AN: I had this idea after I read Ben 10: new experiences. If you read it don't ask me why it inspired me. Also you might notice that the names come from valve games sometimes, or that they might have inspired the design in my head. The 28 dimensions thing I was told that by a physics grad. But if anyone wants to correct me don't hesitate. And the exoskeleton is not inspired by crysis, that is the name of these things.
Ben 10: the portal paradigm
the ball of energy clung to his fingers with wavy patterns of grey slowly swirling around the surface , not that this mattered, it was simply the dispersal of the energy into the surroundings via the kinetic drift, this again didn't matter. He held it quite carefully weighing up the odds, it was quite likely to fail, but when you were up against him in hub one most things were likely to fail. Finally he sighed and threw the ball of energy at the floor, immediately the ball shed parts of itself, but when it hit the floor the black suit he was wearing lit up, but this was only for a few seconds as he sunk into the portal that had opened up, he fell about two feet and landed like he had been taught, with the exoskeleton taking the strain. When he got up he looked around, the shadow dimension was the same as it always had been, so now he set off at a leisurely pace, since the dimension wasn't connected the 4th dimension (time.)(AN I once saw an advert for a bob the builder film in 4d ?) he could stay in here for ever and never take more than a second. Soon he reached the perimeter of the main base, or at least that was what the intra-dimensional GPS system told him, which was all that he had to guide him through the bland grey and black environment. Finally he had breached the outer perimeter of hub one and was still completely unconcerned he trundled through reception and made his way through the rabbit warren underneath to find the clone vats, pulling out the explosive charges but careful not to set the time, while the bomb itself was relatively easy to reassemble once back in real space, the timer was another matter entirely, it could go off immediately or never or any where in between, so it was important that he set them immediately after coming back into real space, he concentrated for a second and the familiar black ball appeared in his hand he threw it on the ground and a portal opened up, which was actually little more than a forced opening between dimensions. This time he landed quite gently next to a cloning vat, however the quantum distortion when he reappeared on the normal plane was still slightly disorienting and he waited a few minutes before setting the charges and placing them around the vat, but when he was ready to leave he heard a low chuckle and saw a shiny metal shoot down from the ceiling enclosing the space. After that he knew it was hopeless, the he heard the clanging of heavy metal boots and he knew his time was up, the clanging got nearer and nearer and then he was there, the ruler of earth. Even so he stood defiant and summoned a ball of portal energy in his right hand and screamed as he threw it down
"you'll never catch me alive Tenneson" then a miracle happened, he went through the portal. Ben shouted at his marines before jumping into the portal himself.
AN so how was it? plz review