hello people its killerbee12 this is my first fanfict so plz comment on where i messed up

you always mess up fruit loop

me: "who you calling fruit loop duck face"

sauske: "what did you just say!"

me: "you heard me dont make me call sakura in here"

sauske gets overtaking in fright "no anything but that"

me: "oh sakura a certain boy is here"

in the distance "SAUSKE!"

sauske: "DAMN YOU KILLER!"

a pink thing thing flys by me and tackles sauske

me: "hehehehe i dont own trouble chocolate or naru-"

"did you say chocalate"

me: "aw man i run away'

caocao: "get back here with my chocolate", he screams while running after me

me: "i dont have chocolateI"

we run of into the distances

naruto walks in "woah for a author he can run". "anyway ill take over killerbee". "killbee12 dosent own naruto or trouble chocolate they are own by there own companies on with the fic"

() mental talk
() author talk
justsu or spell
kuruma talk
flashback

CHAPTER 1

a new world

naruto looks dead at obito with hatred this man alone has defeat every ninja excluding him ( sorry sauske lovers naruto is facing him alone in this one) "we need to finish this kit". ("right kurama"), naruto answers back, naruto pores all his chakra into this one justsu. ("kurama you ready"). "hell yeah kit", he answers back tailed beast rasengun he chargers obito. "its useless you cant touch me", obito anwsers. kamui he teleports away from naruto and naruto attack crashes into the ground and causes a massive earthquake. (seriously who idea was it to make him the most op charcter in here) "i told you", obito says "you cant hit me". naruto smiles and poofs into smoke. "what" obito says. "you where wrong" obito turns around "tailed-beast rasengun" naruto pushes it into obito's stomach and it explodes and a tear appears in the dimenstion and starts to suck naruto in "no"! sakura screams and runs to naruto. sauske sees sakura running to naruto and he sees a tear sucking naruto in he limps to him "naruto you idiot", it sucks team 7 in and the tears vanishes. team 7 isnt in there universe anymore

naruto wakes up and rises up "(where am i)" he asked himself and looks around and sees sauske and sakura in beds then naruto hears a door opening and lays back down time for some eavsdropping and pretends hes sleep the door opens and naruto hears two men walk in then they start talking. "huh there still asleep", said the youngest. "yes no thanks to you", said a older man. "what did i do"? the youger man asked, "you sneezed during a spell again caocao"!, said the older man. "huh a spell" naruto says to himself. "well im sorry you shouldnt have left a bar of chocolate laying around again", ghana! naruto rises up unable to stand it anymore. "oh so your awake". "yep and just who are you guys", naruto asked. "im ghana an the boy behind me is my student caocao the most ungratful person in the magic world". "hey" caocao says. "can you tell how you ended up in my classroom mister" "naruto, naruto uzumaki kohona number one knucklehead ninja", he says smiling. "well mister naruto uzumaki can you tell me how you got here"' ghana asked. (he shouldnt have said that)

2 hours of explaining later

"...and that is how i got here" he looks at them to find them asleep he clears his throat and they both wake up "i wasnt sleep i was resting my eyes", they both say at the same time. "yea sure you where". "so you where fighting this obito guy and you did a really strong move and caused a tear in the dimenstion",ghana said. pretty much though my move isnt that powerful i dont think" naruto answers. ghana looks dead at caocao, "what caocao", asked. "you see you caused him to be here you buffoon", what caocao and naruto exclaim. "you cant be serious naruto" asked. let me tell how it happen it was yesterday around 3:00 pm when i decided i was going to teach caocao a teleporting spell...

flashback

caocao im going to teach a very hard spell-" caocao giggles ,"you said hard" "enough caocao" ghana countines "you need to get serious about this". "i am going to teach a very hared spell call teleportion. "you need to watch and please for the love of the all might dont sneeze again" ghana said. i wont make any promises", caocao answered" (sigh he is a real pain in the ass) (you dont say) "anyway here is the circle i drew", caocao looks down and sees the circle . now dont do anything to break the circle got it". "yea sure", caocao answered. "momo del gato "ghana begins to chant caocao sits in a chair and hears something break and sees a chocalate bar in the seat and he smiles and he picks it up and eats it. (oh boy this isnt going to end well) then caocao starts to walk around drunk (oh and FYI he gets drunk off chocolate just to clear that up) "gogo you gita", ghana countines. he sees the circle and his noise starts iching and he sneezes. and it blows away a part of the circle "momo teleport-" "nooooooo! caocao you did it again", ghana exclaimed a bright light engulfs the room and a explosion happens and it sends them flying into the wall "caocao im going to kill you" he falls to the ground and caocao falls down into some chairs "huh" ghana notices a group of kids around caocao age laying in the half circle. he sees there in bad shape and picks two of them up and looks at the third and sees the boy has whiskers like a fox", caocao grab the blond one and go to the infirmary. caocao gets out of the pile of chairs and walks over to the boy and picks him "boy your heavy", he says while he struggles to carry him. they make it to the nurses station and drops them off and ghana says "can you take care of them till i get back, i have to deal with someone" he looks at caocao with a evil face caocao screams like a girl and runs get "back here CAOCAO"

flashback end

"...and so thats how you came here", ghana smiles. HE DID WHAT someone exclaims and something pink flys past naruto and ghana and grabs caocao and starts beating him "you punch punch "sent punch punch "me to a another dimenstion" "wow sakura calm down he didint meant to", naruto said. "oh did he", the now named sakura said. he has a a problem with chocolate he gets drunk from the stuff (really now i thought he got high) sakura stop hitting him the blacked haired one rises up and glares at ghana with distrust. well now that you are all up how about we go get something to eat im buying", ghana said. naruto light up can it be ramen sure it can yes naruto raises his fist into the air at the same time caocao does. well lets go.

finally first chapter done yay

oh will you come off it already

me: sauske dont make me call sakura agai

sauske: no dont i beg of you

Me: okay well now that we hav-

oh can i be with papaya in the next chapter plz

oh no plz dont a man in a black cape appears out of nowhere

me: i wont papaya and big-bang i must follow trouble chocolate storyline

big-bang: okay

everyone except sauske: bye bye now