Angel of the Streets (remake)

Congratulations, you have now somehow stepped into my life, which I hate. You would have to be insane if you could love my life. My name's It, not like literally, it's just what I'm called. I forgot my real name, and I miss it, but I guess I could live without it. I was just this, a she-cat with no purpose in life. I was broken, shattered, never to repaired.

My mom died when I was a kit, my brother, Fang, is alive and nice, when my dad's not around. Then of course, I have my abusive father, who I just adore. Did you note the sarcasm? I just couldn't stand up to him though. He brought me down all the time, it's not like I could just magically get up and fight him, not when he's struck this fear so deep into my heart though.

I lived in a plain alley. There were rumors of course, such as the infamous Scourge, who ruled the streets of Bloodclan. I wish he'd come one day, some cat would be better than my dad. Some cat would finally beat him in a fight, and I'd be free to leave on my own accord. Like a bird…just not the prey part.

Oh well, I didn't believe in pointless miracles, or foolish dreams. They would never come true, ever. I was just stuck here, being like a slave with no hopes to my dad. I was an It anyway…without emotion, but I do have them. My dad's name was Jet, as far as I know. It's not like I really cared who would want to know a heartless monster? I certainly wouldn't, but then again, luck was never on my side. Fate was though, just in the oddest of ways imaginable.
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Jet scratched his way through into my area. I prepared myself; I was in for huge trouble. More like major abuse….

"I was supposed to have prey moons ago! Somebody's late on their work, correct It? I've given you everything you needed to survive, and you can't do me a simple favor I ask of you?" Jet stormed furiously. It was obvious he was mad at me. I knew I was going to get it this time.

"You haven't given me anything…I've just gotten worse. I only survive because of Fang, not you. You do nothing but claw, hiss, bite, and scratch at me. I'm nothing but a mouse to you. Just something you can play with and use for bigger game. Then finally you'll end it. I wished you would already."

Jet hissed, "Careful what you wish for."

I smiled slightly, "I dreamed of it for moons. Why be careful, when all I want is to be rid of the cruel, cold world? I want to be gone."

Jet pounced on me, I didn't fight back. I've waited forever to be gone…Only something went wrong with my dream. As his teeth tore into my fur and flesh, only pain came. I didn't sink into that perfect black abyss, all was still bright, just more pain. Then Jet left, giving up. Blood poured out, and my ghostly white pelt was no longer recognizable.

I was still alive, left to bleed to death. Before I gave into the hazy black mist, I heard voiced. A big, dark red tom cat with a black collar leaned over me, and that was it…I passed out.

A/N: Yes this is a remake. I could do such better than the old one…so yes here's the new one! I hope you guys like it :) Oh and please review!