I thought we needed some Another fanfictions so I decided to make one, hope you like it.
Izumi stared in fear at the boy lying in her blood covered arms. His wonderful golden hair stained with scarlet red blood.
"I… I'm sorry… now I can't… help you…" The boy stuttered in exhaustion. "I wish… I could have done… more."
"Shut up, stupid boy. You're not going to die here, you have a promise to keep", Izumi said, a tear rolling down her cheek. "You promised that you would never leave me! Don't you remember!" The boy smiled.
"I'm sorry… I… couldn´t keep… that promise", the dying boy said. "I'll… do my… best, trying to… help you from… the other… side." After that sentence the boy closed his eyes, took a last deep breath and said. "See you later… Izumi…"
"Naoyaaaaa!" The lone girl screamed out into the darkness, tears flooding down her cheeks.
~Flashback~
A boy and a girl walked down Yomiyama Main Street, holding hands.
"What if we meet anyone we know?" Izumi asked, scanning the biggest street in Yomiyama for familiar faces.
"Then we say that we say that we're trying to find a way to solve our 'little problem'", Naoya answered, chuckling, he never would have imagined that Izumi could be like this.
"Okay, but I still don't like this crowded place", she said after a while.
"As you wish my dear", Naoya replied with the voice of an old man and kissed her Izumi's cheek, making her blush.
"Ah, boys are so stupid", she sighed and gave him a playful slap on the face.
~End of flashback~
Now she sat there, all alone in the middle of the night in the house of a dead boy, a boy that she loved.
"Don't make promises you can't keep", Izumi whispered as she wiped the tears in her eyes. She stared at the knife that stabbed Naoya in the stomach only minutes ago. The knife was drenched in blood, his blood. Another tear made its way down her wet cheek.
What was good? What was bad? Please tell me what you think, constructive criticism is appreciated.