hey guys im rather new at writing stories and posting them up so yea im sorry if the beginning but hopefully it will be more interesting :P yup so don't correct me on my spelling im human :P so yea so heres my storie its lucys pov( reread an fixed )
chapter 1
only 3 more days till Christm as so ill bring some Christmas joy to Schroeder. So i taught i might pay a visit to him to see what hes up to but i already know hes just sitting at his toy piano. his house was just 3 doors down so readying bundled up because it was cold and snowing hard out side i grabbed my coat and headed for the door " BYE DAD GOING TO SCHROEDER'S" i walked out side and i could see my breath. i headed to Schroeder house but on the way i was passing by the peanuts gangs houses i saw sally in the window she waved to me and i smiled back i wonder whats in her mind or whats shes thinking about.i walked threw Schroeder front door his parents don't care ll too much about how i just walk in because ive been doing it for a long. Time So me and his parents are cool like that . i walked into the living room where i could hear him playing his piano i lay my back on it like i normally do " you havent been coming around like you used too " i felt like he actually worried about me ,he was probably just wonder why i didn't bother him " i dont know" i acutally didn't feel like coming out. " hey what would you do if we ever had a kid what would you name him/her" i just wanted to make conversation " on jeez lulu why wont you ever just stop i mean its not like ill actually like you or i would ever go out with you i have other better things to do then take care of a girls feeling" i felt my heart break in 500 little parts i'm only 15 but that still hurts coming from your crush " you know Schroeder who needs a block head like you and for crying out loud 15 and u still have that toy piano " i got up and felt the unwanting feeling and that i had exceeded my stay, i got my coat reached my pockets and pulled out the gift and threw it at him " marry Christmas" i walked to the door and heard "pelt just ... get over it your strong its not like it hurt you " i walked out and slammed. the door behind me. . "That block head"! i went home and heard " home so soon" i think thats when i flipped out on rerun him being almost 13 he should know not to piss me off " GEEZ SHUT UP, WHAT DO I HAVE TO DO SO I CAN COME HOME WITH OUT YOU REMINDING ME " i went up stairs and closed my room door i just sat there blasting my head phones in my ears i needed to just get out of the house. i hopped out the window and walked to the park and sat under my tree looking at the stars " oh boy i should of brought my jackets" i stayed there for 3 hours not feeling a bone in my body no matte how cold it is i could look at the stars forever i slowly fell asleep or at least i think it was sleep or just the frost bite
I just finished editing if so hopefully. U can read it more clearly. i do have trouble rereading sorry .