Disclaimer: I do not own naruto ,if I did I'd be filthy stinking rich with a brand new lab top,not a old,outdated, virus riddled computer that I have now.

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crimson fur that ripples like fire

ebony claws sharper than shattered souls

fiery tails that twist and turn to bring destruction

and a haunting call for the damned

a being that longs for chaos and destruction,

for pain and misery

doomed to be chained

into that of a weaker being

it rattled its chains against the

iron bars of its prison of flesh

as it watched the pain that the kit's own kind

bestowed upon him

and as time past

and it always does

its growing hate for it's vessels kind only grew

as it watched through his eyes

the beatings

the muggings,

and the worst of all:

the fools called him demon

the demons called him monster

and the monsters called him nothing at all

for to them he was nothing and meant nothing

and could not be considered human

how could they treat one of their own this way?

One of their young?

they said that she would as soon rip them to pieces as look at them

they said that she did not feel

they said that she was evil

they were mostly wrong

she was not evil

after all, the acts that

they committed against their own kind,

their own young,(1)

on a daily bases was worse than anything she would do to her own

for she would never take her anger or her grief

out on a innocent kit

she did feel

for if she did not

she wouldn't feel the need to crush their skulls under her claws

or to rip out their throats with her own powerful jaws

for their crimes they committed to her kit

yes, her kit

for if his own kind could not claim him as one of their own

could not see the truth

could not see his kind heart,and pure soul

then she would

she will claim him as her kit

her young,her offspring,

her own

and because of this

they were also right

for you never mess with this mothers kit

for this mothers wrath is worse than the deepest pits of hell

for she won't let you die

she will keep you alive in till your begging for death

but death will never come

the only ones that would have her mercy would be those few

the two that called him son

the one that called him little brother

the ones that called him friend

the ones that loved him for being himself...

and the ones who fed him instead of chasing him out onto the street

but for now

she will stay within her prison

she will heal his wounds

she will comfort him in his dreams

when it all becomes to much

that is in till he is ready

ready to cast his mortality aside

ready to become the demon that the villagers thought he was

of coarse, he'd still be the same person

so she wouldn't get revenge for what they did(2)

her gaol will soon be reached though

for the one he called brother

has become traitor

the pink haired banshee

has made her kit promise to bring him back

don't know why(3)

but she knew what the results would be

every time that he came back alone

the villagers would call him

failure

the banshee would call him loser

and say the traitor was better

her kit will want to be stronger

or will want to prove them wrong

and then

she will make her offer

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(1)she's talking about naruto

(2)she knows that naruto would never let her destroy konoha

(3)she doesn't know why sakura would want sasuke back, because all he ever did was reject her

you know a always had a knack for poems

this here is a lot better than the story I'm trying to write.

Or at least it is in my own opinion.