander riley
Ships:
Tiny ships: deadalus, Apollo, ha'tak (I believe that is how it is spelled) 30 man crew plus 100 pilots and soldiers
Small: roughly 2 miles long – 100 man crew and 10,000 warriors
Medium: roughly 20 miles long – 500 man crew plus 30,000 warriors and 1000 Special Forces units
Large: roughly 1000 miles long – 10,000 man crew plus 1,000,000 warriors, 200,000 Special Forces, 500,000 pilots
Huge: any object that can move under its own power that is wider, at some point, than 1100 miles across
Class groupings and appearance:
Destroyers and all ships in the ark share the trait of looking like the deadalus only larger
Destroyer-small
Weapons; six main rail guns, 250 missile bays with four reloads each, four bow photonic torpedoes with 3 reloads, five rear torpedoes with 3 reloads 500 marine or marine equivalent
Defenses; shields, 50 point defense rail guns sensory arrays
Battleship-medium
Weapons; eight tri-barreled particle pulse cannons (ppc's for short) aligned in 2 batteries of four above the hangars, four ppcs in two batteries of two on the sides of each hangar, 500 missile bays with four reloads, two particle slicer beam canons (pretty self explanatory, they cut stuff up), 16 fore torpedo tubes
Def.: shields, EM barrier, 100 Pd rail guns, 25 rear torpedoes
Dreadnaught-large
Weapons: 5 barreled heavy ppcs turrets: 5 turrets of five above each hangar), 4 MAC's on the side of each hangar, 2 hyper Magnetic Accelerator Canons running the length of the ship, 50 torpedo tubes in back, 5,000 missile bays, 1 Hyperion sensor array above the bridge, 5 particle slicer beam canons, 500,000 X-302, 100,000 pelican drop ships, 1,000,000 marines or like units, 500,000 Orbital Drop Shock Troopers, 200,000 special forces units
Def.: shields, 500 Pd rail guns, 100 rear torp tubes, 1,000,000 ancient drones, 1000ft armor plating in some places. Obvious thin spots, the hangars, the missile deck, main sub-light thrusters.
Repair: one factory bay on underside, repair nanites, hull walkers (machines that walk on the hull and take damaged weapons and armor to factory).
Heavy assault vessels, Good defense and offence.
Gun ships are like ha'taks only larger in size
Gun ship-small
Weapons: 200 energy canon
Defense: shields
Super gunship-medium
Weapons: 1000 energy canon
Def.: shields
Hyper gunship-large
Weapons: 1000 heavy ppcs
Def.: shields, 1,000,000 space marines, 500,000 death gliders
Moderderate speed and fast fire rate make for good support vessels.
Carriers resemble hive ships
Carrier-medium
Weapons: 10,000, darts, 5,000 jumpers
Def.: shields
Assault carrier-large
Weapons: 1,000,000 darts, 500,000 jumpers, 100,000 pelican drop ships
Def.: shields
Super assault carrier-huge
Weapons: 5,000,000 darts, 1,000,000 jumpers, 500,000 pelican drop ships
Def.: shields, armor
Useless without a fleet to defend it, carriers are the ultimate long range vessel
Frigates are like the Prometheus
Frigate-tiny
Weapons: 25 rail gun batteries, 10 missile tubes, and 1,000 ancient drones, 100 marines
Def.: shields, fast acceleration, high maneuverability
Cruisers-small
Weapons: 50 rail gun batteries, 30 missile tubes, 2,000 ancient drones, 1,000 marines
Def.: shields, acceleration, maneuvering
Heavy cruiser-medium
Weapons: 100 rail gun batteries, 30 missile tubes, 5,000 ancient drones, 5000 ODSTs
Fast and furious, these ships are great for insertion and recovery of troops.
Stealth ships are oversized al'kesh
Stealth ship
Weapons: one single shot ancient satellite cannon, 50 nuclear space mines
Recon at its finest
Fleet consists of:
Fiery lights
Aurora
Halcyona
5 battle ships (Islamabad – captain evette, Santiago – captain joss, Moscow – Captain Seth, London, and Buenos Eres)
5 super gun ships (truth and reconciliation, nostalgia for infinity, pelican of piety, in amber clad, and pillar of autumn)
5 heavy cruisers (Yellowstone, Abydos, reach, harvest, and sobek're)
15 gun ships (Russia, china, Kenya, Egypt, Chile, Brazil, Canada, Mexico, Nicaragua, Spain, The Former Yugoslav Republic of Macedonia, Norway, Japan, Czech republic, and Israel)
10 destroyers (Shia'Hulud, Shia'tan, Paul Atriedes, Duncan Idaho, bashar, Bene Gesseret, Norma Cenva, Tio Holtzman, Serena Butler, Delta Foxtrot Bravo)
10 carriers (silence of the swan, hallowed darkness, Arrakiss, sandworm, tabr, freemen, lorean, lightning, ranger, sock alpha prey foxtrot urus)
Introduction:
53 ships drifted into the system on a 40 thousand year long orbit. Now rapidly accelerating into the system the ship-board AI lilac and the monitor of installation 09 were bought back on line because the gamma levels couldn't initiate full system activation. Lilac decided that bringing the main scanners online of a necessary thing to do and that the fleet was not at risk of being attacked because the monitor and his sentinels had done the repairs as per request.
