OK this is my first ever fanfic, ever. I hope I wrote well. I would really appreciate it if you guys give me tell me how my writing was and what I should change. This story is after the second titan war and the TLO never happens.
DISCLAMER- I don't own Percy Jackson
Chapter 1
"Mommy, mommy did you see how all those little fish looked at me?" Adriana hunt asked her mom giggling slightly. Susan hunt looked down at her daughter with warm brown eyes filled with love. "Yes dear. Did you enjoy the trip." Adriana nodded eagerly "specially pos – posi-. " "Poseidon's palace "Susan said with a dreamy look in her eyes. "Ya that one. Thank you so much for the birthday present mommy. I loved it. It was the best birthday ever!" "You're welcome honey"
On Olympus
Zeus looked down at the happy mother and daughter. He clutched his lightning bolt and thrust it into the sky in anger and watched as thousands of volts of electricity spread through the sky. He watched as the small girl clung to her mother in fear. "Beware child. You weren't meant to be here" he said as he sent lightning that was sufficient to kill about 50 men directly at the bus. In less than a second all mortals in the bus would be dead including the demigod. As he watched he saw the mother clutching her daughter in fright and just before the lightning killed the puny mortals he saw a thin sheet of salt water form a sphere around her and cover the girl completely. Even before he saw everyone on that bus die he knew that the demigod would survive.
"Please brothers don't kill her. She will be needed in the future she has a role to play and you realize that "a voice sounded from behind Zeus. "Poseidon, you do realize what a threat she is to me don't you. You have two demigod children now and it would pose a threat to me, you know it." "Yes" Poseidon said "but she is important for the future. Do you want to meddle with the fates? " Zeus sighed "I shall spare he for now, but if she, by any chance, does anything to threaten my leadership, that will be the end of her." Poseidon gave a curt nod and disappeared leaving a lingering smell of salt water.
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"The whole bus has been incinerated. All 30 passengers aboard the bus including the driver have experienced instant death caused by the lightning today. We have received strange reports of a small girl aged 3 who is the lone survivor in the terrible accident. She was completely unharmed with not a scratch on her. This is a huge miracle …." screamed the reporter as the sounds from the wreckage blared behind here.