The Blind Girl
Some new words from Murasakyoru: Ok, this is my very first Fiction I have ever written, and since it was written back in the days when I wasn't so very good in English is it many errors in it... But luckily, not too long ago did I get to know Mika Suzuran (that's her name on FanFiction), she and I are going to go through this story to look for errors and grammar mistakes. Mika is really good, and an amazing person! I hope we will be able to get done fast, we take one chapter at the time, so it can take some time. But anyways, enjoy this story! :D
Parings: The main is of course SasuNaru. And there will be some other parings with the people in Naruto too, but later on.
Old Message: The beginning of this story is taking place in the Manga of Naruto, from the end of chapter 354 and chapter 355. So it maybe a little spoiler if you are a person that don't read the Manga. However, this story does not have much spoiler, not very important spoiler I think.
The main character is an OC I made, she is a blind girl. You will get to know her more as the story goes on, if you want to see how she looks like, visit my profile and you will find a link that will show you a picture of her. (I did not make the picture) But please see it only after reading the first chapter. :)
---Chapter One: "Do You Know Her?"---
"ALRIGHT EVERYONE! LETS MOVE OUT!!" Naruto yelled at the top of his lungs to his friends.
The rain was pouring down from the heavens above. Everyone was wearing raincoats that looked more like long, arm-less cloaks.
"It's not so bad actually, maybe the rain will cool off mister hothead over there..." said Kiba who was sitting on his big dog Akamaru.
Naruto's team was standing outside the Konoha gate. They had finally decided to search for Sasuke. Or on the other hand, Itachi. If they did find Sasuke's older brother Uchiha Itachi, then they would surely find Sasuke later.
Sakura, Hinata, Shino, Sai, Kakashi and Yamato were assigned this dangerous mission.
Quick as lightening they disappeared from the gate and was on their way to search for the Uchiha brothers.
A few minutes later they stopped on big roof.
"Alright then." started Kakashi as everyone was standing in a circle on the big roof, which had some strange stone animals at the each end of it.
"To start off, we'll make this our starting point, and search the surroundings five km. North, South, East and West. We'll fan out in all directions. If we don't find anything we'll search out the surrounding five km from another center point, and continue as such."
Sakura noticed something wrong with the idea and said back in a worried voice."Five km? But out wireless equipment won't work if we split up that far! And we'll be in danger if we're alone when something happens!" everyone looked at the pink hair girl. "We should go in teams of two, at the very least. That way, if we encounter any enem..."
"Relax Sakura." Interrupter Yamato, who was standing at Sakura's right. However, before he could say anything more, Kakashi bit his thumb, made some hand-seals and slammed his right hand down on the roof.
The next moment, eight ninja dogs were standing in front of him.
"The echoes of your voices will reach out ears just as fast as wireless gear. One of the dogs said.
"And our noses will detect danger well enough in advance to back the closest person up." said the other.
Naruto noticed at once who the dogs were, especially the little one that was sitting on the biggest dog's head.
"Pakkun!" He said in surprise.
The copy ninja who was standing on the highest spot on the roof looked down on everyone and started explaining.
"Here's how our patrols will work." Kakashi started, getting everyone attention again. "Each person on patrol will have two of my ninja hounds as bodyguards." but was stopped by a question from Sakra again.
"Two? Wait, but then..." Sakura mumbled a little, but didn't get out much more as Kakashi smirked under his mask."Be nice to them, ok?"As Kakashi said that the dogs started to go to the person they wanted to be with.
"You can count on me, Sakura-Chan!" one of the dogs that had taken her side said.
"You always go for the noisy girls, man." said the other dog that stood beside Sakura, and looked up at her with a tired face.
"I'll go with Shino." One dog that had already gone to Shino, said.
"MmHmm." The other dog at Shino's side looked up at him suspiciously, it was almost impossible to see Shino's face behind the high collar of the raincoat.
On Sai's side was it also two dogs at his feet.
"Nice to meet you." Sai said in a happy tone and looked down on the dogs with his usual smile. This just made the other dog snarl at him.
Naruto looked how every ninja dog walked over to the other ninjas. "What about me?" he asked Kakashi.
"Since you are a "Jinchuuriki", they'll be targeting you. Since Akatsuki may attack you first, you'll be going with Yamato for backup and Hinata for her scou..." Before Kakashi could finish his sentence."Who's there?" he asked hardly and looked around.
The other ninja's on the roof looked the same way. They all noticed a small shadow moving toward them. Since the sun was hiding behind the clouds, the shadows became darker, making it difficult to see anything. Everyone tried to see who it was, but then the shadow suddenly disappeared.
"Hinata!" called Kiba to his teammate, to make she use her Byakugan.
"Hai!" Hinata called back, and was already searching the area.
After a little while, she found what she was looking for. "Over there." she said, pointing at the shadow that had arrived on the strange stone animal that was on the big roof. At once Kakashi threw out some kunais and shurikens. The next second they heard metal meet metal and all the weapons Kakashi had thrown at the shadow, lay on the roof.
"...I'm disappointed... is this how you treat an old friend, Naruto?" The voice was from a young female, and it sounded like the voice was not often spoken, since it had some kind of cutting in it when it spoke.
The shadow creature jumped down from the stone animal thing, and looked at everyone, but especially at Naruto. At the same time, the clouds disappeared from the sun, and made the shadows shrink so that they could see the person in front of them clearly.
"It has just been one and a half year, and you have already forgotten me?"
The person who was standing in front of the leaf ninjas was a beautiful woman, or as some would say, girl. She looked like she was nineteen or so.
She had long silver hair that almost touched the ground. Her clothes were thin, just the upper parts of a Kimono and her chest were wrapped in bandages. Beneath everything she wore black leather that covered most of her body. Half her face was covered by a mask that stopped at the end of her nose. Almost like Kakashi's mask. The leather stop at her thigh, so her legs were visible.')
Naruto looked at the young woman. His mind desperately trying to remember where he had seen her before. The way she looked at him, with such warm and gentle eyes… it was so familiar.
Kiba looked at Naruto, then at the young woman and back at Naruto.
"So, you know her or what?" he sounded a little annoyed.
When Naruto did not give an answer, and just continue looking desperate to remember, the girl started to walk toward him.
"Look me in the eyes." she simply said.
At that second Naruto looked at her with big eyes.
"AAH! I REMEMBER! You're Shiruba!" he yelled and pointed at her.
"Yes, I'm glad you remembered." Shiruba smiled.
