Here is a better summary. Stanley and Zero are found in the wrong place at
the wrong time. They are accused of murder and are sent to another
correctional facility camp. There, they meet Tammy(looks like a younger
version of Theresa Lopez-Fitzgerald from Passions), Queen of the Holes,
Brenda(Hilary Duff), Jared(a younger version of Fox Crane or whatever from
Passions),and the twins, Veronica(Tamera Moury), and Vixen(Tia Moury).
Tammy's concieted, Jared's a jerk, Veronica's a loud mouth and slight
busybody, and Vixen is quiet. Very quiet. She doesn't like answering
questions, especialy Jared's, and she just found out she had a sister, let
alone a twin. Stanley and Zero were wrongly convicted and now they plan to
prvoe thier not guilty. But as they plan to escape, a relationship evolvs
between Brenda and Stanley. And Jared becomes vindictive when his ex falls
for another(his ex is Tammy. Who the other? Wait and c!)...PLEASE R&R! NOT
BORING! e-mail me!
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A/N-i made this up. after camp green lake was shut down, all the boys in tent D were sent to this camp. okay. Thanx 4 ur time. -ZeroZeroni ____________________________________________________________________________ __________
PART ONE: You Are Now Entering Whistling Winds Correctional Facility Camp
It was wrong. It wasn't fair. It was inhuman. Accused of manslaughter? A boy who used to be obese and a boy who was as short as half a shovel? no way. but it was true. Stanley Yelnats and Hector "Zero" Zeroni were accused of murder. They appeared i court, faced a judge, and were convicted. They ha d achoice, however. Either twenty years in prison, or a two year stay at Whistling Winds Correctional Camp for Boys and Girls. After Stanley and Zero's last stay at a correctional camp, they were reluctant. But the judge had promised them a different kind of correction and charecter building. Stanley and Zero agree. Now, they were on a bus to Whistling Winds. They were locked to thier seats, thier ankles and wrists in metal cuffs. Stanley looked out the window. He saw trees of green zoom by, combining and looking like a blur. He sighed and tuned his head. He looked at his friend, Zero, who's head was to one side as he slept. The bus suddeny came to a stop. Stanley and Zero lurched forward, and Zero was jerked awake. "We're here, boys and girls," said the driver gruffly. On the bus were ten kids. Five boys and five girls. Three girls looked sick and terrified, one stared into space, and one looked bored. The other three boys were just being boys. Not worried at all. The driver stalked down the bus aisle and unlocked them one by one. "Go out in a single file line. No pushing," he added. That worked. The sick girls stampeded to the door, knocking the driver over, the daydreamer stepped over him, and the bored prissy Hispanic girl walked acroos him as he let out an "oof!" sound. The other boys ran over him as well. Stanley walked behind Zero, who avoided the driver. All ten of them walked down the stairs, and Zero tripped on his untied shoe lace and grabbed someone's arm as he fell off the bus. Stanley walked around him. "Hey, watch it, dummy!" said the person he had held on to. He stood up and brushed dirt off his pants and shirt and looked at the person. It was the girl who looked bored. "I said watch it," she repeated. "Sorry," said Zero. "You had better be," she said with an attitude. She had dark black hair, slanty brown eyes, and she wore blue eyes shadow and black eyeliner, making her eye lashes seem puffy. "I said sorry," said Zero. The girl's expression softened. "Hey, your new here, huh? So are the other nine," she added. "Your not?" asked Stanley. She shook her head. This is my third time here," she said. "My name is Tammy. What's yours?" "I'm Stanley. This is my friend, Hec--" "My name is Zero," he cut in. They each shook hands. "So, what exactly do we do here?" asked Stanley. "Well...take a look around. And you do the math," she said. Stanley and Zero looked over Tammy's shoulder, past the gate. "No way," said Stanley as he saw millions and thousands of holes. big holes, little holes, deep holes, shallow holes. Everywhere. Across the vast plain. "No," said Zero. "I'm not digging holes. No more holes," he said. He turned away slow at first, then fast and tried to get back on the bus. Stanley grabbed him and turned him back around. "No, we are staying. it won't be the same. There aren't snakes and lizards, and look, a lake! A real lake. Come on, we can do this," he said. Zero sighed. "Fine," he