Mei Fire: Yessss, a rewrite! HOW AWSOME IS THAT!

Disclaimer: I do not own Full Metal Alchemist. There. 'Nuff said. I won't repeat this for the rest of the chapters.

NOTE: Some of the lines are from the story 'Oh Really?', since it's like another story. Insead of Sarah and Kami, it's Brandon and Mike, their brothers. READ IT!

"Whaaaaat!" A forty five year old mom yelled. She glared at a small ten year old boy, who's yellow eyes fell on the floor, with shame. The angry mom read the purple detention slip again.

DETENTION SLIP

Name of Student: Mike Freemond

Conflict: Missuse of project material. Yelling at teacher when spoken to.

Teacher & Homeroom: Miss Regg E405

Detention Date: September 7th, 2006

"I can't believe this, what exactly did you do during class?" She yelled. Mike was about to answer, but she stopped him. "No video games or TV for two weeks, understand? Now go to your room!" Mike sighed, and he rubbed his blonde haired head. He marched up the stairs glooming all the way, and shut the door lightly.

"Mom, wasn't that a little harsh?" Sarah said. Her sapphire eyes were glued to Full Metal Alchemist : Volume 9.

Miss Freemond sighed. "He used a frog like a toilet plunger to get a pencil out of the sink's drain," she mumbled.

Sarah pushed back her dirty blonde bangs out of her eyes. "Whatever you say, mom," She said.

"Well, your friend is coming any minute now, you better prepare that DVD you were going to watch with her," Miss Freemond suggested. "I'm going to bed, don't make any racket, alright?" The strict mom walked up the stairs and entered her room. Sarah sighed. "She acts like she's the family's watchdog..." She thought.

The door bell gave a soft chime, and Sarah put her book down on the coffe table. "That must be Kami!" She said in delight. She ran up to the front door and opened it to reveal a brunette with dark blue eyes. Her hair was wavy, and she carried a pillow in one arm, a rolled up sleeping bag in another, and a messenger bag slunk at her shoulder. Tne bag was stuffed with all sorts of clothings, even some of the sleeves stuck out.

"Woo! Our first sleep-over during summer break!" Kami said in delight. Sarah nodded in agreement. "Yup. But beware about my watchdog mom, will ya? She's too stingy..." She whispered in Kami's ear. The brunette giggled, and entered the house. Sarah shut and locked the door, and followed Kami. The two girls walked to the living room, and Sarah plopped down on thw while cream couch. Kami dumbed all her stuff on the floor and sat right next to Sarah, whom turned on the TV with the remote that was settled on the coffee table a few minutes ago.

"Please, don't tell me you're gonna watch that..." Kami shuttered.

"I dunno, depends on the time!" Sarah grinned. She glanced at her digital watch.

1:00 AM, right on the spot.

"SWEET! Full Metal Alchemist is on!" She quickly smashed the channel number for Cartoon Network, and the opening song, Rewrite, was just starting.

"Time to read random books while ignoring the fact that you glue your eyes on a friggen cartoon character!" Kami sneered, She dug up a book from her overly-stuffed bag. She flipped through the pages of Girls In Pants: The Third Summer of the Sisterhood.

"I know he's not real, but still!" She glanced at the TV as Ed and Envy were fighting off in the theatre looking area. "I think Ed is cute," Sarah said.

"And short, stubborn, blahblahblah. He's an adult cartoon character..." Kami pointed out. She flipped to another page from the orange colored book.

"Anime!" Sarah yelled. "Whatever..."

Edward was just about to punch Envy right smack in the face, but then the TV went blank in an blink.

Sarah was shocked. "Wh-w-hat happened!" She said out of confusion.

Kami came up to the TV and slammed her fist onto the top, but nothing happened. She checked all the wires at the back.

"All the wires are hooked up...strange..." Kami said. The blonde huffed. "Well, we got a crappy TV here. It's time my mom bought a new one!"

The television flickered a bit, but it went back to pitch black. Sarah started to become belligerent, and tried to punch the TV. "Damn little TV isn't working! I'm gonna miss the anime!" She flailed about. Her mom's voice was heared from above. "I told you not to create any racket!" Sarah shuttered, and yelled back, "Sorry, mom!"

"Well, may as well start talking about random stuff anf eat junk food!" Kami smiled, and Sarah squealed with delight. "Yay, snacks!"

The two girls were about to dash to the kitchen to hoard all of it's junk food, but the television flickered, and started to create a static like sounds.

"Holy crap, the TV lives!" Sarah said, Kami sighed. "Oh boy..."

The TV started to swirl a little more, and more, and created a deadly black colored portal, shaded in poisonous purple.

"Uh, okay, I think the TV hates us now..." Sarah mumbled. It started to pull in the two girls. Before they can even react, it sucked them in, and closed. The television stood blank, but flickered and flickered, until the anime was finally on again.

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"Ow...my head..." Kami mumbled. She rubbed her head, and noticed Sarah knocked out right next to her. Oddly, she had some weird looking clothes on. She had a white trench coat just like Edward's, except the sleeves were pulled up. She had one fingerless white glove on her left hand, and a full white glove on her right with a strange looking alchemy circle on it. She had her silver heart pendant, whom her boyfriend have given to her. Underneath was a blue T-shirt, at the bottom it was trimmed white, and had black jeans.

"Strange..." She mumbled. She obvserved her own clothing. Her's was indeed strange like Sarah's. She had an amethyst colored head band, black fingerless gloves, a black T-shirt with a white star on it, blue cargo pants that had metal rings near the pockets. Kami stared for a minute. "This is too werid!"

Then she looked at her surroundings.

Where were they?

In a desert, my friend.

A scorching hot, desert.

Sarah shot up. "FLYING BISCUTS!" She yelled. She looked around, herself, and to Kami. "Wow, what's with the new get-ups we have right now?" She asked. "And where are we?" She added.

"I don't know, but looks like we're gonna find out. Look over their! Travelers!" She pointed out to the distance. There was a gray dot and a red dot. It was hard to see, because of the heat waves blocking their view.

"Let's go!" Kami yelled. She dashed to where the travelers were. Sarah stood for a moment and thought. "TV, Full Metal Alchemist, gettings sucked in, desert..." She thought, but shrugged. "Ah who cares. I just wanna get out of this hell hole! Wait for me, Kami!"

She dashed up ahead, tailing Kami.

Little did they know this was the mark of a new adventure...

Mei Fire: Short, but newly improved. Like, UBERLY! Lots of words...heh. A review would be nice!