Some info about my story...
Jude Harrison-18
Spiederman- 18
Wally- 18
Kyle- 18
Jamie-18 (Every once in a while)
Zeppeilin(Z)-18 (Every once in a while)
Sadie-20 (Every once in a while)
Tommy- 25 (Every once in a while)
Kwest- 24 (Might be there every once in a while)
Karma- 21 (Won't be there much)
Megan-21
Take's place in "Gimme Gimme Shock Treatment" What if Megan did something else to Jude. Something worse? Can anyone save her? Or will they be too late?
This is near the beginning when Megan has Jude….
"NO!!" yelled Megan "It's all wrong!"
"This is what you told me!" said Jude
"SHUT UP!" yelled Megan and slapped Jude hard across the face
"What if I don't?" wondered Jude
"THIS!" yelled Megan she punch and slapped Jude over and over again. She threw her around the place.
"Stop!" cried Jude
"Now will you listen to me!!" shrieked Megan
"Yes!" cried Jude
"Now you play the second verse." said Megan
Meanwhile…..(Spied, Jamie and Z)
"Okay Spied you go inside the booth and play 'Remind Yourself'." said Jamie
"Alright!" said Spied
We're always on display
People question what we say
Seems like every move we make there's someone watching
Don't want to lose you to the crowd
So I turn the music loud
So we don't have to listen to them talking
Back to Jude and Megan….
"COOUPARITE!!" yelled Megan "You're doing this all wrong!!"
"How can I when you're yelling at me!" shrieked Jude
"SHUT THE FUCK UP! I'M TRYING TO MAKE YOU GET A HIT!!" yelled Megan
"A bad one." mumbled Jude but Megan heard it.
Megan pushed Jude out of the chair and threw her notebook at her.
"If you don't shut up you're in for it!" said Megan
"Fine!!" cried Jude
After about 3 hours Jude finally did something right and had the whole song done.
Snow falls on the city
White on white
It's the color of hope
On an unforgiving night
You kissed me into ruins
Sin on sin
Now, I've gotta love your love letters
Written on my skin
I can't tell the stars
From the downtown lights
If I said I was truly over you
My heart would say amen
But I give in to the cold caress of 2 AM
If I admit I can't get use to this
Will my heart break again?
As I fall
Into the waiting arms of 2 AM
Someone's scratchy music through the walls
Sirens weaving through the streets
I must've missed your call
I'm gathering up these nights
Black on black
I know your voice like it's my own
And it makes my heart go slack
I can't tell the stars
From the downtown lights
If I said I was truly over you
My heart would say amen
But I give in to the cold caress of 2 AM
If I admit I can't get use to this
Will my heart break again?
As I fall
Into the waiting arms of 2 AM
Oh
If I said I was truly over you
My heart would say amen
But I give in to the cold caress of 2 AM
If I admit I can't get use to this
Will my heart break again?
As I fall
Into the waiting arms of 2 AM
Megan claps.
"That was beautiful." said Megan as she had tears in her eyes.
"Yeah." responded Jude
"See what happens with cooperation?" said Megan
"Yeah.' responded Jude
"Ok. Let's make another one." said Megan
"What?! One is enough." said Jude
"I SAID MORE!" shrieked Megan
"No this is good enough." replied Jude
Megan threw Jude on the table. She grabbed her by the collar and said
"Listen here. I'm in charge. If you don't want to get hurt, your family and friends. I suggest that you listen to me."
"O-Ok-Okay." stuttered Jude
"Good. Now what to write next?" thought Megan
Jude looking around saw the bottle.(The one in the show.)
Everything else happened up until Z is asking Jamie about the guitar. Don't want to repeat all of that.
Spied, Jamie and Z at NBR…. An hour and 30 minutes later...
"Why did Jude underline Fretless Bass, and first number one hit on the British Charts?" asked Z looking/holding the note from Jude
You're scaring me
Cause you'd do anything
And it's tearing me apart
"I don't know." said Jamie while producing Spied
You hear your name in every song
You're happy when the spot lights on
You need so badly to belong
But don't forget to talk to me
And remind yourself to breathe
"What's so special about a Fretless Bass?" asked Z
If it's all so bittersweet
If you're feeling incomplete
Put your trust in me
Cause I believe you need me
"Nothing just a lot of bands uses them." said Jamie "Sorry. We're going to have to do that again."
"Ah." said Spied
"Who uses them?" asked Z
"Um. Lots of groups. Pink Floyd, Red Hot Chilly Peppers, The Police." said Jamie "The Police?"
"Is everything alright?" asks Spied
"Don't talk. Jamie thinking." said Z "Ok. So what is it?"
"Do you know what the first number one hit on the British Charts was." said Jamie
Z shrugged while Spied said
"I know."
"What?" asked Z
"It was Message In A Bottle." said Spied
"So that means Jude was trying to tell us something?" wondered Z
"Yeah. About Megan. But what?" wondered Jamie
"Wait. Megan??" shrieked Spied
"Yeah." said Jamie
"Megan is crazy. So Jude let her go.' said Spied
Jamie and Z looked at each other worriedly.
"What?" wondered Spied
"Do you think Jude's in trouble?" wondered Z
"WHAT!!" yelled Spied
"Well Megan came down here with a note from Jude. Here." said Jamie handing the note to Spied who came out of the booth. "Read it."
'If you lend me your
fretless bass,
I'll be able to write my
first number one hit on the British Charts.
XOXO Jude'
Spied read.
"I think Jude is in trouble." said Spied
"You think so?" wondered Jamie
"I do. I wonder why she didn't come down?" wondered Z
"Yeah. She's not that busy anymore." said Jamie
They all looked at each other.
"Let's go." said Jamie
With that they ran off.
Meanwhile with Megan…
Through the hour in a half Megan was making Jude make more songs and just beating her. She had a lot of bruises and scars. She had some blood on her face and on her body. She began to get dizzy. Then they heard Sadie and Kwest come home.
"Jude!!" yelled Sadie
"Don't think she's home." said Kwest
"Maybe not." said Sadie "I'm going to sleep."
"Same." said Kwest
Jude was kicking and trying to scream. Because Sadie and Kwest were home. But Megan just kept hitting her to be quiet. Jude wouldn't stop so Megan hit Jude with a wooden stick near by. And Jude fell unconscious.
"See this is why you have to cooperate with me." said Megan "Now you're in trouble. With no one to save you."
Megan got a rope and hung one side of the rope on the ceiling and the other end with a big loop. She put it over Jude's head.
I hope you like it. Please review! I just don't like the way things ended with Instant Star. I wish that Jude and Spied got together!! Please Review. Would mean a lot!
Love,
punette101