egb.- Alright, for all you Twilight fans out there reading this, you should know the couple of changes I've made in my story. #1: The first chapter starts out when Bella is walking by herself downtown and the guys catch her and stuff. (When Edward saves her in his car.) #2: Bella turns into something BEFORE she meets Edward!! What is it? You'll just have to find out, now won't you?

PS: This is my first fanfix, so please don't be too hard on me!!

Chapter 1

The men were surrounding me. I closed my eyes out of pure fear, and to hide the tears that were slowly rising to my eyes. If nine 18-year-old men saw me crying, that would just make me all the more intimidating to them, right?

I could feel the air tighten as the leader of the group was walking towards me. His wrists slid across my waist and then traced the outline of my body all the up to my neck, where both of his hands gripped right below my chin. His face slid onto my shoulder with his mouth next to my ear.

He turned his head and whispered, "Now, sweetheart, you can come down with me to the dock, okay?"

I squirmed around in his arms. His iron grip on my neck tightened.

"Honey, honey, don't worry. Everything's gonna be all right…" He mumbled in my ear. I could feel his broad smile get bigger on my cheek.

My feet dropped to the floor and the leader dragged me to the shoreline. I opened my eyes, and through the blur of my tears I could see the whole group was closing in on me.

I managed to whisper, "W-what a-a-re you doing to m-me?" through my body that was painfully shaking in the sand.

I waited.

No response.

Two of the group members whispered to each other. Then two more…then the whole group was conversing in a way that seemed like a whole different language.

I felt pressure in my wrists…then my ankles. Everyone was leaning over me and from my point of view, it kind of looked like they were figuring out how to do something…. then it hit me.

Darkness.

My mind was spinning, and something was burning inside of my body. My veins felt like they were about to detonate any second now.

My body froze.

And that's the last I saw of the men for the rest of my life.

egb.- Heehee! Did you like it?? Please review this chapter! Pretty pretty please!! Lol, And no, that is not the end. I just like making people want to read on, you know? Well, anyways, the next chapter will be up soon!