said. "But if it's the same, I'll never forgive you," he added. Before Stanley could respond, a man walked through the gate, a woman following him. He approached the new group and stopped and the woman stopped behind him. "Girls, boys, juevinile delinquits, welcome to Whistling Winds Correcetional Camp." He looked from one kid to another. He took a breath then continued. "You are here because, one way or another, you messed up. And don't blame this on the law. Face it buddy, you screwed up! And your here for whatever reason you did screw up." He stopped, looking at Tammy. He sighed, and began walking back and forth in front of them. "My name is Mr. Terrance(Matthew Perry, or as u might know him, Channler Bing from Friends). I will be assigning each of you to your lodge where you will stay while you are with us. So, you better get along with your bunkmats, cuz I'm not changing your lodge. Or if you say cabin." The woman(The lady that plays Keran on Will & Grace) behind him stayed silent. There was an uncomfortable moment of silence, where Tammy shifted her weight. "Do you all understand my directions? Or must I repeat myself because some little crack-head wasn't listening?" no one replied. "Good. Follow me." Mr. Terrance led them all to the holy plain, and the woman turned and went the opposite direction. Stanley looked back at her. She had cold eyes, kind of like the Warden of Camp Green Lake... Mr. Terrance stopped where Stanley, Zero, and Tammy saw shovels tossing dirt out of holes. They weren't visible, but there were people moving them. "Hey Veronica!" said Mr. Terrance to a hole. "Get up here and meet your new camp associates," he said. "Okay, sir!" said a voice in a hole. They saw the shovel dissapear and two hands lift a black girl out of the hole. She strieghtened up and brushed herself off. She, like all the other girls, wore a baby blue tee and a baby blue skirt. But under her skirt was a pair of the same color capris. "Are these new recruits?" she asked. Mr. Terrance nodded. "introduce yourself. These three here are going to be in your co-ed group. Veronica, Stanley, um, Zero...er, meet each other," he said. "What about Tammy?" asked Stanley. Both Mr. Terrance and Veronica laughed. "Everyone already knows Tammy," veronica said. "Come on, kids," he said to the rest."Your over here." He led the other kids away to another part of the plain. "Hey Tammy, whats up?" asked Veronica. "Man, you only been here how long? And you already know I'm queen," said Tammy. "You only been out for three weeks!" "Yeah, I got busted trying to let a polar bear out of the zoo. I ran, tried to free some zebra and ostriches, but then they caught me. It was obvious since I was climbing a giraff," she said. "So where's that Vixen?" said Tammy. 'Vixen?" asked Stanley. "My twin sister," explained Veronica. "Oh, and you can call me Vee. We all have nicknames. Except Vixen. Tammy is Queen. Stanley, what are you gonn be?" Vee asked. He shrugged. "Well, till u think of one, you can be Stan. And you?" she asked Zero. Zero said nothing. "Is he deaf? Are you deaf?" He stayed silent. "Just call him Zero," said Stan. "Okay then." She turned to a hole farther away behind her's. "HEY VIX!!!" she screamed. The shovel in that hole quit moving. "Come and meet our new buds!" A loud sigh of exahsperation emmited from the hole as the shovel was tossed out of the hole. A girl hoisted herself out of the hole and walked toward them. "Stan, Zero, this is my twin sister, Vixen." Vixen said nothing. She looked at Queen and smiled slightly. "Hey, Vix." She nodded. Then she looked at Stan. Her smile stayed, although it was strained. Her eyes seemed to expand and look through him, kinda like Zero's. Vixen's eyes moved onto Zero, and her smile vanished. Her eye brows went up slightly. "Hey." ____________________________________________________________________________ __________
A/N-this is just the first chapter in part one. There will be three parts, just like in the book Holes. This will also be a double chapter. It includes chapter one(above) and two(below). So, chapter two on the selection on the site is realy three. and three is four, and so on and so forth. Hope u like it so far. Scroll down farther for the second chapter. then, review and tell me what u think! And don't forget 2 e-mail little old me! And if u do e-mail me, make sure your subject says 'i read ur fic!'. Okay. Thanx! -ZeroZeroni ____________________________________________________________________________ __________
2. untitled till i think of a title.
