"Ug I hate school." I mumbled to myself when I was done with my homework I yawned 'wow I'm tired' I thought I'll go take a nap. I went upstairs to my room and climbed into bed soon I drifted off to sleep.
"wow O. and T. thanks for the bracelet it's so pretty" I told my two best friends Angel and Oni. They had just given me a ruby red and sky blue bracelet made out of croucheted yarn for my 9th birthday.
"I should go home now see you tomarrow"
"Ok see you tomarrow" the twins said together, then I left the library. Brr I shivered I should have brought a coat it was late-november and a storm was comming I only lived 2 blocked away from the library so I could walk home alone. The blizzard came in sooner than expected so I sought safety in a tool shed I didn't know that it was Samual G.'s shed until he found me curled up and shivering in a corner he was so mad at me that his usually green tinted skin was almost as red as his thinning hair. He told me to meet him in the attic of the old stone building on saturday or he'ld do something bad to my parents and twin brother Zeik. When I went home that night I was kind of worried I didn't know wsat he had planned but I would find out on saturday.
I awoke with a start that was the farthest I've ever gotten in a dream. I looked at the old yarn bracelet on my arm and felt really sad, that saturday was the last time I saw my best friend Oni. She had followed me to the abandoned builting she was so sweet she didn't deserve her fate I pulled out my picture book and reread the note I had written on the inner cover 'it's funny oni means demon in japanese and my friend Oni is so sweet and tenshi is Angel in japanese Angel is more Oni I think their parents got the names wrong'. And to think that in was only 5 years ago I was crying at the memories so to calm myself I started a new file on LoZ:OoT. I knew imedatly something was wrong when the screen went red green and blue a woman on each color. They seemed to look at me it made me nervous so I grabbed the bag beside me it held all of my CDs, my CD player, a mini photo album, some notes from Angel and Oni, and a few other things the women nodded and I saw a flash then everything went black.
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