Hey y'all! Here's my songfic! Another one! Out of… two! Yah… so it's about Bluestar (but really called Bluefur) and Oakheart. It's about Blue fur when she's sending her kits off to Riverclan.


The old elder coughed out "With the feeling of hunger in my stomach"

A warrior, exhausted from work called "With the salt of my sweat on my brow"

"Great Starclan on high," they both wailed

"Can you hear your people cry?

Help us now
This dark hour..."
All of Thunderclan sobbed
"Hear our call
Deliver us
Rulers of all
Remember us, here in this burning land
Deliver us
There's a land you promised us
Deliver us to the promised land..."

"Deliver us"

Bluefur, a queen in the nursery, looked lovingly at all three of her kits, Stormkit, Mistykit, and Mosskit. "My kits, I have nothing I can give
But this chance that you may live
I pray we'll meet again
If Starclan will deliver us"
All of Thunderclan sang again
"Hear our prayer
Deliver us
From despair
These moons of hunger grow
Too cruel to stand
Deliver us
There's a land you promised us
Deliver us
Out of starvation and
Deliver us to a prey-filled land..."

"Deliver us"

Bluefur knew what she had to do to save her kits from their current life of hunger. She talked to the kits' father, Oakheart. He agreed to take them to Riverclan, to be safe. The river was flooding. . And Oakheart was struggling to get across the river. It was hard enough by himself, but what would it be like with the kits?


"Hush now, my babies,"
Bluefur sang softly.
"Be still, loves, don't cry
Sleep as you're rocked by the stream
Sleep and remember my last lullaby
So I'll be with you when you dream"
Oakheart came across from the Riverclan border. He gently picked both Stormkit and Mistykit up in his mouth.

"I'll be back for Mosskit later on." He promised. Bluefur watched anxiously as her kits went over the raging river

"River, o river" Bluefur yowled
"Flow gently for me
Such precious cargo you bear
Do you know somewhere
They can live free?
River, deliver them there..."
Bluefur continued to watch her mate and her two kits cross the river. Mosskit let out a couple pitiful wails. He had always been the runt. He shook and rolled around on the river's bank, until he suddenly stopped. And moved no more. Mosskit looked on at his mother and siblings from Starclan. He started singing,

"Siblings, you're safe now
And safe may you stay
For I have a prayer just for you:
Sister and brother
Remember out mother's song

One day, be loyal to her, too..."Thunderclan mournfully sang, harmonized by with all the other three clans

"Deliver us
Send Fire to save our clan!
And deliver us to the prey-filled land"

Out of all the clans, one voice sounded stronger than the rest.
"Deliver us!"
Bluefur cried

I don't think I like this one. I liked the idea, but it was really hard for me to follow after I wrote it. Oh wellsies! Tell me what you think? The purple button utterly loathes you, but you can review anyway!

Lefy the INSANE!