Vixen stood in her hole, sweaty and hot, digging faster than before. A clod of dirt came out of nowhere and hit her in the head. "Hey," she said. Her voice was weak. She jumped up and down to see who had hit her. "I'm really sorry, Vixen," they said. It was Stan. His hole wasn't even six inches deep yet. "Your not upset are you?" She said nothing. What a stupid question. But she answered it anyway. Only because he was new. "No, I am not upset. Now leave me alone." Stan was confused. He had hardley spoken to the girl! Why was she so touchy with him? Vixen sighed as she shoveled another pile of dirt onto her pile. She looked over to where Vee was. She was nearly done and already so was Queen. Queen was really fast! Probebly because she was so small. And expirenced. And small. Did I mention small? Vixen looked around. Speaking of small, she thought. Her eyes landed on the new kid who was rather small. What was his name? It was Zero, wasn't it? Vixen saw that he was also fast. But how could he be so fast? He didn't have any past experience here, did he? Vixen made a 'hm' sound. He was going way too fast. He needed to pace himself or he would pass out. Vixen knew that. "Ow," Vixen heard. She then realized it was her who had said it. Her hand suddenly had a sharp pain in it. She ignored it, but it slightly grew worse. She looked down at her hand which was grasping the shovel's wooden shaft. She gasped slightly when she saw a red stain seeping out from under her hand. She took her hand off and looked at it. There was a red liquid coming from the middle of her hand. It was blood. But there was no wound to be found on her hand. "Not again," she whispered. Over where Vee was digging, she felt the same pain in her opposite hand.There was blood on hers, too. "Oh, no!" she said. "Why does this keep happening?" she hissed to herself. Stan looked up. He had heard the clunk of a shovel falling next to him. He looked at Zero, who was standing there, staring at his hands in horror. They were bleeding, too. "What in the world--?" Vixen wiped the blood off on her skirt and it was gone. But then it seeped through her undamaged skin again. She growled irritatdly and wiped rhem again. Vee tried licking it off, but remembered her hands were covered in dirt. With a small 'eww!' she spit the dirt out. Zero just stood there. Seeing something was obviously messed up, Stan humped out of his now two foot hole and walked over to Zero's hole. He jumped in(Zero's was about four feet deep) the hole. "Hey, what's wrong?" he said. Zero held out his hands. They hadn't stopped bleeding yet. "Woah! Did you get a really bad cut or something? From a splinter in the shovel?" said Stan. Zero wiped away the blood and held his hands out again quickly, so Stan could see before they began bleeding again. "There isn't any cut," said Stan. "I don't know what happened," said Zero. "I just started bleeding." Hey had stopped bleeding now, and so had Vee and Vixen. "That was wierd," said Stan. Zero nodded. "No kidding," he said. Vixen was glad it was over. She hated it when that happened. So did Vee. But she didn't seem as nervous about it. But Vee was like that. She wasn't like Vixen. She didn't take caution. Not with events, actions...or people. Vixen didn't trust. Not anyone. She decided she never would. Not again. ____________________________________________________________________________ __________ Oooooohhhhh....spooky! What was up with that? Oh, and the thing with the bleeding, it's a real disease. It happens rarely. Some people will bleed in the places Jesus Christ was cut and scarred when he was crucified. it happens every so many days or somethin like that. I forget. I gotta look it up. This in the fic is similar, but I made it up. Well, keep lookin back for the next chapter! Thanx for wasting your life. -ZeroZeroni
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A/N-i made this up. after camp green lake was shut down, all the boys in tent D were sent to this camp. okay. Thanx 4 ur time. -ZeroZeroni ____________________________________________________________________________ __________
PART ONE: You Are Now Entering Whistling Winds Correctional Facility Camp
It was wrong. It wasn't fair. It was inhuman. Accused of manslaughter? A boy who used to be obese and a boy who was as short as half a shovel? no way. but it was true. Stanley Yelnats and Hector "Zero" Zeroni were accused of murder. They appeared i court, faced a judge, and were convicted. They ha d achoice, however. Either twenty years in prison, or a two year stay at Whistling Winds Correctional Camp for Boys and Girls. After Stanley and Zero's last stay at a correctional camp, they were reluctant. But the judge had promised them a different kind of correction and charecter building. Stanley and Zero agree. Now, they were on a bus to Whistling Winds. They were locked to thier seats, thier ankles and wrists in metal cuffs. Stanley looked out the window. He saw trees of green zoom by, combining and looking like a blur. He sighed and tuned his head. He looked at his friend, Zero, who's head was to one side as he slept. The bus suddeny came to a stop. Stanley and Zero lurched forward, and Zero was jerked awake. "We're here, boys and girls," said the driver gruffly. On the bus