This is my first Fanfic, i came up with it just now, i would like at least ten good reviews, and maybe helpful ideas on how to improve the story or my writing.

Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach. some characters are created by me, Bleach characters belong to Tite Kubo.

Chapter one: Enter, Captain Tsumetai Nagato of fourth division

When the Sereitei was first established, it was the thirteen strongest Soul Reapers who got the first Captain positions, it was then when they established the rules and laws of the Soul Society. As well as the Central Forty Six, that was the main Justice system.

The Soul Reapers created a decree to bring lost souls to the Soul Society. Along with the captains, they put in second in command: Lieutenant. and they made the thrid seat and so on.

That was 10.000 years ago...

Now in the year 2000 BC, The Soul Society hasn't changed much since it was established, New Captains replaced the old ones over four generations, the old more powerful captains were promoted to the zero division, also know as the royal guard, which was established 78.875 years ago.

But strange monsters, who were created from souls who never made it, they have classified them as Hollows, they classified them in three types: Gillian, Adjuchas, and the most powerful of all, the Vasto Lordes.

The new captain of Fourth division, who was really a reckless Captain, but he had some sense of morality...or not.. The captain of fourth company was looking through some device that you could sees things that are far away, to mostly look in the sky at the stars, but unfortunately however, it was being used for an vulgar action. In this case, he was looking at the young woman who was captain of sixth division.

He just sat there saying "Heheh, that's it, just take off that-"

Someone appeared right in front of him saying "Hey! what ya looking at?" She pushed him away, and when she looked through it, she went ballistic "Tsumetai you Bastard!" She turned her head saying "Hey! Captain Kiseki! you have a stalker!!"

She turned and the captain of sixth division was right next to her "What do you mean?" Tsumetai had sweat running down his face.

Captain Kiseki looked through the telescope, having her smile vanish "Tsumetai you Bastard!" Ezekiel got up as fast as he can and flash stepped away, then he heard her voice "Bakudo 61: Rikujōkōrō." six thin, wide beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, held Tsumetai in place, Can't move shit..

The Sixth Division Captain had long black hair that she kept in a pony tail, had small glasses and brown eyes, and she had a quick temper that often desguise' her impressive intellect. She is 4'6", short compared to Tsumetai's height, which was 5'9",

Tsumetai had blond hair that he usually has covered by wearing a strange hat, he is a handsome guy with a knack for miscief and always was a mystery.

As stated before, he always wears traditional Japanese wooden sandals (geta) and a bucket hat, if he ever got a nickname, he never revealed it.

The energetic Soul Reaper happened to be Captain Kiseki's Lieutenant: Hana Onmitsukidō.

Tsumetai was helpless as they tied him up and putted him upside down "That'll teach you."

They both vanished just as the captain of eighth division came out of the shadows "So, they really did a number on you this time." He said.

Tsumetai replied "Oh shut the hell up and get me down, Aku Shūhei." Tsumetai suddenly fell face first "Oww...I'm gonna kill you."

The Eighth Division Captain put his hands up "Hey, you told me to let to down, and by the way, there's a captains meeting, something about the New Captain of the Seventh Division, they really got a young one in thats for sure."

Tsumetai stood "Oh, whats his name?"

Aku said to him "Your not gonna believe it, the kid's name is Genryūsai Shigekuni Yamamoto. I call him Yama."

Tsumetai frowned "What the hell's kind of name is that?"

Aku shrugged "The kids good, his Zanpakutō is a fire type." They walked to the first division conference room, though the meeting was strange, it was very interesting.

The next few weeks were slow, at least until a strange new Hollow, which was later called an Arrancar gave the Soul Society a new meaning of fear.

One just happened to attack out the outskirts of the Rukongai, Tsumetai and Yamamoto where dispatched to deal with it.

"You know, one captain or even a Lieutenant could deal with this, i wonder whats going on..." Ezekiel said aloud.

Yamamoto, who was a young man, said "Well, could it have something to do with e Eighth Division captain? he's been gone for a while."

Tsumetai nodded it would be a problem if he was the one, but i've known him forever, so that can't be right. he was brought back to reality when he heard a howl, just then the Arrancar, which was about the same height as him, charged out of the trees.

Tsumetai pushed young Yamamoto away while drawing his sword blocking an attack from the Arrancar "Your weapon, it's like Zanpakutō..."

They slid away from each other "What are you?"

A familiar voice answered "It's only the next stage of a Hollow's evolution, i just pushed them to make that final step in order to obtain it."

Tsumetai seethed "Aku you Bastard. Yamamoto! take care of the Arrancar, you can handle it, this Bastard is mine."

Aku grinned drawing his sword "Your just delaying your death."

Tsumetai went to slash Aku from behind, Aku jumped out of the way to slash him, but he evaded it, they then crossed blades, they where blocking or evading, none actually connecting, they were both very skilled.

Tsumetai found that the fight had moved farther away, he was worried about Yamamoto.

He turned to Aku saying "I don't have time for this, i'm goona kill you."

Aku noticed that Tsumetai's Spiritual Pressure increased higher than his own "what are you doing?" Tsumetai said "I get to show you my powers, Water man."

Tsumetai spinned his Zanpakutō saying "Tear open the heavens to unleash your wrath." Tsumetai was covered in a dense Spiritual Pressure, and as it vanished, he was holding a trident like spear "This is my Zanpakutō: Tenshi."

Wind mixed with his Spiritual Pressure gave his Zanpakutō strange lighting like aura, he got into battle pose and said "Now that i have, it's your turn: Lift your blade, Aku."

Aku stood there Already using Shikai, damn, my Shikai can't fight Tsumetai's, guess that why they call him the King of lighting. Aku lifted his sword "Freeze him: Shiro."

Aku's Zanpakutō unleashed it's winter aura, turning His Zanpakutō into a double bladed sword with a while tail at the end of his handle "Lets go." They charged at each other...

Who will come out on top?

C&C needed, also, any thing that i need to work on let me know.