Colgate is a unicorn who had always wanted to be a dentist in all her life. But this story may change her life forever.
Colgate was in jail for killing many ponies with cavities. She was angered by her obsession of dental care,which made her into a psycho serial killer who hid a knife which she uses when her clients didn't pay her. "Don't worry,Colgate. We'll get out of here someday!" Said Berry Punch,arrested because of manipulating stallions by making them looking at her (ewwwwww) flank. "Thanks for cheering me up,Berry." The light blue unicorn said.
Colgate still remembers when the horrible prank started. It all started 1 year ago. It was April fools day, Berry Punch was drunk (as usual) and when she wasn't drunk anymore, she decided to prank Colgate,her roommate. She searched a website called eww*. (WARNING:not a website on earth's Internet) and printed an invitation to join dental lover's brand new club. Colgate returned from Twilight's library to read books about oral hygiene. When she got home, she saw the fake mail and read it. Berry didn't realize dental lovers club was real. Faster than light, Colgate took her saddle bag and ran to the dental lovers club.
Chapter 1 is done! Please comment on the story.
*eww= Equestria Wide Web