were ten kids. Five boys and five girls. Three girls looked sick and terrified, one stared into space, and one looked bored. The other three boys were just being boys. Not worried at all. The driver stalked down the bus aisle and unlocked them one by one. "Go out in a single file line. No pushing," he added. That worked. The sick girls stampeded to the door, knocking the driver over, the daydreamer stepped over him, and the bored prissy Hispanic girl walked acroos him as he let out an "oof!" sound. The other boys ran over him as well. Stanley walked behind Zero, who avoided the driver. All ten of them walked down the stairs, and Zero tripped on his untied shoe lace and grabbed someone's arm as he fell off the bus. Stanley walked around him. "Hey, watch it, dummy!" said the person he had held on to. He stood up and brushed dirt off his pants and shirt and looked at the person. It was the girl who looked bored. "I said watch it," she repeated. "Sorry," said Zero. "You had better be," she said with an attitude. She had dark black hair, slanty brown eyes, and she wore blue eyes shadow and black eyeliner, making her eye lashes seem puffy. "I said sorry," said Zero. The girl's expression softened. "Hey, your new here, huh? So are the other nine," she added. "Your not?" asked Stanley. She shook her head. This is my third time here," she said. "My name is Tammy. What's yours?" "I'm Stanley. This is my friend, Hec--" "My name is Zero," he cut in. They each shook hands. "So, what exactly do we do here?" asked Stanley. "Well...take a look around. And you do the math," she said. Stanley and Zero looked over Tammy's shoulder, past the gate. "No way," said Stanley as he saw millions and thousands of holes. big holes, little holes, deep holes, shallow holes. Everywhere. Across the vast plain. "No," said Zero. "I'm not digging holes. No more holes," he said. He turned away slow at first, then fast and tried to get back on the bus. Stanley grabbed him and turned him back around. "No, we are staying. it won't be the same. There aren't snakes and lizards, and look, a lake! A real lake. Come on, we can do this," he said. Zero sighed. "Fine," he said. "But if it's the same, I'll never forgive you," he added. Before Stanley could respond, a man walked through the gate, a woman following him. He approached the new group and stopped and the woman stopped behind him. "Girls, boys, juevinile delinquits, welcome to Whistling Winds Correcetional Camp." He looked from one kid to another. He took a breath then continued. "You are here because, one way or another, you messed up. And don't blame this on the law. Face it buddy, you screwed up! And your here for whatever reason you did screw up." He stopped, looking at Tammy. He sighed, and began walking back and forth in front of them. "My name is Mr. Terrance(Matthew Perry, or as u might know him, Channler Bing from Friends). I will be assigning each of you to your lodge where you will stay while you are with us. So, you better get along with your bunkmats, cuz I'm not changing your lodge. Or if you say cabin." The woman(The lady that plays Keran on Will & Grace) behind him stayed silent. There was an uncomfortable moment of silence, where Tammy shifted her weight. "Do you all understand my directions? Or must I repeat myself because some little crack-head wasn't listening?" no one replied. "Good. Follow me." Mr. Terrance led them all to the holy plain, and the woman turned and went the opposite direction. Stanley looked back at her. She had cold eyes, kind of like the Warden of Camp Green Lake... Mr. Terrance stopped where Stanley, Zero, and Tammy saw shovels tossing dirt out of holes. They weren't visible, but there were people moving them. "Hey Veronica!" said Mr. Terrance to a hole. "Get up here and meet your new camp associates," he said. "Okay, sir!" said a voice in a hole. They saw the shovel dissapear and two hands lift a black girl out of the hole. She strieghtened up and brushed herself off. She, like all the other girls, wore a baby blue tee and a baby blue skirt. But under her skirt was a pair of the same color capris. "Are these new recruits?" she asked. Mr. Terrance nodded. "introduce yourself. These three here are going to be in your co-ed group. Veronica, Stanley, um, Zero...er, meet each other," he said. "What about Tammy?" asked Stanley. Both Mr. Terrance and Veronica laughed. "Everyone already knows Tammy," veronica said. "Come on, kids," he said to the rest."Your over here." He led the other kids away to another part of the plain. "Hey Tammy, whats up?" asked Veronica. "Man, you only been here how long? And you already know I'm queen," said Tammy. "You only been out for three weeks!" "Yeah, I got busted trying to let a polar bear out of the zoo. I ran, tried to free some zebra and ostriches, but then they caught me. It was obvious since I was climbing a giraff," she said. "So where's that Vixen?" said Tammy. 'Vixen?" asked Stanley. "My twin sister," explained Veronica. "Oh, and you can call me Vee. We all have nicknames. Except Vixen. Tammy is Queen. Stanley, what are you gonn be?" Vee asked. He shrugged. "Well, till u think of one, you can be Stan. And you?" she asked Zero. Zero said nothing. "Is he deaf? Are you deaf?" He stayed silent. "Just call him Zero," said Stan. "Okay then." She turned to a hole farther away behind her's. "HEY VIX!!!" she screamed. The shovel in that hole quit moving. "Come and meet our new buds!" A loud sigh of exahsperation emmited from the hole as the shovel was tossed out of the hole. A girl hoisted herself out of the hole and walked toward them. "Stan, Zero, this is my twin sister, Vixen." Vixen said nothing. She looked at Queen and smiled slightly. "Hey, Vix." She nodded. Then she looked at Stan. Her smile stayed, although it was strained. Her eyes seemed to expand and look through him, kinda like Zero's. Vixen's eyes moved onto Zero, and her smile vanished. Her eye brows went up slightly. "Hey." ____________________________________________________________________________ __________
