Okay! This is the redone version of Hour of darkness (Note the name) and yes I'm starting off with PROFILES YAY lol but yes I'm starting how I started with the original story so yeah enjoy and please review!

First Profiles!

RUDIKAI PROFILE

NAME: Rudikai Haeroshiko

NICK NAME: Ru-Ru, Miss Sunshine, Temper

Age: 16

Height :( As tall as clay)

Element: Her element that was given to her by her farther is darkness

Species: Diearnix (meaning demon/ human)

Personality: Rudikai has quite a high temper, and is very impatient ….all the time she likes to keep to herself and makes as little contact with people as possible. She's had bad experience on trying to fit in with everyone so she basically has given up on fitting in with what people call normal. Her powers cause her to be very up tight and none trusting. She had a nicer side to her but that part of her was lost long ago. She is like a nightmare come true as some describe her. Her ultimate weapon is also her biggest weakness.

POWER: Telekinesis, dark ability

(She is able to harness the power of the darkness)

SPECIAL ELEMENTAL ATTACK: apocalyptic destruction darkness is the strongest dark elemental attack she also has learnt the weaker version of that attack its called apocalypse darkness.

TRANSFORMATION TYPE: Rudikai and Loukai go through a special transformation when they reach a certain level in power, or a certain age. But for Rudikai it's when she uncontrollably taps into the killer instincts of her demon side. This is because of their farther that only they can do this. Rudikai's form is a sorta demonic looking angel if you will. This is sorter their demon side.

LOUKAI'S PROFILE

NAME: Loukai Haeroshiko

NICK NAME: Kai

AGE: 17

HEIGHT: (same height as jack)

ELEMENT: The element given to her by her mother to protect her is light

SPECIES: Diearnix

PERSONALITLY: Loukai is the total opposite to Rudikai if they didn't tell you they were related you would of never guessed, because they act so different. Loukai is a happy up beat person that thinks the world of her sister, she usually doesn't act her age and appears to all ways find the bright side of things. She loves company and loves to try an cheer up her sister even though she doesn't often succeed. But Loukai isn't always full of smiles and laughter she can get angry…its just not often but when you get Loukai mad you she's serious.

POWER: telekinesis Light ability

TRANSFORMATION TYPE: She doesn't look evil at all she looks like an angel with…a very evil stare.

SPEAICAL ELEMENTAL ATTACK: Angel Thunder Light

so there we are ill update the redone version later so plz review and say if it is better than the crap I wrote before!