Whose Daughter Is It? Ch.1
Alice's POV
"Aye, good morning darling. How was your slumber?" My father Barbossa asked as I stepped onto the main deck. "Great father. But can I ask you a serious question?" I replied. "Only if you want an serious answer." He replied, his eyes focused on the sea. "Um father, I was thinking of somewhere a bit more private, like your study." I suggested.
In Barbossa's Study…
"So what's your question dearie?" He asked as he opened a bottle of rum. "Well I was wondering.. If you really are my father?" I asked, fearful of his answer. "Aye I figured this day would come. No Alice, I am not your legal father. A dear fellow pirate of mine is your real father." He replied, speaking the words with a sigh. "Well who is my REAL dad then?" I asked, looking at him with my gigantic brown eyes. He said one name. That was all it took to change my life forever. "Captain Jack Sparrow." And then our ship was under attack.
Jack's POV
"Aye Jack, you might want to take a gander at this." Gibbs said from top deck. "Aye mate what is it?" I drawled out, toddling toward him while holding my bottle of rum. "Barbossa." I replied with a sickly sweet tone of revenge in my words. He ruined my chance at eternal life and now it's time to pay the piper. Or in this case, pay the pirate. "All cannons at the ready!" I yelled furiously. I mean, he took my ship from me.
Aye, it's another cliffy! I kinda wanted to make Jack seem sort of childish because it adds a touch of humor to the story. It also proves how much he loves his dear Pearl. And seriously "Whose daughter is it?" We may never know the truth! JK! Review and tell me what to improve! I am open to criticism and ways to improve the story!
Late,
Little Mia(I just randomly typed that but I might go as that for now on!)