A/N-this is just the first chapter in part one. There will be three parts, just like in the book Holes. This will also be a double chapter. It includes chapter one(above) and two(below). So, chapter two on the selection on the site is realy three. and three is four, and so on and so forth. Hope u like it so far. Scroll down farther for the second chapter. then, review and tell me what u think! And don't forget 2 e-mail little old me! And if u do e-mail me, make sure your subject says 'i read ur fic!'. Okay. Thanx! -ZeroZeroni ____________________________________________________________________________ __________
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Vixen stood in her hole, sweaty and hot, digging faster than before. A clod of dirt came out of nowhere and hit her in the head. "Hey," she said. Her voice was weak. She jumped up and down to see who had hit her. "I'm really sorry, Vixen," they said. It was Stan. His hole wasn't even six inches deep yet. "Your not upset are you?" She said nothing. What a stupid question. But she answered it anyway. Only because he was new. "No, I am not upset. Now leave me alone." Stan was confused. He had hardley spoken to the girl! Why was she so touchy with him? Vixen sighed as she shoveled another pile of dirt onto her pile. She looked over to where Vee was. She was nearly done and already so was Queen. Queen was really fast! Probebly because she was so small. And expirenced. And small. Did I mention small? Vixen looked around. Speaking of small, she thought. Her eyes landed on the new kid who was rather small. What was his name? It was Zero, wasn't it? Vixen saw that he was also fast. But how could he be so fast? He didn't have any past experience here, did he? Vixen made a 'hm' sound. He was going way too fast. He needed to pace himself or he would pass out. Vixen knew that. "Ow," Vixen heard. She then realized it was her who had said it. Her hand suddenly had a sharp pain in it. She ignored it, but it slightly grew worse. She looked down at her hand which was grasping the shovel's wooden shaft. She gasped slightly when she saw a red stain seeping out from under her hand. She took her hand off and looked at it. There was a red liquid coming from the middle of her hand. It was blood. But there was no wound to be found on her hand. "Not again," she whispered. Over where Vee was digging, she felt the same pain in her opposite hand.There was blood on hers, too. "Oh, no!" she said. "Why does this keep happening?" she hissed to herself. Stan looked up. He had heard the clunk of a shovel falling next to him. He looked at Zero, who was standing there, staring at his hands in horror. They were bleeding, too. "What in the world--?" Vixen wiped the blood off on her skirt and it was gone. But then it seeped through her undamaged skin again. She growled irritatdly and wiped rhem again. Vee tried licking it off, but remembered her hands were covered in dirt. With a small 'eww!' she spit the dirt out. Zero just stood there. Seeing something was obviously messed up, Stan humped out of his now two foot hole and walked over to Zero's hole. He jumped in(Zero's was about four feet deep) the hole. "Hey, what's wrong?" he said. Zero held out his hands. They hadn't stopped bleeding yet. "Woah! Did you get a really bad cut or something? From a splinter in the shovel?" said Stan. Zero wiped away the blood and held his hands out again quickly, so Stan could see before they began bleeding again. "There isn't any cut," said Stan. "I don't know what happened," said Zero. "I just started bleeding." Hey had stopped bleeding now, and so had Vee and Vixen. "That was wierd," said Stan. Zero nodded. "No kidding," he said. Vixen was glad it was over. She hated it when that happened. So did Vee. But she didn't seem as nervous about it. But Vee was like that. She wasn't like Vixen. She didn't take caution. Not with events, actions...or people. Vixen didn't trust. Not anyone. She decided she never would. Not again. ____________________________________________________________________________ __________ Oooooohhhhh....spooky! What was up with that? Oh, and the thing with the bleeding, it's a real disease. It happens rarely. Some people will bleed in the places Jesus Christ was cut and scarred when he was crucified. it happens every so many days or somethin like that. I forget. I gotta look it up. This in the fic is similar, but I made it up. Well, keep lookin back for the next chapter! Thanx for wasting your life. -ZeroZeroni