Hi everyone! This is my first post on this site so tell me what you think! It's my first time ever writing fanfiction so please no flames but constructive criticism would be appreciated!

Who knew of such perfection in a smile?

Such radiance in a single tear?

Until I ripped it away from you with my ignorant deception

The world of our innocence is but a distant memory now

Your touch a metallic dream

But I promised to turn back time for you

We'll keep running 'til we reach the heaven we don't believe in

Grasping for an imaginary ray of light

That burns red with the blood we shed

Guilt sweeps through the wings we've built together

Crushing them with the help of the blazing sun

But I won't let you fall

Let our passion be your savior

Flying us over this sinful night

And until we reach the morning sky

I'll be your fullmetal dream