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Max's POV
"Now stay there. I told you to listen but you ignored me." Jeb screamed at me. I started to cry.
I was once again locked in the closet. If you haven't noticed already my life isn't normal.
My name is Max, Maximum Ride. I am sixteen years old and abused by my father, mother, and boyfriend.
Most people would have gotten help but I can't. I never have the time. I go to school everyday and am picked up right after school.
I am then locked in my room a.k.a. the closet. The weekends I am just locked in the closet.
I curled into a ball. School was no better than the closet. Evryone teased me and called me names.
Back to the present I was being punished now because the principal told me that I could no longer go to the school for not passing my classes.
So I had been beaten and put in my closet. Tommarow I would start my new school. Wich means that my boyfriend, Sam, would probaply beat me to no end.
I would pull through though. I had never cried in front of someone before. Actually I was a smart-aleck.
It got me into more trouble than America's most wanted. Oh well. I layed down and hoped that tommarow wouldn't be the worst day of my life.
"Max, get your lazy ass out of bed." My mom screamed at me. Wait you can't even call her a mom.
I got up and stretched. I changed into my sweatpants and a long sleeved shirt. I had to wear long sleeves or people might get suspicious.
I walked out to the kitchen. I started to make breakfast and coffee. "Max, where is my coffee?" Dad screamed.
"Hold on it's almost done." I hurried so he wouldn't slap me. The doorbell rang. I ran to get it.
Sam was at the door. He shoved past me and into the kitchen and sat down. I rushed to get father some coffee and food.
"Max, get us food and start walking to school." Mother cammanded. I hurried and got food sadly I didn't get it fast enough so Sam smacked me.
I put my hand to my cheek and hurried out the door. I started to run so I wouldn't be late for school.
I went to the front office and got my stuff. I hurried to find my class. I went into the room.
"You are the new student. Maxine Batchelder." the teacher said. I was going to kill Jeb. (Dad)
"No, it's not Maxine Batchelder it's Maximum Ride call me Max." I snapped at him.
"Sit in the back row by Nick Walker." A tall boy dressed in all black stood up. He was probaply emo.
I went and sat by him. He looked at me and smiled. "Fang." He stuck out his hand. I just stared at it.
He took his hand back. I glared at him. He glared back. The bell rang making me jump. He smirked and walked away.
I had gym next. I walked to the gym. This was going to be a problem. I walked up to the gym teacher and somehow convinced him to let me wear what I was wearing.
Apparently they were doing fighting this week. "Max, you will fight Nick." the teacher told me.
I looked up and Nick smirked. I can't get away from him. We got on the mats the coach blew his whistle.
Nick was down five seconds later. Everyone stared shocked. The next five minutes when on like that.
I defeated every single kid there. "Since you beat everyone you get the opportunity to fight with me."
"Bring it." I said almost smiling. I made my face blank as he came at me I stepped to the side he stumbled and I pinned him.
"Okay now that I know how good you are I can actually try to beat you." He got up and we started again.
Class ended with the teacher gulping in air whil I stood there waiting for him to try to win.
The bell rang and I noticed that I wasn't even breathing hard. I grabbed my stuff and left while everyone else stared.
I had two more classes before lunch. Today hadn't been that bad except for the rumors that went around about the new kid.
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