A/N: I wanted to try a different kind of story and this just popped in my head. Some other notes from me can be found at the beginning and at the end parts. This will be a bit hard to understand but you'll get what the [word] means in some lines if you read it through. If you can't then just send me a PM. I will be glad to help.


-Our Story-

Good day to you, dear reader! I'm JM or JustMagnificent and I'm leaving this story for the characters themselves to tell.

Peter, Please be careful, Not many people wants to know of your physical relationship, I'm keeping this on a T rating.

Of course. We understand

Thanks, I'll be off now, be back in a moment.

Okay, Hi there! Peter here with Edmund...

Hello!

We're here to tell you a story as JM had said...

Our story, to be specific. I don't want to say our love story it seems kinda awkward.

But it is our love story.

Yeah, but it's not one of those romantic soap operas you see on tv these days.

I know what you mean, this is more like... comedy

I agree, especially at the time when you confessed, I thought you were gonna cry then. My big, strong, older brother actually crying, now that's comic... OW!

Shut up, Ed!

Why did you punch me for?

Anyway, These are stories that led up to our relationship from the first time we entered Narnia up to now that were in Aslan's country. JM also left a note here for you guys, it says: SPOILER ALERT FOR LWW, HHB, PC, VDT & LB. I don't know what it means but JM just wanted to let you know... Now, Ed? Could you tell them the very first time you actually showed affection.

Oh Pete, don't make me laugh. Anyway, sure I'd he honored to tell that story.

It was during the time when I was held captive by the witch. I was so miserable then and the only thing I had hoped for was to see my siblings again. I felt guilty for my actions and wanted to apologize to Peter. When I was finally rescued and Aslan had talked to me, I felt a bit better but the guilty feeling, or as I thought it was, returned when I saw Peter again and it killed me that he didn't react at all when he saw me.

[Really? I couldn't have been that shunning.]

Shut up, Pete. Back to the story, when The witch showed up and kept attacking me with her words, I kept quiet, unresponsive and pardon my language didn't give a single fuck. I felt Peter grip my shoulder as to show his support and the feeling I got with being around him came back again. After everything that day when everyone had retired to their respective tents, I went with Peter to ours and there I apologized to him until tears formed in my eyes.

[for the record, I think it was very good acting.]

Would you just let me tell the story? [okay, shutting up] He forgave me but there was something else I wanted to tell him, I wanted to ask him why I get this wierd feeling in my stomach when he's near but I couldn't get myself to bring it up. Finally, he turned away from me and fell in deep slumber. I couldn't sleep so I just lay there staring into space. Peter's body turned in his sleep facing towards me. I reached for his face and caressed his cheeks which made me feel some unusual emotions, I heard rustling outside and withdrew my hand. A nature spirit came and woke up my brother. I was glad that I didn't wake him up because his initial reaction was drawing his sword. The spirit brought us news of what had happened to Aslan and I felt as guilty as ever. Peter told me that I shan't be feeling guilty for it was in vain that this was to be avoided.

Peter? If you please.

Huh? Oh. Of course I'd love to tell this part.

Being the overprotective brother that I am. [What?] I thought about excluding Edmund from the battle but seeing that his participation was inevitable, I placed him far by the archers. [I was the only one without a bow then.] During the battle, the first thought I had upon seeing him charge towards the witch was this boy is gonna get himself killed. But I was glad he did because among everyone else, he was the only one who had the right mind to aim for the wand instead of the witch, herself. When Aslan came roaring in and saved the day, everyone was yelling in victory except for the hurt. Unfortunately, Edmund was one of them. I thought I had lost my only brother then; he was bleeding to death but thanks to Lucy's cordial he regained his strength. I hugged him tightly, never wanting to let go and suddenly felt something for him that was more than just brotherly affection.

[I thought I was gonna die by his hug; it was incredulously tight.]

Excuse me? [I love hugs :)] Anyway, the days that followed, on the journey to Cair Paravel. We became more of brothers, we stopped the bickering [But once we were an item, it started again...] Ed? [Yes?] Shut the **** up. [See what I mean?] Excuse him, he gets overzealous when something like this comes up. Back to the story, I actually found out so many things about Edmund then that I didn't know. Maybe because he was such an ass back then. [Oh, you loved me when I was an ass.] ... [Sorry, I know, I know, shut the fuck up - what? Mine is not censored? ] We shared laughs, problems and the like. The first night after the battle poor little Edmund had a nightmare and came running to me. [I was 10!] I've never seen him so frightened before. [ Sure! Ignore me.] He said he dreamed about the dungeons of the witch. I wasn't sure what I was supposed to do so I let him sleep with me. Since he was so small [I wasn't that small] we fit in nicely.

The coronation day was one of the days in Narnia I will never forget. Ed? [So now you're talking to me.] I just want to know something. [What?] What did you think of the title that was given to you? [The Just? Well, it did prove true when it comes in judgement and counsel. I was your adviser after all; I thought it was just right for me. I'm Just as you are Magnificent.] Thank you for that wonderful comment. Edmund was actually jealous of me that night. He said why do I get to be High King. [I was not jealous! I simply wanted to know why you get the big gold crown.] Ed, stop whining, you're 19 years old. It does not suit you at all. [Fine... Stop snickering!] Right, I'm sorry. Anyway, I gave him the reason that I'm the eldest but he didn't take it at all. I used my charm [What charm?] ... [Peter, what are you... Mmhpm... mmm...*pant] I hope that will shut you up. Have you been eating from the toffee tree again? You taste sweet. Anyway, I used my charm to get away from him and all his insufferable questions. The next few days were completely horrid. We really didn't know our duties and spent our first month in academe. Edmund was, though I don't know how it was possible, the best student among the four of us. Susan did everything she could to catch up with him but he did this with no effort at all. He proved excellent in logistics and philosophy and I just admired him more because of it. [Really, Pete?] I thought you- [Come here.] Ed! Mmph!

Oh hai der, it's me JM. I guess the kings are a bit... [Get back here!] ...busy right now to continue their story at the time but do be a dear [You're not getting away from me, Edmund Pevensie!] and leave a review before you go. Pardon the two boys with their errors on grammar, run-ons, diction and punctuation; let me know if you see any.

[hey! Let go! Aah!] Will you two stop it!

Yo Caspian! Get those two lovebirds back here! They still have a second chapter to do!

Oh, and Thanks for coming by... :)