I have some problems with paragraphs. English is not my native language so I could have some mistakes in grammar, sorry!

Now I want to tell about my Oc.

Name: Diyana or Di

Looks like Karai in tmnt 2012 but she has straight and only black hair. She has no make up on her face like Karai has and she has emerald eyes. She is a little bit rude but know how to behave in public and with older people.

Age:14

About me.
I was born in Moscow but moved to New York when my Mather died, it was long ago. I and my father moved to New York because tmnt were there, I knew that they are just a cartoon, but I won't say father why I wanted to move to New York. I started to watch them because one time I saw Karai in the tmnt and she looked like me so I started to watch it. After I started to watch tmnt I started to go to the ninja school I wanted to be like tmnt and know I who to fight even better than them.
At my normal and boring school I have no friends some times I just wish that tmnt would be real! Children say that I am like a shadow in the school. No one even dare to talk to me because one time one boy was making fan of me and I just beat him up and broken him his hand after that I haven't seen him in our school.

The Story

I was watching my favorite movie TMNT and training my ninja skills. In a sadden everything became white and that was the last thing I remember.

When I woke up I was in glass cube and near was some electronic machine and how I understood (a little bit later) that I am in the Kraangs lab. I just can't believe that impossible I thought.

"Where am I?"I asked screaming.

"You are in the other demotion in the Kraangs lab"answered the Kraang. I just can't explain what happened in my mind in that moment.

"HELP, SOME ONE HELP ME!" I screamed in panic.

"No one will help you her," said the Kraang

"You made a mistake Kraang, we will help her," said some familiar voice.

"Can we fight already?!"said another familiar voice.

When they jumped down I saw...Leo,Raph,Donnie and Mike? I think I became crazy.

Donnie ran to me and broke the glass with his Bo stick that I could get out. I gave him my hand for him to help me but instead of helping me he looked at me shocked.

"Hey, will you help me get out of her or you will just stand frozen?"I asked nervously.

"Oh!..umm..Yeah... Won't you attack as you all ways do or just ran away?" Donnie asked with a strange look at me.

"Why I need to attack you if you haven't don anything to me?And I meet you for the first time... I will get out by my self!"with that words I tried to get out of the cube.

When I got out of the glass cube they already were finishing with Kraangs.

"We meet again Karai and you won't touch my brothers!"Leo said with a bit of anger.

I looked at him like he was craze because I really though he is."First I meet you for the firs time, second I am not Karai I am Diyana and third why I need to hurt you if..."some one hit me and it was the Kraang he hit me with electro shocker. I fall every thing became darker and darker and darker. Before every thing became dark I saw some one took me up, but I couldn't feel who it was Kraang or turtle because the only thing I felt was pain.

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