Hi! This is my first book, so constructive criticism is needed. Also, quick note, I'm going to describe their outfits and brackets are their thoughts. I ran knowing what was about to happen next... *a few months earlier* I woke up, did my usual things and got dressed in a blue and black striped sweater, black leggings and green Ugg boots. I ran making sure not to buckle or else my glasses will go flying and my braces...Last time I buckled they got caught on the floor... I stepped on the bus and everyone stared, I looked in the mirror and saw my hair was a mess. (How did this happen?! I just did my hair!) I fixed it up and sat down and turned on my IPhone and listened to 'Hey Ya' by Outkast. "Hally! Hally!" I looked up brushing some dark brown hair out of my face, as soon as I saw who it was I started to smile. A blob of black hair, also known as, my bestie, Alice. "Hey!" I replied. The bus started moving "So, how's life be-" before she could finish her sentence, we were tightly strapped to our chairs before we started flying. -Thanks for reading! Go to update again tomorrow!