Spiderman is becoming the Ultra Spiderman. He and his friends meet a new girl a hero in training who was found by Nick passed out on the beach with little to no memory. Soon the girl turns Loki from bad to good. This girl knows some very amazing heroes from another dimension of earth. Now what will happen.
chapter 1 Hannah the girl who can change hearts
Spiderman saw there was a new girl at shield she was wearing a strange bracelet. "Spiderman this is Hannah I am making her your responsibility." Nick said.
"Okay," Spiderman said.
Thor was around he was looking for his brother Loki. "Loki has been causing problems." Thor said.
"Was Loki always bad?" Hannah asked.
"No, he wasn't when he was little we were really close. But something happened when we got older and he just wanted to be in control of everything." Thor said.
"Maybe he feels inferior to you," Hannah said.
"Loki never feels inferior." Thor said.
Hannah just sighed and they went into town where Loki was causing mischief. Hannah felt pain in Loki's heart and using her ability to connect with hearts and minds she did that with Loki. "What are you doing?" Thor asked.
"I am connecting with Loki's mind and heart." Hannah said.
Loki saw Hannah in his mind and she heard his thoughts how Loki wished to be strong and brave like Thor how to be loved like him and how he felt to different. "Loki I know how it feels trust me you are not alone I know you can be good." Hannah said.
"How can I be good? I have been bad for so long!" Loki said.
"I know you can do it, just focus on the good qualities you have what your powers can do that bring good." Hannah said.
Then a light surround Hannah and Loki. "What's going on?" Thor asked.
Loki remember all his good memories as a child with his brother and all he did to help his people and all the laughs he had a with his brother. Then there was bright flash and Hannah was now holding Loki's hand. "Thank you Hannah, you are amazing thanks for talking to me, how did you do that?" he asked.
"I don't know from what I can remember from when I first woke up here I could do that, but knowing you and how you felt after all you been through I understand that you will continue to grow." Hannah said.
"Hannah what did you do in that light?" Thor asked.
"That happen when I use powers before when I used on an evil being but only once, the other times the evil being ran off and broke it off leaving me in bad state of shock it took me days to recover. But that one time that one bad person turned to good." Hannah said.
"You think you succeed with him?" Spiderman asked.
"I don't know but we can only find out if he does something good without starting the problem." Hannah said.
They saw something it was Le leap. "Oh no not him again." Spiderman said.
"You know that french bulldog?" Hannah asked.
"Yes, he is crafty one." Spiderman said.
Loki tried to help but only made a mess which allowed Le leap to escape. "OH great I can't do good right," Loki said.
"It was an honest mistake." Hannah said.
They took Loki back to shield where he was handcuffed to a bed. "Come on I used my power and it worked so give him a chance." Hannah said.
"I admit Loki did try to help." Thor said.
"True but he caused damage to the city." Nick said. "But will give him one chance if he does something evil or wrecks the city I will have Thor take him back to Asgard." he said.
"Understood." Thor said.
"Okay then I want all of you to keep an eye on him," Nick said.
They went into the city to patrol. "Okay, we keep an eye out for trouble right?" Loki asked.
"Right and be careful remember what Nick said no destruction." Spiderman said.
There was an alarm bell. "Look it's Grizzly he has this high tech bear suit." Spiderman said.
They went down to stop him. "Loki I think it is best if you just watch okay little brother?" Thor said.
"Fine I guess I better see how it is done." Loki said.
Hannah was trying to help by throwing rocks she knew it would be a bad idea to use her power again it needed time to recharge. Grizzly got thrown back into the alley. "Hey where did he go?" Hannah asked.
Then Grizzly showed up behind Hannah the others didn't see but Loki did. Loki used his magic and got in the dark hit Grizzly in the back with his staff and held him still with magic. "Loki." Hannah said.
"Good work little brother," Thor said.
Spiderman then webbed up Grizzly and Loki used his magic to repair the damage Grizzly caused to the store.
They went back to shield. "Loki saved me and he repaired the damages Grizzly caused." Hannah said.
"Yes and he did it without breaking the deal." Spiderman said.
"I say he did a good job." Thor said.
"Fine he can stay, but he you three's responsibility!" Nick said.
"Well I guess I need to get use to this hero thing," Loki said.
"Yep," Hannah said.
"I hope we don't get more than we bargained for," Spiderman said.
"I hope you know you have behave here so try to keep your mischievous jokes on the down-low." Thor said.
"Okay," Loki said.
Meanwhile certain friends were looking for Hannah.
To be continued.