Chapter one
Jack
Hello, this is my first fic, in the first 10 or so chapters you will find spelling errors and such, And I am sorry, My writing had improved since now, I have also spelled Hermione Wrong and I am sorry, the reason for this is that my computer was on auto correct, and it always did that. I didn't catch on until one of my many reviewer's told me. I was trying to change it but I couldn't figure it out. I finally have and it is corrected later on in my story. Please don't give me bad reviews I don't care about them, they are nothing more then a shrug to me. Thanks again,
Katrina
It was a hot summer day; the Durslys just went out and bought a huge trampoline for their dearest son Dudley. Harry of course was just upstairs looking out his window and admiring the hot summer day and the picture Hermionie gave him of her before the end of last school year. Dudley's Friends Jack and Beans where over enjoying the fun when all the sudden Jacks mom came storming through the Durslys Back yard cursing and swearing.
"JACK OFF, RIGHT NOW! I told you not to be over here with that demon child Potter! He's a bad Influence! And he's Dangerous and Beans what would your mother say is she caught you over here let alone your father!".
That's all she had to say before Bean's was running out of the front gate and in to the streets yelling to Dudley
"Thanks, bye, see you at the beginning of school!".
Harry was upstairs laughing so hard his heart hurt, this wasn't the only incident that Dudley had been in so far, Practically almost all his friends now abandoned him this summer. It was all around the town that Harry had been kicked out of St.brutise's academy for bad boys from killing a teacher. Harry didn't know how this started but he didn't really care either . The next thing Harry knew was his door flying open and Dudley busting in and screaming at Harry.
Dudley tried to hit Him with his fists, but Harry was too quick and ducked. Harry had heard their car pull in. Aunt Petunia just gotten back with Uncle Vernon, Harry was supposed to be cleaning for his visit for from Hermionie tomorrow, but instead he was trying to dodge Dudley's blows. Aunt Petunia and uncle Vernon came Busting up the stairs; they walked in to see Harry standing over Dudley with his wand aimed at his face.
Uncle Vernon grabbed Harry and threw him on his bed, while aunt Petunia screamed and helped Dudley up. Even though Dudley was not hurt he still acted like it to get the sympathy vote.
Everyone except Harry stormed out. You could hear uncle Vernon's key's rustling to lock Harry's door. That night around 6 o'clock Uncle Vernon brought up some food for Harry. "You know boy," he started out " your lucky that you have that god father of yours or you would be back in that cubort under the stairs ." He said through the door. He opened the door and handed Harry a tray with Chinese food on it and slammed the door in his face. Once Harry was done he cracked open his fortune cookie and it read "you love Chinese food", Harry raised his brow at that, He thought to himself. Harry thought of Sirius the whole time he was eating. He seriousely thought of telling uncle Vernon he died.. but he couldn't and wouldn't bring himself to do it.
" Why else would I be eating Chinese food if I didn't love it! Like come on who make these things?"
Harry could barley sleep that night he was so over whelmed with these new feelings he developed this summer over Hermionie. He couldn't get her of his mind, No matter how much he tried. When he was sleeping she was in his dreams, when he was eating she was in his thoughts when he was at his desk doing his potions summer school work he couldn't help but think of Hermionie in the previous year. He just couldn't get her off his mind, He ended up going to bed around 2 am in the morning just thinking of her..
(Here's some people opinions.)
If you didn't like this chapter, well Im sorry to hear that, you probably think it's not worth reading on now, but look what some people had to say.
DecapitatedLemmings thought,You have no idea how much i've enjoyed your story so far! Katrina you are a great writer. Think about makinf it your life. Please keep this story going..your going on my faves list..sorry i havent reviewd before now..i've just been so into your story. I'ma huge HP fan and find it hard to imagin some of the FF's on Hp..but this one has really let me see Hp in a totally different ligh...and i love it! 53 chapters is a lot as it is! but i demand more! P i've never given anyone as much praise. Consider yourself my Fave HP Fanfic aurthor Katrina.
Thankyou so much for this great read so far
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Emily(the one who ect.) ) thought ,
hey its me again. u r my favourite writer ive been looking round 4 other fics as good as yours but i cant find any.Im having trouble finding your other 1.Anyways im really really enjoying your fic keep writing I cant stand the other piddely crap im reading . Thanks Emily
She also thought,
hey, i like this fic LOTS even though (Has been extracted for containing future chapter spoilers). i think your a really good writer and i am as eager to read the next chapter of this as i am to read the sixth Harry Potter book.(Witch is the biggest complement u could possibly resive from me)thanks-c ya
p.s sorry if spelling is crap.
zarinda ) thought ,
hey i just wanna say that this is the best story iv read and that im loking forward to reading the reast
sabycooper thought,hey, i just wanna say, i think your story is the best!! lol, please dont stop cause im way into it now!! lol
Melody thought,
I believed that I have reviewed and said it before: I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! Anyway, did I mention how much I love it? Ok,
There's some opinions.
enjoy
