Losing Her, a beyblade fanfic

My second fanfic! Well I deleted my first cos it was crap lol. So this counts as a first. Honest opnions welcome so I can improve.

Anyway this is just a oneshot about how Tyson feels about Hilary and losing her. Sorry but it's going to be short.

Disclaimer: I don't own Beyblade or any of the characters.

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Seeing her sitting at the sidelines when I challenge beybladers to a beybattle.

Hearing her call my name in her soft, scared voice.

She shouts out things that are wrong in a beybattle.

It makes me laugh.

Her big brown eyes watch as I make mistakes.

The tears forming as she worries about me.

Turning round and catching her staring at me.

In her eyes all I see is love.

Love that is not for me.

But...

For my opponent...

With his two toned hair.

And crimson eyes.

He looks at me.

He smirks.

I fall in defeat.

As he takes my love away from me.

I have lost the battle.

And I have lost her.

Crap I know! But please review because I want to know what you think to my first fanfic!!