A human male called Tallamee was now
The fiery lights sensor scan did not go unnoticed as planned because a small puddle jumper with sga 2 on board were alerted to their presence and went to investigate the mystery ships with all speed as they were due to report in in one day earth time.
Six hours later…
The jumper closed on the dreadnaught class vessel and moved in to land in the hangar, but failed to arrive do to something known to humans as point defense. The jumper was disabled and unable to report in, so sga 1 was sent to investigate.
On arriving Sheppard noticed that there was massive activity in the asteroid belt.
Rodney; ah, that is definitely odd.
Ronnon; define odd.
Sheppard; uh guys this is odd and really cool.
(Fiery lights cuisses past)
Rodney; that's huge.
Sheppard; that is as big as Madagascar and—hey there is that the other jumper.
(Hive ship drops out in front of fiery lights)
Teyla; the wraith are here.
John; we see 'em, cloaking.
Flag bridge dreadnaught
Unknown system
Factory under construction
Major Lorne; who are you.
Tallamee; I am Tallamee, commander of the fleet of divine revenge.
Lorne; could you let us go and we promise that we wont come back.
Lilac; sorry, but your technology suggests that you have mastered wormhole technology and we want to know how.
Lorne; who said that.
Lilac; (gold holographic lady appears) me.
Lorne: why can't we leave now.
Tyler; because you are most definitely enemy spies.
Lorne; how would you know.
Tallamee; we are at war with every body in the galaxy and if you have not heard of the war then go back to were you came from and stay there.
Lorne there is no galaxy wide war with anybody but the wraith.
Lilac; oh no the new jump drives malfunctioned; I don't know where we are.
Lorne; tell us about the war and we will tell you where you are.
Tallamee, Tyler and Lilac explained the dawn war.
It began some 5 billion years ago. My people stayed on the defensive until we were almost wiped out in a battle that engulfed the whole solar system, it was ren'var. My fleet escaped in the end and what you see here is all that's left.
Tallamee; this system has the resources to build us a new home.
Tyler; we will return to our wandering search for the portal.
Lorne; what portal?
Lorne loses consciousness and wakes up with no memory of what happened in the infirmary with sga teams 1 and 2.
Sam; what happened?
John; what happened, all I remember was going through the gate.
Lorne; same here, I have absolutely no recollection of any thing happening since the last check in.
John; that is just cool.
Rodney points at the sun; no that is cool.
Ronnon; why are they demolishing the planet.
Rodney; oh, that is more like controlled dismantling.
John; so why are they doning that.
Caldwell; whatever they want I want to know if it is dangerous.
Rodney; well as long as they don't notice us or we get to close we should be fine.
John; should be fine.
Lorne; well then what's the massive thing they're building around the sun.
Rodney; it looks like a deformed disson sphere.
(Think of the ark combined with a second ark. The arms meeting)
7 more dreadnaughts were being formed around the center. There was a large section of the solar system that was made up of scaffolding and in this there were thousands of nuclear missiles in racks.
In the control room of the Hyperion space station
Year unknown
Location unknown
Lilac; when I find were you went and what you did with my dress coding I am going to lock you in a supply closet with Hera for 1 month.
Tallamee; I think you'll find that rather hard since you lost your dress coding. Have fun getting it from the human vessel out there.
Lilac; I'm going to keel you.
Tylor; please don't, he has all of the codes for disabling the lock down and I know that his override yours.
Hera; I don't want to spend a month in a supply closet with Tallamee or Tylor.
The only complete dreadnaught left parking orbit into hyperspace.
Lilac proceeded to upload herself into the deadalus's computer and send them in pursuit.
Caldwell; who is flying my ship.
Lilac; you look nice john.
John; who said that.
Lilac; mwhahahahahahahaha, me fools, and I am going to keel him.
Rodney; kill who.
Caldwell; does anyone else on my ship here thinks it remotely weird that my ship has started to talk for no apparent reason.
Ronnon; we are in an alien galaxy being attacked by nanites, space vampires, whale like things, and the genii. Anyone find this remotely surprising.
Lilac; ah-ha!!! Here I am. (a completely dressed and very good looking human girl appears)
Caldwell; what are you and what are you doing.
Lilac; isn't it obvious; I am stealing your ship and chasing down the bastard who stole my closes.
Rodney; that's what you are doing not what you are.
Lilac; I'm a shipboard AI.
Caldwell; Rodney get her out of my ship or I will personally vent you out the airlock.
John; I wont stop him either.
Rodney; you wont kill me. You need me to read ancient and to program parts of Atlantis.
Caldwell; that's what jack, Sam, and Daniel are for.
Two vessels drop out of hyperspace and immediately notice the rather large fleet of replicators vessels in there path. As the first shots are fired by the replicators the larger of the new ships returns fire. Battle star galactica and company exit hyperspace on the other side of the fleet.
The dreadnaught returned fire with a full slavo of ppcs. The replicators are nearly wiped out and retreat from the battle field.
(This is 1000 years after original bsg)
Author's notes
This is the first story in a chronicle.
To be added
Jurassic park
Star wars
Firefly
Halo
Dune
Tremors
And any others I can think of.
Author's notes
Disclaimer; how in heck could I possibly own all of the shows/games/books to be mentioned here
Standard fleet of divine revenge trooper gear:
Armor- mjoliner armor
