Bring The Day TO The Night(planned rewrite)

by lightangel16

Marceline has given up hope of ever finding love and has grown tired of an eternal life in the dark so she try's to end it all but is stopped by Finn to find a note on her door but the rest of the note scratched out. Could he be confession his feels to her? read to find out.

1. The Queen's Sorrow

Bringing Day To The Night

Chapter: 1 The Queen's Sorrow

Marceline sat by the window of her house looking out into the darkness of the cave that surrounded her wondering to herself "Why do I always attract the jerks who like to treat me like shit where is my Knight covered in blood stained armor who will come sweep me off my feet?"

(Marceline got up and walked out the door to the entrance of her cave stopping a foot back looking out at the rising sun.)

Marceline took a step out of the cave in the direct line of the rising sun whispering softly "Please free me from this eternal torment and end it all."

(Marceline stood with her body in a cross formation and smiled as a tears ran down her cheeks as the sun's light began to close in on her.)

(As the sun's light was about to hit her and end it all she is knocked back into the cave and lands on the ground.)

(Marceline rubs the back of her head and looks up to see Finn standing there.)

"DAMN YOU FINN!" Marceline yells.

"Why would you even try to end your life Marceline?" Finn asked.

"YOU COULD NEVER UNDERSTAND WHAT IT'S LIKE NOT BEING ABLE TO FEEL THE WARM EMBERACE OF THE SUN'S LIGHT ON YOUR SKIN AND BEING FEARED BY ALL WHO MEET YOU!" Marceline yells.

(A loud slap echoes though the cave.)

Marceline turns to Finn with tears in her eyes and asks" Why won't you let me end it all?"

"Marceline if you want to end your life allow me to do it for you." Finn says as he draws his sword and places it at her neck.

"Just say the word and I will do it for you." Finn Says in a deep and cold voice.

"NOOOOOOOO FINN PLEASE DON'T KILL ME!" Marceline yells with tears flowing from her eyes messing up her vison.

(Marceline feels the cold blade removed from her neck and looks up and rubs her eyes and looks around to see Finn is gone.)

"Was it a figment of my imagination?" she asks herself.

(She gets up and walks back to her house and stops at the door to see a note pinned to the door.)

She pulls it off the door and reads it and this is what it said "Marcy you are very important to us all and If you disappeared I would never be able to tell you that-." The rest of the note at been scratched out with black ink.

(Marceline puts the note in her pocket and walks back into her house and floats up to her room and falls down on the bed and goes to sleep.)

This is my first Finn x Marceline fanfic and I want to know what you think please don't leave negative comments so what do you all think should I write more?