Okay, this is my story. As you can see, this is my FIRST story so GO EASY ON ME!!
By the way, I need to first know what you think of the story. If i get 5 yes's, then i will do this story!
Akakiri no Sakura Yuuki Sakura
"talking''
'thoughts'
'demons'
Konoha
The trees ruffled slightly while the wind breezed past. Laughter droned through the evening sky. A group of kids around the ages of 5-6 ran around and around trying to catch each other. While the kids played, a pair of lonely eyes watched them play.
The pair of eyes belonged to a blond-haired boy with light-blue azure eyes by the name of Uzumaki Naruto, other known as the Nine-Tailed Fox.
'That looks like fun...' thought Naruto.
'Then why don't you join? If they refuse then we'll just rip them limp by limp!'
'NO! They already hate me enough, I don't want to create a massacre!'
'Tch...you'r too generous...why am I even in your mind? Never mind that! Why am I being controlled by you!?'
'I dunno? You can leave for all I care! Then maybe I won't be hated as much!'
'Naa...without me, you wouldn't have survived with all the ninja assassins out for you! Besides, you have a lot of food here in your mind. KEEP THINKING OF FOOD!'
'Eto...'Anime sweat-drop
With the group of kids
"Bill-board brow! You're it!" Screamed a blond as she tapped a pink-haired girl on the back.
"Not for long Ino-pig! I'm coming to get you!" The pink-haired girl replied.
After a bit of chasing, the pink-haired girl finally came within a foot reach of the blond. Just about when she was about to tap the blond back, she spotted another blond-haired boy a few meters ahead. When she was distracted with the boy, the blond got away.
"Not bad Forehead! But not good enough to catch me!"
"Why did you stop Sakura?" asked a brown-haired boy with a 'I rather be sleeping' kind of look.
"Um...no reason Shikamaru-kun, I was just um...tired" replied the pink-haired girl with the name of Sakura.
"Right...Can we play somethin' else? How about Ninja Mission?"
"Sure but we need one more person to make the team even." replied a girl with two buns.
"Hey guys? I have to go to the eh...BATHROOM! Ya, bathroom, I'll be back in a sec!" Without waiting for a reply, she darted towards the direction of the blond-haired boy.
"Gee, she's really strange..." said a 'pleasently plump' boy who spoke with a mouthful of chips.
"No kidding Chouji..." replied the blond "Well then...YOU'RE IT!" shouted the blond as she tapped Chouji on the shoulder.
"Aww man, you know that I need to wait 30 minutes after I eat!"
With Naruto
Sigh 'Just once I would like to feel what it's like to have friends.'
'Maybe if you were meaner you would be able to ha—'
The demon was cut off by a a shadow coming towards him. As the shadow got closer, Naruto became more intense.
"What? Who's there?" Asked Naruto.
"Ano...Eto...why are you sitting here all alone? Why aren't you with your family or friends?" Asked Sakura.
At first, Naruto was surprised at her tone of voice. Didn't she know who he is? Isn't she afraid? Maybe she is just distracting him from assasins! Well, he wasn't going to take any chances.
"Please go away! You don't want to get involved with me!" Pleaded Naruto.
"W-what? I was just going to ask if you would want to come play with us!" Shouted the very confused Sakura.
"But...I c-can't! I shouldn't c-come close to y-you!" Stattered Naruto.
"Don't be shy! Come on!!" Without waiting for a reply again, she gently grabbed his wrist not too hard but hard enough for him to not escape. "Let's GOO!"
