Here's the actual first chapter..The story is a manga I'm working on..So that's why the text is the way it is...You can consider it as a play or an episode...lol! Well enjoy!! ^^
(In someplace hidden from the public but in an Apartment, in some bedroom. At 9:16 am…)
Koeno- (Nervous sighs) "…Tonight…3,100 people going…5 band members…a few songs…our first concert…AHHH!!! I CAN'T TAKE IT!!" (He wakes everyone else in the apartment)
Daion- "…Koeno? What are you doing up so EARLY…I'm trying to sleep…"(Falls over) "Good…night…"
Koeno- "DAION WAKE UP!!" (Daion wakes up) "ONLY 10 MORE HOURS AND IT'S NOT EARLY!! IT'S VERY LATE!! OH, AND WHY ARE YOU IN MY APARTMENT!!! IN MY ROOM!!"
Daion- "We're roomies, along with Asahi, Kage, and Sakebi!! We all live here…but that's a secret…from all our fans!! Heh…heh…"
Koeno- "…Well I need to take a shower…OUT!!" (Kicks Daion out)
(30 minutes later)
Koeno- "Maybe I shouldn't have been so mean to Daion…he's like my older brother" (goes downstairs)
Asahi- "Hey!! There you are SLOWPOKE!! Sakebi made us breakfast…but now it's all cold…"
Sakebi- "You better like it!! I made it and learned the recipe last night…I ran out of ingredients so I put whatever I could find in…"
Kage- "What kind of stuff did you put in?"
Sakebi- "Laxatives, plants, and dead bugs…nice huh?"
Asahi Daion, Kage- "MOTHER!!" (They all run to the bathroom) "%#$^%^$!!!"
Koeno- "Maybe I'll visit my mom…she lives a few blocks away" (Tries to run away)
Sakebi- "NO!! Try my "Special Ramen"!! It's good!!"
Koeno- "More like "Crap Ramen"..I'm not hungry…so." (His stomach growls) "CRAP!!"
Sakebi- "SHUT UP AND EAT IT!!" (Shoves it down Koeno's throat) "EAT!! HOW DOES IT TASTE?"
Koeno- "…Someone shoot me…NOW!!" (Swallows) "Hey!! That tastes really good." (His stomach starts hurting) "#^&*&^$%!!" (Runs to the bathroom)
Sakebi- "At least, everyone's thinking about the bathroom…instead of the concert" (Washes dishes)
(Two hours later)
Everyone- "UGHH!" (Everyone holds their stomachs while lying on the floor)
Kage- "This is all thanks to that D*** ramen!!"
Daion- "We might have to cancel the concert…"
Koeno- "No! Fans have spent money to see us…we can't just cancel it from a few tummy aches…"
Asahi- "Koeno's right!! I want to see everyone's HAPPY faces when we play!!"
Daion- "Let's be sure to practice now!! Ughhh…After a few minutes that is…."
(Hours later, in the band's dressing room)
Koeno- "Two more hours!!" (Rolls on floor) "AHHH!!"
Hana- "Mr. Koeno, please take a seat…I need to fix your hair. And quit acting like a five year old!!"
Koeno- "But…I…can't…help…"
Hana-"NOW!!"(Picks Koeno up and puts him in the chair) "THERE!!"(Starts fixing his hair) "La la la…"
Kage- "…Woah!! Don't want to be on her dark side…"
(Two hours before the concert)
Daion- "WHERE THE H*** DID I PUT IT!!!"
Sakebi- "Oh Crap!! Where did you put the guitar picks?"
Daion- "But I left them here. D*****!!"
Kage- "If you don't find them in the next thirty minutes. You officially lost them…"
(Thirty-one minutes later)
Asahi- "Hey!! I found them!!"
Daion- "Where were they?"
Asahi- "In my…BOXERS!!"
Everyone- "WTF?!!"
Koeno- (Sigh) "We've been playing for two years and it finally comes to this…our first concert…"
Asahi- "Do you think the fans will enjoy us..?"
Daion- "I hope so…We're a "Visual Kei" band. Plus we've been out for two years. They'll enjoy us."
Koeno- "This has always been a dream of mine..to play an actual concert…"(Tears) "I'm here…"
Daion- "We all worked very hard and this is another opportunity…good job guys!!"
(About three minutes before concert)
Koushin- "GUYS!! YOU'RE ON NEXT!!"
Everyone- (Takes a deep breath and hugs each other)"Good luck…we can do this…"
Koeno- "This is finally it…Guys, let's make ROCK HISTORY!!"
Everyone- "YEAHHH!! Come on, let's go!!" (Everyone starts to go on stage except Koeno)
Koeno- "Kurashima…you made a promise. This is for you."(Goes on stage) "Here we go…"
Crowd- (Cheers and screams) "KURAYAMI TORI!!!!"
To be continued….
Thankies for reading!!! I hope to upload more chapters...soon...Hope you liked it!!! w