This is my very FIRST Maximum Ride fanfic so, please don't hate it

This is my very FIRST Maximum Ride fanfic so, please don't hate it.

Disclaimer- Don't own Maximum Ride. JP does. Cries bitterly

Tfq out.

MY Pov.

"I HATE ALL OF YOUR CONSTANT FIGHTING AND ARGUING AND DADDY… WE ARE NOT YOUR SLAVES THAT SHOULD OBIDEIENTLY FOLLOW YOUR ORDERS OR BOW DOWN TO YOUR OH SO POWERFUL FEET AND GROVEL FOR YOUR FORGIVENESS BECAUSE WE ARE PIECES OF WORTHLESS SCUM THAT ARE THE MOST UNITELLIGENT BEGINGS ON EARTH!" I yelled, slamming the back door behind me.

Hallo people. I am Naomi Kyle Minkna. In the eyes of my dearest father, I am the daughter of a itch, a worthless piece of scum that never listens or does what is asked of me. And, my daddy is very sexist and thinks that women should have no rights or free will and should bow down at men's feet and grovel for forgiveness because we have displeased the all mighty ruler of the house in which we live in for he is so kind and will not throw us out in the street because we could not fend for ourselves. And that women can not drive properly. I know that's exactly what he thinks.

Because I can read minds.

Oh my gosh! She can read minds! Don't think around her ever or Naomi will corrupt your very mind so she can take over the world! Ha-ha; that's the description of me at school. They don't really know that I can. Oh yeah—I can also:

-Fly

-Consume myself in blue fire

- Read minds

I have this friend—let's call her um…, Khatherine-kay (Kay for short). She also is like me in some ways. She can:

-Fly

-Run as fast as the fastest animal on earth

-Bend people's will to match her own needs.

-And breathe fire.

Which means…

We are flippin' freaks of nature. Did I mention that me and Kay both can turn into any mammal on earth yet? I don't think I have. Until now.

Well, how did we get thins way? Read on, read on.

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My earliest memory was --I think—was darkness and needles pricking me everywhere.

Where the heck am I? I thought. Next was a scream. I think They had hit a vein.

"Success," Muttered one of Them. He was dressed in a white lab coat and had a clipboard and dark, black hair. He looked at me and said, "Oh my God. This…this is Experiment 5! I can't believe this! They are letting me test Ex. 5!" apparently, I was Experiment number five. Oh the joy.

Happily, the whitecoat left me alone in this place of eternal darkness and cold.

I laid down and felt something cold under me. I hastily reached upward and felt the top of a crate. I reached for the sides and felt metal bars.

Where was I? how did I get here? I think I remembered a memory before that one; of green grass, and a colourful beach ball being tossed to me by a laughing woman in a blue business suit.

"Hey," said a voice next to me. I screamed a bit at the sudden lack of silence but recovered quickly.

"Um… hi?" I replied scared.

"Are you really here? Or am I just talking to myself?" the voice asked. I shrugged then realized that who-ever was there couldn't see me.

"I dunno. I don't even know if I'm here myself. If you are really there, what's your name? or what do they called you?"

"I think I'm Ex. 6. nothing special I guess. Well not as special as you are Five. I wish They gave me as much attention as you." The girl (It sounded like a girl) reached for her arm and moaned.

"Are you okay Six?" I asked, trying to reach between the bars. Six scooted away, growling.

I'm fine. I think they hit a vein when they gave me those shots." Six chuckled. "It doesn't really feel like anything compared to what They are going to do."

I gulped. "What are They going to do?" and then, another whitecoat came in, giving the dark room some light. I cowered into a corner of my little cage and covered my eyes. But, not enough to see Six's cage and I think four others with kids inside of them. The Whitecoat gave me an evil smile and opened my cage door.

"Hello," he said, "Time to go now." And he grabbed my arm and took me away to this place with a little bed-thing in the middle of it and a bunch of other people with those stupid whitecoats on surrounding it.

"Welcome everybody," the whitecoat said. "This is Experiment 5; the one that we just—acquired—a few days ago. The tests we took before we actually did anything showed that she has very good eyesight and withstand extremely cold temperatures already. With luck, here we can enhance those abilities and then give some in return. Today, we will—hopefully—grant this underestimated child some wonderful wings. Doctor, would you like to do the honors?"

"Certainly," another whitecoat said, grinning evilly. She brought out this HUGE needle full of this disgusting blue liquid and pointed it to my arm.

"This won't hurt that much child," she said starting to push the liquid in my arm. I last remember screaming and then, passing out.

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End of chapie one! YAY! Next is chapter 2.

That part will be of well, getting her awesome new powers and becoming friends with Khatherine-kay.

There is a difference between Naomi and the flock though. Guess what it is and you earn… CHOCOLATE CHIP COOKIES!

Tfq out.