Here is chapter one of the rewrite of Strike Witches: The Beginning.
Disclaimer: I do not own Strike witches, just the plot and OC's.
Chapter 1: Some news
"Minna this way." A man says.
"Okay." Minna says as she follows a man down a forest path.
"Now Minna close your eyes." The man says. Minna closes her eyes. She feels the man take her hand and start to lead her down the forest path. They walk for five minutes while she still has her eyes closed as she listens to the forest. She can hear the birds chirping and a slight breeze blowing through the trees. She feels the hand pulling hers tug back on hers stopping her.
"Okay Minna, you can open your eyes now." The man says. Minna opens her eyes and lets a gasp escape her mouth as she looks at the meadow of flowers in front of her.
"Wow! Lucas, this is beautiful." Minna says.
"No. now it is beautiful since you are here." Lucas says making Minna blush. He bends down and picks a white flower and straightens up. He turns to Minna and tucks her hair behind her left ear and puts the white flower in her hair making her blush.
"Thanks Lucas." Minna says as she tip-toes to kiss Lucas. The two start to make out and fall to the ground making out. The two are staring up at the sky ten minutes later with their hearts beating a mile a minute as they catch their breath.
Lucas stands and brushes off his uniform. Lucas is a commander and his full name is Lucas Karlston Elrick and is fairly high ranked in the Karlsland military. He looks down at Minna who looks up at him. He stretches his hand out to her and she takes it and he helps her up to her feet. The two hug with Minna fitting under Lucas's chin since he stands at 6'5" and Minna is 5'9". Minna looks up into Lucas's red eyes and has his back length silky snow white hair in her fingers as he is wearing it in a braid. Lucas looks down into Minna's chocolate brown eyes and tucks her hair behind her hair again. The two go back to hugging each other.
"Thanks for bringing me here Lucas." Minna says into Lucas's chest.
"I wanted to show you this before I left." Lucas says making Minna push back a little to look up into his eyes.
"Before you leave? What do you mean Lucas?" Minna asks.
"I leave in three days. I have been reassigned to the Liberion battleship the Missouri." Lucas says.
"Why did you get assigned to a USL ship?" Minna asks.
"Those are my orders from the Kaiser." Lucas says shocking Minna.
"How long will you be gone for?" Minna asks as she rests her head against Lucas's chest.
"I will be gone from six to nine months." Lucas says as he wraps his arms around Minna's back.
"Well I believe that we should head back." Lucas says.
"Yeah it is getting late." Minna says agreeing. The two walk back to a jeep that is parked at the end of the forest path. Lucas helps Minna in. he walks around and hops into the jeep and starts it. They drive for an hour till they return to Kiel, Karlsland. Lucas stops in front of Minna's home.
"Lucas would you like to come in?" Minna asks.
"Sure Minna."
Lucas follows Minna inside her home. He goes and sits on the couch and puts his officer's hat on the coffee table. He sits there as he waits for Minna to return. She returns ten minutes later not wearing her uniform, but a sleeping gown that is transparent. She sits next to Lucas who turns a little red and tries to avoid looking at her since he can see her white panties through the pink transparent night gown. The only part that is not transparent is her chest area as it is a solid pink.
"You know if you wanted me to stay for something different all you had to do was ask." Lucas says.
"That easy to tell?"
"It is pretty obvious Minna."
"Well I was hoping into persuading you into spending the night with me and possibly having sex with me." Minna says.
"May I ask what brought this about and do you really want to have sex Minna?"
"Well we have been dating for almost two and a half years, and yes I want to have sex with you Lucas." Minna says blushing.
"To be honest I kind of wanted to do this but felt it was too soon." Lucas says.
"So that is a yes then?" Minna asks.
"Yes Minna it is." Lucas says. Minna leans over and kisses Lucas, who grabs her and puts her on his lap as the two start kissing passionately.
*Lemon*
Five minutes later they stop their make out session and go to Minna's room. He walks in to see a queen sized bed. Lucas takes his uniform top off and puts it on the dresser. He turns around to see Minna with her arms crossed lifting her breasts and has an irritated look on her face.
"What?"
"Your pants too."
"What?"
"You heard me. If you are sleeping with me I want your pants off." Minna says now blushing.
"Fine. I'll take off my pants." Lucas undoes his belt, then the buttons on his pants and takes them off and puts them on top of his uniform top.
"Happy?"
"Now I am." She says as she stares at him only in his boxers. The two climb in to the bed and they start to make out. Lucas takes off Minna's night gown and lowers her panties to her ankles and takes them off. Minna takes off his boxers.
"Are you ready Minna?" Lucas asks.
"Yes I am Lucas, but it will be my first time." Minna says.
"Mine too Minna. We will take it slowly okay?" Lucas asks.
"Okay." Minna says.
Lucas enters her and stops at her hymen and she braces. Lucas pushes and breaks her hymen and stops as Minna has tears running down her cheeks. He kisses her.
"Are you okay Minna?"
"Yeah. It doesn't hurt any more. You can continue." She says.
"Okay." Lucas says. The two kiss and he starts to thrust as they are kissing which causes Minna to moan. They start to near their climaxes a few minutes later.
"Lucas…I'm nearing…" Minna pants.
"Me…too Minna." Lucas says.
Minna has her climax first while Lucas kisses her as she screams her release. He follows a minute later and he releases his load into her and she shivers from the feeling. Lucas falls but catches himself and lowers himself onto Minna. He rests his head on her breasts and rolls them to where Minna is on top and she is resting her head on Lucas's chest. Lucas grabs the covers and pulls them over him and Minna. Him and Minna fall asleep a few minutes later from exhaustion and the pleasure the two are feeling.
*End of lemon*
Lucas wakes up early in the morning to find his face between Minna's DD sized breasts and he starts to blush. He can't move because Minna has her arms wrapped around him keeping his face between her breasts. Lucas just lays there and Minna releases him and rolls to lay on her right side a few minutes later. Lucas quietly gets out of bed and gets dressed. He leaves the room and goes into the kitchen and makes breakfast for Minna. He finishes up and cleans up. He returns to Minna's room to see that she is still asleep. He walks up to her and kisses her on her forehead then leaves her room. He grabs his officer's hat and walks out the door. He hops in his jeep and heads for the base. He arrives at the base and is not I.D'd because everyone knows Lucas's jeep, but then again it stands out like a sore thumb since it is all black and has some things the other vehicles don't have.
Minna wakes up two hours after Lucas left. She notices that he is not in the bed with her. She gets out of bed and goes into the kitchen since she smells cinnamon. She walks in but does not see Lucas, but a covered plate and a note.
Minna happy 16th birthday. I wish that I could spend this day with you, but I had to return to base to continue in getting ready to set sail. I made you some breakfast. Enjoy.
Love Lucas
Minna looks at the plate to see that its pancakes. Something that she loves, especially ones made by Lucas since he adds cinnamon and a few other things that make them really good. She starts eating but has a tear run down her cheek to know that Lucas leaves in two days and won't be back almost for a year, which makes her cry that the person that she loves will be gone off fighting against the Neuroi that arrived a year and a half ago. People have been dying from the Neuroi attacks and she is now in her room on her bed crying in sadness and fear because she knows that there is a possibility that she could lose Lucas to the Neuroi.
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