I feel slightly guilty writing this but I've been thinking about it for a while... So far my writing feels really choppy and I don't know how to fix it, please give advice if you can!
Warnings: lots of sexual moments, Kagami bashing, Character Death, Mystery, Hurt, Comfort, Harem(couldn't fit all the genres), new characters that I've made who are shorter than Akashi, Anything else I missed
There Kagami-kun was. Lying there with me, cold and unseeing; blank and body bruised and slashed up, mangled and deformed so that almost no one could recognize him. I could though, of course I could, it was my fault he was like this. It was my fault his empty eyes stared back into my own hollow ones. My fault his disembodied limbs surrounding me had screamed their hate. My fault that the stench of his flesh choked me as if those hands stiff and nearly fingerless were strangling me with all the pain he must've gone through. Everything was my fault. All my fault. This could've been avoided. If only I hadn't run, if only I had just kept quiet; didn't seek help. If only Kagami-kun wasn't my friend. But that's all they were, if onlys, I could do nothing as my thwarting determination finally crumbled when the very foundation of my misery walked in. The only words I could hear before tender, but cold arms enveloped me, before my sobs broke out, before my resistance perished; before I sought comfort in my captor, before I welcomed his touch.
"Tetsuya"
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I'll probably post another chapter in the next few days. I don't know if I should continue, tell me what you guys think, if its positive, then I'll post a new chapter real soon. ;)
REVIEW PLEASE!
hate this SO much, too choppy, i know its bad please bear with it