I do not own Naruto this is your chapterly warning.
Talking will be "like this"
Thoughts will be like this
Kyuubi talking will be like this
Flashbacks will be like thisYes the story will be altered slightly but will remain mostly the same (unless something comes up)
No flamers please!!!!!!!!!!!
This is my first fic and I don't have practice writing them.
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Morning after the Kyuubi's defeatThree shadows darted through Konoha. When the shadows reached the Hokage tower the leader of the three anbu stated that he had disturbing news for the third Hokage.
The newly reinstated Hokage had many matters to deal with after the attack by the powerful fox demon and the sacrifice of the Yondaime. When he heard the news from the anbu captain he ordered others to take over the paperwork and ordered ninja not busy to patrol the area where he was headed.
When he reached his destination he and his escorts stopped and stared. The anbu captain had been true in his unbelievable statement. When the anbu captain had stated, "The Kyuubi's body has disappeared." All that was left was the cleared sight where the enormous body had lain after its soul had been removed.
Quickly all of the ninja who had been on duty were questioned. All had only one thing to say. "The body was there before sunup". Only one anbu could add anything else. He had been ordered to scout for villagers who might have been left behind in the destruction before the demon's body had been removed. Thirty minutes before the sun rose over the horizon the anbu heard somebody crying. He searched for five minutes before he found the person. He saw a lean, slightly handsome man with a tear stricken face crying for his brother. Before the anbu could reach the man he was captivated by a sight that paralyzed him. The man had looked at the anbu and the anbu saw that the man had glowing orange eyes.
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Three years after the Kyuubi's defeat
"I'm looking for a house near the edge of town please. perferably with a nearby shop that is for sale." said the man. The real estate dealer looked disgusted when the man stated that he was on a limited budget but did not state what the budget was. Several hours afterward the man found what he was looking for. "what kinds of buisnesses are nearby?".
"Only a bar and a grocery store are within two blocks not counting stores for sale", growled the real estate dealer, eager to see the man leave after occupying him when he could be on his break eating lunch.
"How much is the down payment?", said the lean customer coldly.
"Only 5,000 but the full cost is 40,000", stammered the real estate dealer.
"Perfect", stated the customer with a smile filled with teeth."When will I be able to move in?"
"Once you pay for the house", said the dealer.
Within the next hour the deal was finalized and the customer left with the deed in hand.
Afterward the dealer went to the local bar and ordered a drink. The bartender asked what the matter was but recieved no answer. After a few drinks the bartender asked again and the dealer replied,"I had the strangest customer today. He seemed normal enough. He was skinny and handsome. But when I was showing him properties near the rebuilt area he freaked me out."
"I swear his eyes flashed orange when i told him it was rebuilt because of the Kyuubi attack."
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Sorry for the lack of story line but this is only the intro
Please don't flame me I just need practice
