Title: A Brand New Master
Author: Jedi Master Avalon
Summary: Obi-Wan and Alanna are practicing in the Jedi Temple on Coresant and fall into a mess of trouble in the far away galaxy of Dragonist
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As Qiu-Gon Jinn was in a meeting with the Jedi Masters while his apprentice, Obi-Wan, and his niece, Alanna, were practicing battle with their light sabers. They rounded a corner in the hall an A-Level of the building. Obi-Wan ducked as Alanna tried to slice his head off. The battle between the two had lasted about an hour. The only problem was that now they were in the halls and people were dodging them left and right. The rounded the next corner, exhausted, when Obi-Wan tripped over Alanna and went flying into a strange young woman.
"Who in the sith's hell are you?!" Alanna cried out, picking Obi-Wan up off the floor. "We could have hurt you!"
Obi-Wan looked up at her, astonished by her beauty. She had long, silver hair and the most gorgeous green eyes that stared at him without disruption. "C-can I help you f-find s-something?" Obi managed to spit out.
The woman looked at him and then at Alanna. "I am looking for Qui- Gon Jinn. My name is Avalon Raye. I am a Jedi Master. I was elected ruler of the planet Draco in the galaxy of Dragonist. I have come to seek help from my fellow Jedi." She continued to stare at Alanna, waiting for a solid answer.
"Qui-Gon Jinn is my uncle. I am Alanna Jinn and this is." she paused because when she looked at Obi-Wan he was drooling all over his tunic. "This is Obi-Wan, his genius padawan. My uncle is in a meeting with the Jedi Council. I will take you there. This way."
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"Qui-Gon something bothering you, there is." Yoda looked deeply at Qui-Gon. "The problem is not as great as the one behind the door. Open it you will, Qui-Gon."
Qui-Gon stood up and opened the door. Alanna and Avalon were standing there. Qui-Gon stood in shock. His eyes grew wide. He quickly ran up to her and held her in his arms. They both had tears in there eyes.
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"Force! Where have you been Avalon? We were told that you were dead." Qui-Gon shouted to her. The entire room was filled with smiles and surprised looks. "I have missed you so much and I have so much to tell you."
"There isn't the time my friend. I have come to ask for your help. My planet is under siege. The dark planet Flamous has taken everything over. I need your help. They have taken the life of my son as well." She explained.
"When were you married to have a son?" Qui-Gon questioned. "Or wait you don't mean."
"Yes my friend. They have taken the life of our son Hexis." The entire room stood in shock as the news just revealed. No one said a word.
"Qui-Gon what is she talking about?" Obi-Wan asked.
"She speaks the truth." He knelt down in front of Obi-Wan. "Fifteen years ago the was a party to celebrate our knighthood. We both were knighted on the same day. We were best friends and we were in love. Our son was conceived that night. That was when she left." The room grew silent. No one move in order not to break the awkward silence of the air.
Ok I really haven't had the time to finish typing the fic but I'll try to get as much up late as I can.
Pleas send reviews!!
Author: Jedi Master Avalon
Summary: Obi-Wan and Alanna are practicing in the Jedi Temple on Coresant and fall into a mess of trouble in the far away galaxy of Dragonist
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As Qiu-Gon Jinn was in a meeting with the Jedi Masters while his apprentice, Obi-Wan, and his niece, Alanna, were practicing battle with their light sabers. They rounded a corner in the hall an A-Level of the building. Obi-Wan ducked as Alanna tried to slice his head off. The battle between the two had lasted about an hour. The only problem was that now they were in the halls and people were dodging them left and right. The rounded the next corner, exhausted, when Obi-Wan tripped over Alanna and went flying into a strange young woman.
"Who in the sith's hell are you?!" Alanna cried out, picking Obi-Wan up off the floor. "We could have hurt you!"
Obi-Wan looked up at her, astonished by her beauty. She had long, silver hair and the most gorgeous green eyes that stared at him without disruption. "C-can I help you f-find s-something?" Obi managed to spit out.
The woman looked at him and then at Alanna. "I am looking for Qui- Gon Jinn. My name is Avalon Raye. I am a Jedi Master. I was elected ruler of the planet Draco in the galaxy of Dragonist. I have come to seek help from my fellow Jedi." She continued to stare at Alanna, waiting for a solid answer.
"Qui-Gon Jinn is my uncle. I am Alanna Jinn and this is." she paused because when she looked at Obi-Wan he was drooling all over his tunic. "This is Obi-Wan, his genius padawan. My uncle is in a meeting with the Jedi Council. I will take you there. This way."
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"Qui-Gon something bothering you, there is." Yoda looked deeply at Qui-Gon. "The problem is not as great as the one behind the door. Open it you will, Qui-Gon."
Qui-Gon stood up and opened the door. Alanna and Avalon were standing there. Qui-Gon stood in shock. His eyes grew wide. He quickly ran up to her and held her in his arms. They both had tears in there eyes.
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"Force! Where have you been Avalon? We were told that you were dead." Qui-Gon shouted to her. The entire room was filled with smiles and surprised looks. "I have missed you so much and I have so much to tell you."
"There isn't the time my friend. I have come to ask for your help. My planet is under siege. The dark planet Flamous has taken everything over. I need your help. They have taken the life of my son as well." She explained.
"When were you married to have a son?" Qui-Gon questioned. "Or wait you don't mean."
"Yes my friend. They have taken the life of our son Hexis." The entire room stood in shock as the news just revealed. No one said a word.
"Qui-Gon what is she talking about?" Obi-Wan asked.
"She speaks the truth." He knelt down in front of Obi-Wan. "Fifteen years ago the was a party to celebrate our knighthood. We both were knighted on the same day. We were best friends and we were in love. Our son was conceived that night. That was when she left." The room grew silent. No one move in order not to break the awkward silence of the air.
Ok I really haven't had the time to finish typing the fic but I'll try to get as much up late as I can.
Pleas send reviews!!