Yay! Okay, so i finally fixed up some issues that were pointed out. Hopefully i will have a new chapter up soon, yay for more revision! -Sigh- maybe i really should read the dictionary. Yeah, i even spelled the wrong desert....and now i'm stuck with the image of Cloud riding around on cake. Oh and i know i didn't fix everything that was pointed out, that's because some things were suppose to be grammatically incorrect....weird i know.

Stepping outside the door, Cloud noticed that the day was like every other. That being gray and cold, like his soul. He walked over to Fenrir, putting his deliveries in his secret storage compartment and quickly mounting the bike.

Though he loved to ride his bike, it sometimes caused his mind to wander and that wasn't really a good thing when it came to Cloud. He drove through the desert, thinking all the while of his horrible past and his inability to save anyone he cared about.

He sighed when he realized that he was only twenty-three and in his short life he had already been picked on by his entire town, rejected his dream, lost his entire village to the man he admired, lost his mother, he had been experimented on, lost his best friend, lost his memories, lost the girl he loved, and had now contracted a horrible disease that had no cure and killed anyone who had it slowly and painfully.

He smashed his head against his handle bars in angst, causing the bike to swerve a bit. He managed to take control once again and continued on his way.

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After he finished his last delivery he stopped for a second to check his phone. He had apparently gotten some messages, and the stupid thing would not stop beeping until said messages where heard.

Flipping open the phone in annoyance, he quickly listened to the first message. It was from Tifa.

"Cloud you ass, pick up the damn phone for once! Anywho, Reno called and he wants you to go see him. Stop giving out this number! " - BEEP, "you have no new messages."

Cloud blinked at his phone a couple of times. He considered throwing it away but decided against it. He quickly put it in his pocket. Fastening his goggles over his eyes, he got ready to go. Suddenly his arm felt like it was being stabbed with a very large and very sharp needle. Cringing he gave an annoyed sigh, as angsty thoughts filled his mind. He tried to ignore his arm and started to head off to find Reno.

Unfortunately he was interrupted by a surprise attack. Monsters seemed to form out of no where as two men on motorbikes quickly began gaining on him. One looked like a women; the other had his hair styled similar to a troll doll.

He blinked in confusion as he quickly pulled out his sword, fighting off the viscous animals. As he sliced at the creatures, the troll hair guy came swerving up next to him.

"Where's mother?" he asked, swinging his arm at Cloud. Because Cloud would definitely be able to answer him if he was hit and sent flying off his bike at such an amazing speed. Luckily Cloud dodged, swerving his bike to get away.

Bullets began ricocheting off Fenrir as the feminine man pulled up beside Cloud.

"We know you hid her brother," he said, firing repeatedly at him.

Cloud dodged and swerved with all his confused might, though his arm was still acting up and it cost him his sword as he watched it fly off in a random direction. Suddenly the feminine one somehow did a front wheelie and fired a direct shot at Clouds head, point blank range….and missed?

No, Cloud had luckily remembered his bulletproof goggles that day, though now they were lost as they went flying off his face from the force of the impact. A cut stung just above his eye, but he ignored it.

He gripped his arm, as pain flared up it. He was now driving with one hand. Swerving some more, he suddenly became surrounded by monsters. Looking around for some sort of opening he found none and wondered for a second if he was going to die like this, completely and utterly confused. But as quickly as they had come, they were gone. The two odd looking men smirked and drove off.

Cloud brought his bike to a stop, skidding across the ground. He looked back and saw yet another man standing on the cliff giving him odd looks. Cloud couldn't tell if he was trying to be maniacal or seductive as one thought floated through his thoroughly confused mind:

'What the f---?'

WOO!! okay, so that chapters done. I really hope the unfortunate fool who reads this enjoys it. I know i'm not the greatest at spelling or grammar, so if you catch anything, please tell me. I will change it as quickly as possible. This story may or may not be continued. If i get even one review then i'll continue it, well most likely. Though i may still continue even if i don't get a review for my own enjoyment.

Heh, i'm trying to follow the advent children movie as closely as possible by watching the movie as i go. Mind you, it's the complete addition, which i absolutely love because it has more of my favourite ff character......not too much more though XD. I love Zack ;-; it's really not fair that he died, and so close to Midgar too! WAHHHH!! Also, i do not know if i got Cloud's age right, i took a wild stab at what it might be, but if anyone knows for sure that it's wrong, you can correct me and i will change it.

Thanks for reading :)Meeve(: